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Offline Zaphod

Re: He Touched Me
« Reply #25 on: June 25, 2011, 01:59:30 PM »
Belle, I gotta take a look at your collection of 'grown up' cards. :P

Offline Hoogie

Re: He Touched Me
« Reply #26 on: July 05, 2011, 06:25:45 PM »
Oh, wow, absolutely great, I had expected a lot of things but that totally took me by surprise, great!

Offline lenka

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Re: He Touched Me
« Reply #27 on: August 14, 2011, 06:53:08 AM »
*grins widely*

...nice work bells!
Any more in store?

Offline belatris

Re: He Touched Me
« Reply #28 on: August 30, 2011, 12:18:55 PM »
:D Very nicely done. A much needed laugh this afternoon.

Offline dakabn

Re: He Touched Me
« Reply #29 on: September 27, 2011, 12:58:21 AM »
WOW! AWESOME! Nice surprise. :)

Offline Roxy Rocket

Re: He Touched Me
« Reply #30 on: September 27, 2011, 08:34:36 PM »
Sweet, funny, imaginative. I'm so glad I saw this while peeking around.

Offline Belle33Topic starter

Re: He Touched Me
« Reply #31 on: September 28, 2011, 07:21:02 PM »
Well - it seems I've fallen behind in thanking everyone.  I really appreciate that so many people have taken the time to read this little story.
 
Belle, I gotta take a look at your collection of 'grown up' cards. :P

Zaphy, I'll have to figure out what I can do for you in terms of a collection.  ;)

Oh, wow, absolutely great, I had expected a lot of things but that totally took me by surprise, great!


Hoogie, thanks so much! Aren't surprises fun? 

*grins widely*

...nice work bells!
Any more in store?

*hugs the lovely lenka* I'm happy you enjoyed it.  I'll write more if the words find their way to my doorstep :)

:D Very nicely done. A much needed laugh this afternoon.

Belatris, thank you sharing an afternoon laugh with my short little tale.

WOW! AWESOME! Nice surprise. :)

Dakabn, a "wow" and an "awesome"! I'm thrilled.  Thanks for taking the time to read this. I'm glad you liked it.

Sweet, funny, imaginative. I'm so glad I saw this while peeking around.

Hi Roxy, I'm so pleased that you found your way to here and enjoyed the story.  Thanks so much!

Offline Erotisch

Re: He Touched Me
« Reply #32 on: November 03, 2011, 02:37:49 PM »
I really enjoyed this! Quite a bit of emotion attached with it. Cute and sincere. Love it.   :-)

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Re: He Touched Me
« Reply #33 on: November 07, 2011, 06:10:39 PM »
I must confess, I didn't quite get it at first. But it was very clever. I enjoy such stories. :)

Offline LadySouvaire

Re: He Touched Me
« Reply #34 on: December 10, 2011, 02:30:49 PM »
Oooh, devious and very well done.  I applaud you!  :D

Offline taylorslc

Re: He Touched Me
« Reply #35 on: December 12, 2011, 01:23:10 AM »
that was great. thanks/

Offline Belle33Topic starter

Re: He Touched Me
« Reply #36 on: January 08, 2012, 08:15:22 PM »
I really enjoyed this! Quite a bit of emotion attached with it. Cute and sincere. Love it.   :-)

Thank you.  I'm so pleased you enjoyed it.


I must confess, I didn't quite get it at first. But it was very clever. I enjoy such stories. :)

Why Capone, I'm surprised I could get anything past you, clever one.  I'm happy you figured it out :)

Oooh, devious and very well done.  I applaud you!  :D

*bows and curtsies with a wicked grin*  I thank you.

that was great. thanks/

Thanks; it's kind of you to leave a note. 


Offline derek

Re: He Touched Me
« Reply #37 on: February 25, 2012, 09:23:45 AM »
Hey Belle,
I was on an impulsive exploration of the A/As looking for someone I thought I might have known from another site and saw your new thread thereand followed the link back here to this wonderful story.  This truly is simply a wonderful story...both in its engaging execution and in your imaginative concept that created it.  I'm smiling having enjoyed it once again.  Thank you for sharing it. ;D

Offline Belle33Topic starter

Re: He Touched Me
« Reply #38 on: February 26, 2012, 06:15:29 PM »
Awww - thanks again, Derek!

It's been almost a year since I wrote this while I was going through the approval process for E.  Thanks for leading me on a little trip down memory lane.   ;D

Offline Noxie

Re: He Touched Me
« Reply #39 on: March 07, 2012, 11:09:50 PM »
Very witty. I wasn't sure where it was going at first, but I found myself laughing by the end.

Offline Belle33Topic starter

Re: He Touched Me
« Reply #40 on: March 19, 2012, 11:03:06 PM »
Hi Noxie!  How did you sneak in a comment without me noticing sooner?  *smiles*  I'm glad the story tickled your funny bone.  I aim to please.  See you on the Socials, sweetie.

Offline niceandnaughty

Re: He Touched Me
« Reply #41 on: April 04, 2012, 03:18:49 PM »
Funny and orginal!

The level of writing in this forum is awesome (Gulp! What happens if I am accepted?)

Offline niceandnaughty

Re: He Touched Me
« Reply #42 on: April 04, 2012, 03:20:47 PM »
original

Offline Belle33Topic starter

Re: He Touched Me
« Reply #43 on: April 04, 2012, 10:19:48 PM »
Thank you, niceandnaughty.  I'm glad you enjoyed the story and I appreciate you taking the time to comment. 

Enjoy your approval process *huggs*

Offline Satin

Re: He Touched Me
« Reply #44 on: July 06, 2012, 10:28:00 AM »
Enjoyed your story Belle. I love a surprise unexpected ending!! Thanks

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Re: He Touched Me
« Reply #45 on: August 04, 2012, 11:04:13 PM »
Well written and well played. Enjoyed reading it. Thankyou.

Offline Belle33Topic starter

Re: He Touched Me
« Reply #46 on: August 08, 2012, 10:14:10 PM »
Thanks Satin!  Thank you Mayovagn!  It's very kind of you to leave a note.  I'm glad you enjoyed my bit of silliness :)

Offline Atmosk

Re: He Touched Me
« Reply #47 on: October 17, 2012, 09:47:27 PM »
Ha! Excellent. I do enjoy clever wit, Madame.

Offline Belle33Topic starter

Re: He Touched Me
« Reply #48 on: October 25, 2012, 07:08:30 PM »
Ha! Excellent. I do enjoy clever wit, Madame.

As do I, Carbon Dude.  *smiles*  Welcome to E!

Offline Solomon

Re: He Touched Me
« Reply #49 on: December 07, 2012, 02:57:57 PM »
I knew the narrator was an inanimate object, but I didn't know what.

For some reason, when the detail about the bikini came up, I thought it was a barbie doll.

Great story!

7/7!