Managed to finish appearance at least before I had to go out again. Let's see if I can manage the bio once I come back.
Edit: Holy shit, finished and now wished I would have gone heavy! Live and learn.
Lol. You can always change him, but that would rather delay the start. Character is approved.
Warlord (or do you prefer Zanyl?)
One slight reservation with the character:
Mark tends to forget that he's no longer a one-man operative when in the heat of battle and may at times accidentally open fire at a comrade.
This makes him a liability rather than an asset?
The role of the "tank" in the team is to get in the way of the good-guye-with-guns and blow them away before they can blow away anyone of the team. If he's likely to accidentally change sides, that is not helpful!
Please could you explain (via PM if you prefer?) why you put that in the char sheet, as apart from that I would be happy to approve the character.
However, please could you take your modifications out of the character sheet and use it as originally designed? Thanks.
Also, Australia has balkanised, that is, split into several smaller nation states. NEO (North East Oz) is one, consisting of Northern Territories, Queensland, Papua New Guinea, The Solomon Islands and Vanuatu. I think I remember mentioning the southern City States of Sydney, Melbourne and Adelaide in "Iron Fist: Genesis", too. I think that leaves Western Australia with it's capital in Perth. Of course as with the USA there would be a remnant federal Government in Canberra but they are pretty toothless.