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Offline Captain MalteseTopic starter

The words you NEVER use in a story.
« on: August 23, 2016, 05:22:34 PM »
"whines"

Offline dolt

Re: The words you NEVER use in a story.
« Reply #1 on: August 23, 2016, 07:24:29 PM »
"Farted"

Offline gaggedLouise

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Re: The words you NEVER use in a story.
« Reply #2 on: August 23, 2016, 09:15:40 PM »
"deathless" (meaning famous, known for ever) - though there was a book called The Deathless Story of the Titanic.  :D

Offline Captain MalteseTopic starter

Re: The words you NEVER use in a story.
« Reply #3 on: August 24, 2016, 02:11:36 AM »
"bored"

Offline Dark Despairs

Re: The words you NEVER use in a story.
« Reply #4 on: August 29, 2016, 08:25:48 PM »
Cunt, cum dumpster, pussy, vajayjay, etc. Basically all slang words.

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Re: The words you NEVER use in a story.
« Reply #5 on: August 29, 2016, 08:41:37 PM »
Anything that is too "medical;" Penis, Vagina, Cervix, Stomach, Semen, Ejaculate, etc.

Offline That One Dingus

Re: The words you NEVER use in a story.
« Reply #6 on: September 08, 2016, 08:00:26 PM »
"Dilapidated"

Don't know why, but it strikes me as too flowery.

Offline Captain MalteseTopic starter

Re: The words you NEVER use in a story.
« Reply #7 on: September 09, 2016, 07:57:24 AM »
"blushes"

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Re: The words you NEVER use in a story.
« Reply #8 on: September 09, 2016, 08:08:55 AM »
Basically each weird name for gentials. Everything else depends on the characters/stories.

Offline Captain MalteseTopic starter

Re: The words you NEVER use in a story.
« Reply #9 on: September 09, 2016, 08:41:10 AM »
"passive". Okay, I might use it but not on my own character.

Offline Blythe

Re: The words you NEVER use in a story.
« Reply #10 on: September 14, 2016, 03:41:37 PM »
"moist"

Offline Captain MalteseTopic starter

Re: The words you NEVER use in a story.
« Reply #11 on: September 14, 2016, 05:18:58 PM »
"snivel"

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Re: The words you NEVER use in a story.
« Reply #12 on: September 17, 2016, 02:10:33 AM »
Decidedly NSFW... Just throwing that out there.
Despite how easy it would be... Dick or Cock.

There are so many more interesting words! Shaft, rod, member, manhood... and if you want to talk dirty... Stick, meat, "throbbing, engorged flesh," etc. And if you want to be funny, just call it a "meat packing unit" like I do. ;D

Same goes for the female counterpart. I can't bring myself to use pussy. More interesting: entrance, channel, lips, folds... Dirty: slit, slot, hole, "tender, rippling, quivering innards... Funny: meat collection receptacle. ;3

Offline Captain MalteseTopic starter

Re: The words you NEVER use in a story.
« Reply #13 on: September 17, 2016, 06:22:49 AM »
superior

Offline Anesa

Re: The words you NEVER use in a story.
« Reply #14 on: September 17, 2016, 06:38:16 AM »
Cooter  ::)

Offline Captain MalteseTopic starter

Re: The words you NEVER use in a story.
« Reply #15 on: September 17, 2016, 06:45:14 AM »
worthless

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Re: The words you NEVER use in a story.
« Reply #16 on: September 19, 2016, 01:04:16 AM »
Incremental

or "Implementation"...

Online Chi

Re: The words you NEVER use in a story.
« Reply #17 on: September 19, 2016, 07:04:01 AM »
Decidedly NSFW... Just throwing that out there.
Despite how easy it would be... Dick or Cock.

There are so many more interesting words! Shaft, rod, member, manhood... and if you want to talk dirty... Stick, meat, "throbbing, engorged flesh," etc. And if you want to be funny, just call it a "meat packing unit" like I do. ;D

Same goes for the female counterpart. I can't bring myself to use pussy. More interesting: entrance, channel, lips, folds... Dirty: slit, slot, hole, "tender, rippling, quivering innards... Funny: meat collection receptacle. ;3

TSE you cracked me up and I'm so glad I was just bringing my coffee to my lips instead of in full swig!

Pulsating Pleasure Prong... just...no... thought it is funny and I may just have to use it somewhere! *winks at TSE*

Online Trevino

Re: The words you NEVER use in a story.
« Reply #18 on: September 29, 2016, 09:34:21 AM »
Asswipe

Offline Ralhend

Re: The words you NEVER use in a story.
« Reply #19 on: October 19, 2016, 06:24:31 PM »
Hmmm.  I dont think I have a "never use this word " list...

Online Benvolio

Re: The words you NEVER use in a story.
« Reply #20 on: November 01, 2016, 08:47:20 PM »
Butanoic (like the acid)

Offline Lrrr

Re: The words you NEVER use in a story.
« Reply #21 on: November 02, 2016, 07:25:20 PM »
How about horseballs?  It's a real word.  But it's a game so I suppose you could use it.

"I say, Jaquelinetta.  Shall we pop on over to Worthington's and play with his set of horseballs?"

Yup, it works.

Offline Captain MalteseTopic starter

Re: The words you NEVER use in a story.
« Reply #22 on: November 02, 2016, 08:07:36 PM »
"worthless"

Online Benvolio

Re: The words you NEVER use in a story.
« Reply #23 on: November 03, 2016, 01:40:14 AM »
I never get to use the word cervesa. Because I don't speak Spanish so I couldn't arrange context.

Offline MrThorne

Re: The words you NEVER use in a story.
« Reply #24 on: November 04, 2016, 06:01:10 PM »
I really dislike using coarse swear words in descriptions. Sometimes a character will use it in dialogue if its appropriate, but I never write the actual scene in that manner. I feel like that sort of thing can really drag a good sex scene down. I know its a major turn off for me anyway.