A Mother's Revenge- (Forced Fem, non-con, kidnapping, revenge, EXTREME)

[Emily sweet]

Hi all.  I’m looking to reboot an old story of mine and am seeking a writing partner willing to write some very extreme stuff.  It’s a tale of kidnapping, revenge and forced-fem.  Ideally, I am looking for someone with little to no ‘Offs’, someone willing to push the limits in how MC is treated and transformed into a drug-addled, shemale street whore.

As I said, I am looking for someone with a no-holds barred approach.  I need someone who can post at least three times a week and can provide a good couple of paragraphs with each reply.  I am by no means a grammar nazi, nor am I hung up on first person or third person style.  I can work with either.  The gender of the person behind the keyboard makes no difference but I do want twin sisters written as Davyd’s antagonists. 

If you are interested in writing with me, please respond via PM.

Below is a synopsis of the plot.  Hopefully, I’ve presented it adequately. 
Davyd (my character) is an 18 year old freshman college student attending school in the United States.  He’s the third son of Andriy Kohut, a powerful Ukrainian Crime Boss.  Unlike his two older brothers however, Mr.Kohut had a plan to make his son a success outside of the family business.  Once Davyd graduated from Elementary School he was shipped off to private school, not only to get him the education his father knew could make him a success in the legitimate world but also to keep his son ignorant of the true source of the family’s wealth. 

For the most part Mr. Kohut’s plan worked.  During his youth his family life could have been considered normal.  Despite the money that his criminal activities brought into the family, they did not live an ostentatious life style, preferring to keep a low profile for obvious reasons. The father was almost always at home for dinner, except for the occasional “business trip” that sent him out of town.  The mother cooked and cleaned just as any normal Ukrainian housewife would do.  While his two older brothers might occasionally come home with bumps and bruises as a result of some “job” that had just been completed, those things were always written off as them being rambunctious rabble-rousers who spent too much time in the local pub.  Of course, their behavior was used as the perfect excuse to have Davyd shipped off to school at a young age.

As things turned out Davyd became a good student.  His grades were excellent and when he was ready for college, Davyd applied to and was accepted at a prestigious US University.  Mr. Kohut’s plan to have his son become a legitimate success was achieving results.

And then……………………………..

With about two weeks of University under his belt, Davyd was returning home to his dorm after having gone out for a study session and late-night meal with friends.  As he was driving down the last bit of highway before his turn off a shadow of a figure suddenly walked into the road.  Davyd hit the brakes but couldn’t stop before hitting whoever it was who had stepped into the road.  He pulled the car over, got out and saw a young lady lying on the pavement.  He immediately called the Authorities from his cellphone. By the time they got there it was too late, the girl was dead.


Davyd was taken into custody by the local Police.  Once at the station, his Passport was collected and his information entered into the Police Report.  He was given a breathalyzer test.  It registered zero.  Despite that, he was also given a blood test. Once again, the results were negative.  By this point Davyd fully expected to be released.  He wasn’t, for unknown to him his father was registered in the Interpol database and as a result the authorities decided it would be prudent to hold onto the student until they could check everything out.  He was refused a phone call and held for several days until a thorough investigation revealed he wasn’t affiliated with the “family business,” nor was he found to be at fault in the death of the pedestrian. 

Unbeknownst to the young man and by some bizarre twist of fate the woman Davyd had killed was the daughter of one of his father’s crime rivals. The daughter had been running a rather lucrative sex trafficking ring in the States for her mother.  The mother and her twin sister (your characters, both psychopaths) will have come to the US to claim the body and in the process will be told the death was accidental.  She was willing to believe that until she learned the identity of the driver.  The fact that it was her rival’s son convinced the woman that her daughter’s death was NOT accidental.  She vows revenge for her daughter’s ‘murder.’  The woman’s plan is to compensate herself for the loss of a daughter and the associated revenue by replacing her with Davyd. While her plan is to turn the lad into a woman (a surrogate daughter), she would never trust her to run the business.  The transformed Davyd will help recoup the crime lady’s revenue by being forced to work the streets as a hooker.

Once released from holding, Davyd returned to his dorm and called his father to explain his ordeal and why he had been missing for days.  The young man, with no sense as to the real reason he was held for so long, chalked up his nightmare to an overzealous Police Department, telling his father that perhaps America wasn’t much different from home after all.  Mr. Kohut assured him it was and insisted Davyd remain and continue his studies.  However, he decided to dispatch one of his henchman to keep an eye on his son just in case something really was afoot, while keeping the plan a secret from Davyd.  Knowing that getting a visa approved for the bodyguard by the Ukrainian bureaucracy was going to take some time he set things in motion as soon as he hung up the phone.

Davyd now free and clear, resumed his studies the next day and on Friday night he and some his friends decided to celebrate his “innocence” with a little party at a nearby club. The bodyguard still wouldn’t have left Ukraine, making Davyd an easy mark for a kidnapping.