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Broken Peace

Started by Chevalier des Poissons, September 29, 2010, 07:04:35 PM

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Chevalier des Poissons

Once upon a time, just you and I
A cliche and the blue sky
Fancy words so hold my hand
A kiss that should not end

The sunlight reflecting in your eyes
Tears when I say a goodbye
I know what that means to you
And I will miss you too

But there is always tomorrow
Even if I am not there now
You can have a piece of my heart

Give me one more chance
For another brand new dance
Don't tell my blue world
That outside is not that cold


I will not believe the words you say
Something about going away
When I am singing that old song
You want to sing along

I am spending my day waiting for you
To love me the way you do
When our dreams finally meet their end
There will be no more 'holding your hand'

And the sweet eyes will just stare
The loving heart will no longer care
It will be the end of our new cliche

Bring me a tomorrow
And whatever I still don't know
Give me a new love
I promise I will be naive


I know that you'll not just be there only for me
I know that my heart is no longer able to see
I know that my dreams were too old to be with you
But I will not give up until the day you'll love me too

September 29th, 2010
Original concept by me. For all hearts who want to change
-I have Maro's heart, and I promise to take good care of it-

A & A


very nice... damn it hits a spot in me that I wanted to keep blocked. Still it is the words that make the difference and when they strike a cord with the emotions and resonate with the heart, it seems all the feelings and pain thought to be blocked...hoped to  be left behind come back again. Very nice piece of work. thank you
Love to write ... tell me if it is not working  for you. I will understand. Just don't leave me hanging.   Looking for a writing partner.

Chevalier des Poissons

Thank you very much for the comment ^^

Yes, I wrote it aiming on that part actually, hehe.
-I have Maro's heart, and I promise to take good care of it-

A & A