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Offline Chevalier des PoissonsTopic starter

Test Time
« on: November 13, 2009, 08:08:41 PM »
Test time
is time for no reflection
and I don't need direction
to make a woman cry

this time
is not for recreation
do you feel that sensation?
I will take you to the sky

-

I love you
but I don't want to be with you
Why don't you come to me
and say 'I love you too'?

-

Test time
you are my degradation
my lustful inspiration
your smile is in my eyes

Test time
is just a superstiction
and a bitter condition
I will love you until I die

-

I don't love you (anymore)
but I want to be with you (for sure)
come closer to me
we will go all over again (test time)

-

Test time
is time for no reflection
and I don't need direction
to make a woman cry

Test time
you are my degradation
my lustful inspiration
come with me to the sky

Test time
there is no more pain in my heart
and as I said in the start
I will love you until I die

November 13th, 2009
Original work by me


Listen to all hearts around you. One will beat faster for you, but if you don't realize it, this heart will have to be in a test time.

Offline ShyMystica

Re: Test Time
« Reply #1 on: January 30, 2010, 08:30:00 PM »
Another lyric poem? Or is it meant to be a song? I love the shorter, flowing pace of the stanzas here. I could go into detail about how it reflects time itself, but no one wants to read an essay! lol. I must say, the shorter phrases you write, the more impact and power your words hold. This poem is evidence of that. Once again, very good work. Thank you for sharing. :)