Everything looks up to snuff for the most part. Shadow just needs to get some more of the details done.
Also I can't seem to figure out where you are keeping your equipment and how much they cost. I would like a itemized list of magical items, that way I can proper access what you three as a group can do. Also with how much gp you three have left.
Also when it comes to armor, you are free to choose what style it is. Since two of you have mithril chain-shirts, that just means that you can have it be a tank top, sports bra, so and so forth. All of the stats would stay the same, of course.