Suggestions for my On/Off thread

Started by SlyFox, January 05, 2017, 08:31:09 PM

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SlyFox

Hello, I'm looking for any and all suggestions for how I can improve my On/Off thread.
Specifically, I want to make the thread as readable, tidy, and aesthetically pleasing as possible. I can't help but feel as though it's difficult to read easily. I'd like the information to transfer effortlessly, without any squinting, highlighting, or re-reading necessary.
Thoughts?

https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=261194.0
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On & Off Thread

RedPhoenix

Putting line breaks between each topic would help I think. Also instead of using spoilers maybe a centered headline for each topic instead? Just random thoughts.
Apologies & Absences | Ons & Offs
May you see through a million eyes.

Oreo

It would flow better without the spoilers. : )

She led me to safety in a forest of green, and showed my stale eyes some sights never seen.
She spins magic and moonlight in her meadows and streams, and seeks deep inside me,
and touches my dreams. - Harry Chapin