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Offline Chevalier des PoissonsTopic starter

Dawn of all our dreams
« on: October 04, 2010, 05:56:53 PM »
Tell me what is so new
I'll be back in a few
Just give me one single moment
So I can't get to feel your sweet scent

Can you still hear that lonely sound?
This is  the dawn of all our dreams
I don't want to hear your screams
When you see the truth flying around

But why do you look all that sad
Because we will face this new day?
I really did not say
That our truth has to be so bad

And who would be brave to face
The sudden dawn of all of our dreams?
We all want to find new means
To just get a second chance


If you don't know how you will resist
At least let me try and insist
When the sun is here to push you away
Try harder to stay

Everyone really looks the same
Covering their faces in shame
Drowning in the flying wave
Of those who didn't find their love

But our neverending hope
Tastes delicious like a grape
I could give you a dozen reasons
Just for us to go on

And who would be so smart to live
The painful dawn of all of our dreams?
We would have to find that love
Is not actually what it seems

But who would be naive to find
The hidden dawn of all of our dreams?
We should have to cover our minds
From all the annoying sunbeams


When I get to see your eyes
I am not that sad anymore
I throw all my words to the sky
Just to bring you here

So who would be so hasty to run
From the slow down of all of our dreams?
That cannot be stopped with scream
Of those who try to beat the sun

And who would be patient to read
My words about the dawn of our dreams?
They are just a way to seed
The sky with annoying sunbeams

October 4th, 2010
Original concept by me

Offline Talia

Re: Dawn of all our dreams
« Reply #1 on: October 04, 2010, 06:00:30 PM »

Sweet read x.x

Love the new avatar picture :)

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Re: Dawn of all our dreams
« Reply #2 on: October 04, 2010, 06:10:45 PM »
So much deep feelings into those words,pure sweetness and yet sadness,in the same time.Dreams- loneliness..tears shared,sky-echoing the voice and reading the lyrics.All together,very nice piece of art.

Well to go Rossen <3

Offline jazz

Re: Dawn of all our dreams
« Reply #3 on: October 22, 2010, 06:40:36 PM »
Another beautiful one!  Thanks for sharing ;)

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Re: Dawn of all our dreams
« Reply #4 on: October 23, 2010, 09:41:18 AM »
Very nice! I had as sense the voice was torn between hope and resignation.  Thanks for sharing!