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Offline Chevalier des PoissonsTopic starter

All my words away
« on: September 09, 2010, 10:09:55 PM »
Today I want to play
My words only for you
But I don't know what to say

So let me pretend that you
Can't charm me the way you do

Maybe with your blue eyes
I wouldn't need the sky

...to dream with you

-

And then all my lost words
Were never said
They were only sweet chords

My song won't mean to you
The same things that could be
What you could feel for me

And then I walk around
Wondering how is the sound
Of your sweet kiss

-

And I...I just think about you
I don't know what to say
When your sweet blue eyes light my day
So if you're wondering what I would do

...I would give all my words just for you

-

Thirty hours ago
I saw your smile
Doing something to my soul

Within my lonely heart
I had a dream about you
Splitting my hopes in two

Maybe your sweet eyes
Will take me back from the land
Lost up in the sky

After all of this
I have no words
To lose inside her kiss

And just a single flower
Will have to be the words
I wanted to give to her

I will now cross the line
And be jealous of the one
Who calls you 'mine'

-

So I will always think of you
As the one who brights my day
And yet takes my breath away
To the one who wonders what I'd do

...I would give all my words just for you


September 10th, 2010
To the second person in my life who took all my words away with a single smile

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Re: All my words away
« Reply #1 on: September 10, 2010, 08:58:18 AM »
l really like it! Nice poem you wrote here..Came straight from your heart and that's easy to see ^^ [for me at least] :)
-also,I noticed that you choose the free lyrics and not specifically rymes and such xD I, pretty much,myself got the same style in writing.  ;D

It's a nice feeling when a person takes your breath away with only a smile,it's a..overwhelming feeling that keeps coming up when you see it[the smile I mean] and..it just can make you completely forget about All the things in your life,just in that very moment.-and it's hard to actually find your words to describe such a feeling,as in many cases a Picture/gesture etc makes more than 1000 words.   ::)

I can see the deepth within the words which you wrote here,trying to get back to the past having a empty heart ..with just a smile that Takes your Everything.,and yet you can't do nothing about it.Only yo watch it and admiring it.
Sweetness ~

Offline Talia

Re: All my words away
« Reply #2 on: September 15, 2010, 10:30:23 AM »



Absolutely a beautiful read :)

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Re: All my words away
« Reply #3 on: September 15, 2010, 12:50:23 PM »
I'm so glad she touched you because with out that we wouldn't have this to touch us.

Offline Chevalier des PoissonsTopic starter

Re: All my words away
« Reply #4 on: September 15, 2010, 03:51:53 PM »
Thank you all for the wonderful comments.

It makes me very happy to see you all enjoyed those words. I appreciate it.