l really like it! Nice poem you wrote here..Came straight from your heart and that's easy to see ^^ [for me at least] :)
-also,I noticed that you choose the free lyrics and not specifically rymes and such xD I, pretty much,myself got the same style in writing.
It's a nice feeling when a person takes your breath away with only a smile,it's a..overwhelming feeling that keeps coming up when you see it[the smile I mean] and..it just can make you completely forget about All the things in your life,just in that very moment.-and it's hard to actually find your words to describe such a feeling,as in many cases a Picture/gesture etc makes more than 1000 words.
I can see the deepth within the words which you wrote here,trying to get back to the past having a empty heart ..with just a smile that Takes your Everything.,and yet you can't do nothing about it.Only yo watch it and admiring it.