Name: Ketsueiki Kaku ("The Divider")
Occupation: Duelist, Pugilist
Appearance: Dark brown hair falling halfway down his neck. Clean shaven. Brown eyes. Lean build, but quite strong. Usually wears a long coat with a Kilictin insignia over his heart. Wears a rapier at his side, ready to fight at a moment's notice.
Bio: As a teenager, Kaku accidentally slighted a gentleman at a party and was challenged to a duel. Defending his honor, he accidentally killed the man he was fighting, rather than simply wounding him. With his loose tongue, Kaku was challenged again, as many felt his glib comments and snide remarks as insults, even if they weren't intended as much. After a while, challengers came to confront him, thinking they could build their own legends. When Kaku accepted the first of these challenges, he managed to, according to legend, slice the arms from the man's shoulders. From then on, Kaku was regarded as The Divider, since some tales said he could divide a man's torso from his body.
Will this work for my Kilictin character?