@Shadow - Everything looks good save for Perception, which as a Favored attribute runs 18 instead of 14. Outside of that, though, you're good.
@Re Z L - Sheet and background look solid. Take 10xp!
GSPs, remember that if you've got a Past Life, you need to have its Motivation and relevant Intimacies before you can make use of it.
(Cripes some of these characters are not people I'd care to run into in a dark alley all by my lonesome. :D)