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Re: [NC][Seeking More Players Who Want an In-Depth Game!] Burden City
« Reply #275 on: November 14, 2010, 06:14:11 AM »
You can go to the OOC thread and let the others know you've joined, so you may collaborate with them on any plot events and storylines you wish to do with someone. Hope you have a good time in Burden City now.

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Re: [NC][Seeking More Players Who Want an In-Depth Game!] Burden City
« Reply #276 on: November 16, 2010, 10:34:20 PM »
We are looking for people who would be happy playing "Neutral" roles in the city.

The term victim is used for these players, but that does not mean you need to be at the end of a crime. The crime and law aspect of the game is a heavy influence in the game but these cops and cons do have lives when not committing crimes and upholding the laws.

Doctors, College students, reporters, Taxi cab drivers etc etc

If you want more details, please whisper me or any of the GM'S.

Aiden, Christa McGinn , Amelia or Angelsdemoncode
« Last Edit: November 16, 2010, 10:35:49 PM by Aiden »

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Re: [NC][Seeking More Players Who Want an In-Depth Game!] Burden City
« Reply #277 on: November 17, 2010, 02:50:23 PM »
Act I. The Profile
Birth Name: Mathilde Elsbeth Hoth von Heilberg
Name: To you, it’s Frau Doktor Hoth von Heilberg.  She’s called plenty of other things, but not where she can hear you.
Alias: None
Age: 39
Sex: Female
Orientation: Heterosexual, but mostly unexamined
Profession: Corporate Fixer
Role: Neutral
Alignment: Neutral

Act II. The Diagnostics
Height: 5’ 9”
Weight: 145 lbs.
Hair: Blond
Eyes: Blue
Skin: Fair
Birth Mark: None
Tattoos: Gott im Himmel, how plebian.  No.
Distinguishable Mark/Scar: Smallpox vaccination scar on upper right arm
Model: Meryl Streep

Act III. The Dossier
Likes: Money; competent people; making anyone else look like a fool; silk; expensive wines, particularly burgundies; a job done right; flying first class; being shown proper deference; Ordnung.
Dislikes: Chaos; losing money; Italians; those ridiculously sweet white wines the Germans make; socialists; children; people who do not know their place; poor service.
Attitude: Mathilde has the mind of a Cray and the heart of a mob lawyer.  Her first, last and only loyalty is to her employer, Bank Otto Krenz of Geneva, and its balance sheet.  She recognizes no authority that stands between her and making the bank a franc.  She does respect power that stands in her way, but ascribes it no legitimacy.

The Hoth von Heilberg family is old, old money, even by Swiss standards, and it’s a lot of money.  Mathilde was raised to be an aristocrat, and that education succeeded.  The lower orders should stay in their place and show proper respect to their betters.

She is impatient and a perfectionist.  On the rare occasions that she makes a mistake, it eats at her.  The frequent errors of others are met with scorn.  Mathilde is a workaholic who does little else.  Sex is an inconvenience that one engages in to satisfy physical urges and to prevent them from influencing one’s decision making.  The annoyance is multiplied if a man assumes that it meant anything more and he keeps calling.
Habit/Twitch: Mathilde unconsciously chews on pens when she’s concentrating, but thinks it’s a disgusting habit and is trying to quit.  Her jaw clenches when she’s angry, leading to frequent tension headaches.
Quote: I don’t believe you were listening.  Let’s try this again.
Weapons: A laptop, lots of connections, and a withering stare
History: The Hoth von Heilbergs are one of the oldest families in Geneva, tracing their lineage to a 12th century baron.  Mathilde was the fourth child, and only daughter, of Klaus Franz Hoth von Heilberg, the current head of the household.  Her father was remarkably enlightened in his expectations of his girl, sending her to the same schools and demanding the same achievements as he did of his sons.  She turned out to be the most competent and hardest working of all of his children, and remains his favorite.

Klaus sent her to one of the finest girls’ boarding schools in Europe.  She graduated at 16, and went on to MIT, where she graduated summa cum laude in Mathematics and Computer Science.  When she came home, she went to work for Bank Otto Krenz of Geneva, an intensely private bank that caters exclusively to very rich clients.  As a part of its efforts, it engages in high finance as well as wealth management.  For two centuries, her family has been very close to those that own and run the bank.

Mathilde helped to build information technology systems for the bank during the mid 1990s.  She was the main designer of the security policies and software.  Bank Otto Krenz got a jump on many of its competitors in the niche financial world.

In 1998, Mathilde went back to school.  Since then, she has earned both a law degree from Tilburg University and a PhD in Finance from the London School of Economics. 

She is now the top corporate troubleshooter for Bank Otto Krenz.  Whenever, wherever there is a problem or an opportunity, she arrives quickly.  She has earned the trust of the bank’s management, and has full discretion to make decisions in its name.  As a part of her work, she frequently deals with criminals of all sorts, from perpetrators of financial fraud to third world dictators to tax evaders to white slavers.  So long as there money transfers properly, she is prepared to assist any of them in evading banking regulations anywhere in the world or making untraceable transfers.  All for a price, and her talents don't come cheaply.

Mathilde has no personal life to speak of. 

Possible Crimes for Victims
[Yes - No - Attempt]
Robbery: yes
Kidnapping: Ask first, please
Assault: yes
Arson: no
Blackmail: yes
Forced Criminal Activity: Ask first, please
Rape: Ask first, please
Murder: Ask first, please
« Last Edit: November 19, 2010, 11:26:10 PM by JMN »

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Re: [NC][Seeking More Players Who Want an In-Depth Game!] Burden City
« Reply #278 on: November 17, 2010, 03:33:00 PM »
Looks good JMN, once Angels overlooks it and moves you to the information thread you will be good to go.

Welcome to the game.


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Re: [NC][Seeking More Players Who Want an In-Depth Game!] Burden City
« Reply #279 on: November 17, 2010, 03:45:05 PM »
I guess I've got some reading to do.  Anyplace you recommend I start?  I'm hoping I can avoid at least some of the 60 pages of the OOC thread.

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Re: [NC][Seeking More Players Who Want an In-Depth Game!] Burden City
« Reply #280 on: November 17, 2010, 04:06:26 PM »
The story is jumbled up at the moment and a time line of events is in the process of being made. The OOC is a lot of chatter, so I honestly would not bother going through 60 pages of back story.

I'll give you a quick run down of events.

The crime lord (Unknown to most but the criminal higher ups) calls a meeting to secure her examining influence. This results in a huge public scandal as the weakening Triad are pushed out of their own turf in China Town. Two men gunned down at their resturant by "Russian"(Unknown) muscle, police is on the look out for who is responsible.

IHQ (The investigators) are trying to find out who is responsible, lots of crimes going on, completely overwhelmed, understaffed, under paid and unappreciated by their own people of the city.

Lots of plans are being ordered to secure the Influence of Tatiana, the crime lord.

Anduin Mengsk, a FBI special agent arrives to look into the organized crime activity in Burden City and ends up having IHQ (BCPD) dropped on his lap to cover for the previous Lead investigator.

Around the game, there is lots of stories going on.

A wedding is in the works.
A robbery of a bank is being planned.
A serial killer smashes up a young woman's flower shop.

It seems like a lot, but they all mesh together and will fit better in line when that time line is set up.

For now, you can make a post in the main Burden City thread or if you want a house/home thread let us know so we can link it to the information page just make sure it starts with Burden City: "What it is"
Same goes if you want to make your bank you work at.

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Re: [NC][Seeking More Players Who Want an In-Depth Game!] Burden City
« Reply #281 on: November 17, 2010, 04:37:14 PM »
JMN, welcome aboard to Burden City. You can post in the OOC if you wish to now to let the others know that you've joined.

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Re: [NC][Seeking More Players Who Want an In-Depth Game!] Burden City
« Reply #282 on: November 19, 2010, 11:20:04 PM »
We have our own Subboard now!

http://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?board=483.0

And we are still recruiting.

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Re: [NC][Seeking More Players Who Want an In-Depth Game!] Burden City
« Reply #283 on: November 22, 2010, 03:21:40 AM »
Act I. The Profile
Birth Name: Tychus Delrey
Name: Tychus "King" Delrey
Alias: "King"
Age: 29
Sex: Male
Orientation: Heterosexual
Profession: Mechanic
Role: Criminal/Victim
Alignment:Neutral, willing to side with the Crime Lord if the pay is good enough.

Act II. The Diagnostics
Height: 5'11
Weight: 235
Hair: Bald, clean shaved.
Eyes: Dark Brown
Skin: Tan
Birth Mark: No
Tattoos:
"Man's Ruin"-Located on his left upper arm, wraps around
USMC tattoo- Right arm
Dog Tag tattoo- Right thigh
Howling wolf tattoo- Located on his left pec
Distinguishable Mark/Scar:
Shrapnel scars across his midsection and chest, bullet wound in his left shoulder area.

Act III. The Dossier
Likes: Rock n Roll, Car repairs, building and body work, racing, drag racing, drifting,  brunettes and redheads. His dog- lugnut and the rest of his friends/crew.
Dislikes: Light Beer, Wine coolers, Euro cars
Attitude: Mellow rather silent type when working, task and work driven. As a shop manager he gets the job done, is always willing to help and teach when needed but stern when people make mistakes and did not ask for help.
Habit/Twitch: Cracks his knuckles and rotates his left arm many times a day.
Quote: "You've been driving by yourself all these years. You've never competed with anyone. Remember, don't pay attention to the competition itself. Ignore other racers. The one you need to beat is yourself."
Weapons:
M1911 pistol
Baseball bat, carries it in the trunk of his car.

History:
Tychus is a native of Burden city, He grew up in a small apartment on 54th st and went to the underfunded BC school system. His father was a grease monkey and his mother a school teacher which made acting up in school a challenge he was more than willing to take up. Most of the friends he knew he met in his later years in Junior high, when he was a teacher's aid for Mr. Olsen's metal shop.

Leo, Chris, Jordan and later on Hiro made up their own clique all through Junior High and High School. Sadly Tychus was always a few years ahead of them but it did not matter up until he graduated and he made the decision to join the marines. He was shipped to boot and almost seconds later was sent out to Iraq where he served his entire service but was held back as the war was at its most dangerous for another tour of duty but ended up suffering an injury that finally had him going home at last.

Recovering from his injuries back home, he returned to the surprise that his parents had retired to Florida. He couch hopped as he planned on what to do with his life when he brought up the idea of opening a shop with the reunited pack. Everyone invested what they had and opened up "Vulcan" Auto, in honor of the Metal shop class they all met in back in Jr High. The shop became popular within the racing community, business was solid but the hit on the economy was felt when people had less money to funnel into their cars. Having most of their money tied into the shop, Tychus knows that it can not fail even if it means they need to find other ways to keep it running...


Possible Crimes for Victims
[Yes - No - Attempt]
Robbery: Yes
Kidnapping: attempt
Assault: attempt (He'll fight back, Hard)
Arson: No
Blackmail: yes
Forced Criminal Activity: If you pay him enough.
Rape: No
Murder: attempt

Birth Name: Lugnut
Name: Lugnut
Alias: n/a
Age: 3
Sex: M
Orientation: Heterosexual
Profession: Eat, Sleep, Bark, Poop
Role: Dog
Alignment: Dog

Act II. The Diagnostics
Height: 15"
Weight: 50lbs
Hair: Brown and White
Eyes: Brown
Skin: Brown and White

Act III. The Dossier
Likes: Belly rubs, wet dog food, baseballs, the small cart the mechanics use to slid under cars, his corner of the shop with his bed.
Dislikes: Other Dogs in his shop
Attitude: Lazy 75% of the time, hungry the rest.
Habit/Twitch: Wants a belly rub after fetching something
Quote: "Woooof!"
Weapons: His powerful jaws
History:  Lugnut was originally a payment for a job Tychus did when someone was strapped for cash, as far as he was concerned it was the best payment he had ever gotten. Lugnut spends his days in the shop sleeping and acting as the mascot for the shop, playing with kids whenever he is in the mood to play fetch.
« Last Edit: December 01, 2010, 11:28:50 PM by Aiden »

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Re: [NC][Seeking More Players Who Want an In-Depth Game!] Burden City
« Reply #284 on: November 22, 2010, 11:37:10 AM »

Act I. The Profile
Birth Name: Christina Thomson
Name: Christina Thomson, usually called Chris (her incarcerated boyfriend calls her Cece)
Age: 27
Sex: Female
Orientation: Hetero
Profession: Bookkeeping and other office related things in Vulcan Auto Shop
Role: Criminal/Victim
Alignment: Neutral, leaning towards the Crime Lord

Act II. The Diagnostics
Height: 5'6
Weight: 132
Hair: warm brown with a hint of copper and honey
Eyes: dark brown
Skin: light tan
Birth Mark:
Tattoos: wolf paw print on her right shoulder blade and a small tribal on the inside of her left wrist

Act III. The Dossier
Likes: Rock and grunge, ice cold beer, dark chocolate, fast cars and fast bikes. Her crew, their garage and Lugnut.
For sexual likes, see my O/O's.
Dislikes: Dumb blonds, liars and any type cross of the two.
For sexual dislikes, see my O/O's (linked above)
Attitude: Chris is a generally upbeat girl with a positive outlook on life and people. She tends to forget any wrongdoings of the past and moves on from such things rather easily. Maybe too easily. She is a very loyal friend and a compassionate person and is often mistaken for a total softy. The reality is, that if you cross her you hit a rock solid core of confidence and determination. She doesn't get pushed around very easily (with one big exception, her boyfriend) and she pushes right back if you try. But again, in a little while she's moved on from that and harbors no grudge.
She's a tease and a flirt, a bit of a tomboy but with a very sensual side underneath the surface. She also has a motherly side, a heritage from being raised in a family where generations of women held the leash. This shows mostly in her organization skills on daily basis and the way she tries to look out for her friends.
Habit/Twitch: Chris massages her shoulder when in deep thought, frequently wakes up in the middle of the night to make sandwiches and sings in the shower. She always, always whispers "Let's fly, baby," when she mounts her bike.
Quote:
Teasing the guys, "My mom said the only reason men are alive is for lawn care and vehicle maintenance." Tim Allen
Her response when her mom asks her why she doesn't hang out with "nicer" people, "A gentleman is simply a patient wolf." Lana Turner
Weapons: Her baby, a 2001 Honda Blackbird. A small semi-automatic handgun kept in a drawer in the office, and a switchblade she carries on her.
History: Chris grew up with her sister Jordan in Burden and met Tychus and Leo in Junior High. They became a tight crew, despite the difference in age, because of their shared love for cars and mechanics, Jordan joining the group a bit later. As the years passed they grew up and went in separate directions but the bonds never broke. Chris finished High School and met her boyfriend, Josh "Trick" Baxter, in her senior year, the year after Tychus left for the marines. She always felt closest to him of the whole group, but never had -nor planned to- tell him or anybody else that.

When he was gone she was the oldest of the group, a year ahead of Leo and three ahead of Jordan, which meant her graduation and leaving for college was a step away from them all and into the little world of school and Trick. He rented a little place with a couple of friends and she stayed with him most of the time. Trick was a street racer and too cocky for his own good, as well as simply reckless. He fell in with a bad crowd and got himself mixed up in all sorts of things Chris didn't even know about until the day he was arrested. She was working as a bartender at the time, trying to start chopping at the massive student loans she'd collected during college. Her degree in business administration wasn't exactly useful in that job and she was growing a bit frustrated.

Trick was arrested after being caught speeding and cornered. He panicked over a load of something he had in his back seat and the possibility of the cops discovering it, and in his panic he pulled out a gun and ended up shooting a police officer. Needless to say, he was hauled off to jail with no release date impending any time soon.

Only a week after this happened, the crew was reunited by Tychus and they opened the Vulcan Auto Shop. Chris pitched in every dime she'd earned and saved up in her bartender job, eager to get away from that hole and bring her degree to good use. Her talent and education came quite in handy as the shop obviously needed bookkeeping, and Chris made sure all paperwork was perfect. 

After a couple of years of living with her parents and working at the Vulcan, Chris finally had enough and asked Ty if she could move into the warehouse loft with him. They'd been friends since they were kids and the request felt as natural as asking him if he wanted pizza or burgers. This resulted in her immediately moving and since there were really no bedrooms other than Ty's in the upper level of the loft, she simply put her bed in the hall space up there and made herself at home.


Possible Crimes for Victims
[Yes - No - Attempt]
Robbery: yes
Kidnapping: yes
Assault: yes
Arson: no
Blackmail: attempt
Forced Criminal Activity: yes
Rape: attempt
Murder: no
« Last Edit: November 26, 2010, 08:11:00 PM by Amelia »

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Re: [NC][Seeking More Players Who Want an In-Depth Game!] Burden City
« Reply #285 on: November 22, 2010, 09:04:34 PM »
Act I. The Profile
Birth Name: Leonid Byron Morrison
Name: Leo Morrison
Alias: N/A
Age: 26
Sex: Male
Orientation: Heterosexual
Profession: Mechanic in Tychus "King" Delrey's garage
Role: Victim
Alignment: Neutral

Act II. The Diagnostics
Height: 6'4”
Weight: 278lbs.
Hair: Dark brown hair, short cropped.
Eyes: Gray
Skin: Light tan skin color.
Birth Mark: Small spot on the right shoulder blade that looks almost like a half moon.
Tattoos: Wolf tattoo on his left shoulder
Distinguishable Mark/Scar:  None.

Act III. The Dossier
Likes: Hard rock or some good punk music.  Disassembling and reassembling a muscle car's engine.  Guinness, but only from draft.  Whiskey.  Fighting.  Gracie Jiu-Jitsu, Kenpo Karate.
Dislikes: Dealing with expensive European cars.  Arrogant people.  Being talked down to.  Wine or beer (except noted above).
Attitude: Leo can be highly stubborn and brash.  He knows what he likes and dislikes anyone that tries to belittle him for it.  At the shop he is friendly enough, and even about as honest as any mechanic ever could be.  Away from the job he's relaxed, a bit jovial with friends, and always plain spoken.
Habit/Twitch: Often will scratch his chin with his right thumb nail when thinking. 
Quote: “Can you imagine what I would do if I could do all I can?” - Sun Tzu; “Diplomacy is the art of saying "nice doggie" until you can find a rock.” - Will Rogers
Weapons: His hands and feet, his favored Pipe Wrench and the Remington 870 by the cash register.
History: Leo is the son of a long line of blue collar workmen.  His great-grandfather worked in construction, building some of the largest buildings within the city.  His grandfather helped construct the elevated trains.  His father repaired the cities vehicles while making enough money for the boy to go to school and get a proper education.

Leo went through school much like any other child in BC.  He excelled at sports and had a natural gift at tinkering with engines and other aspects of metal work.  When in Junior High he met Tychus, Chris and Jordan during Mr. Olsen's metal shop class and the two hit off a friendship then and there.  Leo's lack of interest in other scholastic endeavors was apparent in his grades, earning him borderline passing marks, finding it difficult to want to apply himself to things other than football and shop classes.

Leo's mother passed away during the summer of his senior year in high school, leaving the father and son together.  Throwing himself into work around the shop and very little with school he almost failed out of High School altogether.  However he barely graduated and his skill on the football field earned him a scholarship to the University of Michigan, the only member of his family to make it that far.

While away at college Leo had taken up an interest in martial arts, studying the fine art of Gracie Jiu-Jitsu and adding a smattering of other styles to his enjoyment, enjoying it enough to join a club that was based around friendly competition.  His competitive nature pushed him far into the weekly tournaments that they held, often times Leo would rank in the top three, and occasionally earning him enough extra money for pizza and beer for his dormmates.  He began to acclimate to the college life easily, enjoying everything it had to offer.

It was during this time that things took a turn for the worst.  Just nearing the end of his Sophomore year his father's shop burned to the ground with the elder Morrison still inside.  The loss of both parents drove the young Leo to despair and he left behind University after his Junior year, unsure of what he wanted out of life anymore.

Soon he moved back to BC, taking odd jobs at mechanic shops, falling back on the things that made him happiest in life.  When Tychus came to him to bring the crew back together he eagerly accepted and willingly dumped every dime he'd gotten from the death of his family into “Vulcan” Auto.

Possible Crimes for Victims
[Yes - No - Attempt]
Robbery:  Yes
Kidnapping:  Attempt
Assault:  Attempt (but don't expect him to be easy)
Arson:  Never
Blackmail:  Yes
Forced Criminal Activity:  Yes, for the right price.
Rape:  No
Murder: Attempt
« Last Edit: November 25, 2010, 11:52:17 PM by Falanor »

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Re: [NC][Seeking More Players Who Want an In-Depth Game!] Burden City
« Reply #286 on: November 22, 2010, 11:17:12 PM »
Act I. The Profile
Birth Name: Jordan Lee Avery
Name: Jordan Avery
Alias: N/A
Age: 24
Sex: Female
Orientation: Heterosexual
Profession: Custom Paint/Mechanic
Role: Crim/Vic
Alignment: Neutral

Act II. The Diagnostics
Height: 5'3
Weight: 94lbs.
Hair: Black
Eyes: grey/blue
Skin: Pale
Birth Mark: No
Tattoos: Wolf Tattoo on outer right thigh
Distinguishable Mark/Scar: No

Act III. The Dossier
Likes: The crew(including lugnut), European sports cars, street racing, drifting, fast bikes, music she can sing or dance to, clove cigarettes, flirty guys, and rough sex.
Dislikes: Chocolate, posers, shy guys, suck up girls, and people not paying their bills.
Attitude: Jordan's rough around the edges, some times she comes off a little rude or blunt, but she'd always strait to the point. She kinda a flirt and just can't help but tease the boys from time to time. On the job she's personable with the customers making friends easily and a perfectionist with her jobs, she can't stand it when something is not right once she done. Away from the job she's laid back and relaxed happy to just go with the flow of things as long as she's having fun.
Habit/Twitch: When mad or extremely irritated she rakes her fingertips threw her hair, chain smokes when she's stressed, bites her bottom lip when thinking.
Quote: "Well behaved woman rarely make history." Marylin Monroe
Weapons: Herself and anything close by she can hit you with.
History: Jordan always felt in the shadows at least where her sister was concerned. And while her friends were quiet easily as close to her as family she was a little relived when Ty went into the marines and Chris off to collage. She got to stretch her wings for the first time.

Jordan kept in touch with the others but for the most part took off on her own. She went threw a string of interesting relationships and working in diffrent garages wasting away her time. Her parents never forgave her for not going to collage like Chris but Jordan knew what she wanted to do and having her nose stuck in some book wasn't part of the plan.

She landed a pretty good job at an established shop in down town Burden and the owner who had a kind of a thing for her, let her go to school as part of the job. She learned to do custom paint something she adored and did well at. But Jordan lost that job pretty quickly once the owner realized she was a flirt more then anything else.

While working at diffrent odd jobs Jordan worked her way into the street racing world. With no one watching her and no one to tell her no Jordan started racing. She was certainly not the best her finaces wouldn't allow for that kind of thing but she had quick reflexes and could think on her feet and best off all knew every inch of her car and exactly how far she could push it. A few times that was enough to let her win.

After loosing the last job Jordan moved in with her current boyfriend, a small time car thief name Avery who thinks he's god gift to woman. It was only weeks after moving in with Avery that Ty popped up again back from his stint in the marines with the idea to open up Vulcan.

Jordan gave him what money she'd won from the races, several thousand, and told him it was her savings not sure how any of them would react to her night job. She continued to race though less after starting to work at Vulcan and didn't bother to move out of Avery's place even though she'd gotten a new job.

Possible Crimes for Victims
[Yes - No - Attempt]
Robbery: yes
Kidnapping:yes
Assault:yes
Arson:no
Blackmail:attempt
Forced Criminal Activity: yes
Rape:attempt
Murder: PM first
« Last Edit: November 26, 2010, 09:07:46 PM by LimitlessNikkie »

Offline Aiden

Re: [NC][Seeking More Players Who Want an In-Depth Game!] Burden City
« Reply #287 on: November 26, 2010, 02:14:05 AM »
Christina Thomson
Lugnut
Tychus Delrey
Leonid Byron Morrison

Welcome to Burden City

@LimitlessNikkie- Once your bio is complete we will welcome you as well.  :D

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Re: [NC][Seeking More Players Who Want an In-Depth Game!] Burden City
« Reply #288 on: November 26, 2010, 06:36:15 AM »
Ooooo! I wanna mechanic too! *thinks up a suitable addition*

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Re: [NC][Seeking More Players Who Want an In-Depth Game!] Burden City
« Reply #289 on: November 26, 2010, 08:02:15 AM »


Act I. The Profile
Birth Name: Carrie Piper
Name: Carrie Piper
Alias: N/A
Age: 19
Sex: Female
Orientation: Heterosexual
Profession: Consultant for CDI Investment/ Student
Role: Victim
Alignment: Detective

Act II. The Diagnostics
Height: 5'10
Weight: 120lbs.
Hair: Red
Eyes: Blue
Skin: Pale
Birth Mark: No
Tattoos: Just a date around her belly button - 3~6~2007
Distinguishable Mark/Scar: No
Model: Deborah Ann Woll

Act III. The Dossier
Likes: Mostly her family and taking care of them. Sexually she enjoys being used. It's a change from her everyday life were she is the one who controls everything.
Dislikes: People who go after her family, criminals and not much sexually. She'll try almost anything once.
Attitude: Carrie is top dog, queen b of her family and at her job. She doesn't take crap from anyone and doesn't accept anything less than the best. The only time she's really gentle is when she's with her siblings. They mean the world to her.
Habit/Twitch: The one thing that doesn't fir her hard demenor. She eats a dum-dum lollipop whenever she's working and needs to think
Quote: [Either a quote that fits or perhaps something your character may say]
Weapons: .25 Colt

History: Carrie Piper was born and raised as many in Burden City are. She watched her Mother break her back for many years to make a name for herself in the investment world. When she was old enough she helped her Mother as much as she could, being there for all her meetings and learning everything that she could. "It'll be yours one day." Her mother had always said that. "I made this all for you and your brother and sister."

It seemed that was all too true. Shortly after Carrie 16th birthday, her Mother was killed. She later found out it was because she'd been caught up in a dirty deal. Even with her Mother's innocence, she was still marked and the deed was carried out by the Hammer. Being the only living relative, she was the one who had to identify the body. What was left of it anyway.

At that point she became the owner of her Mother's company. She worked hard to push the deal her Mom had been working on and eventually succeeded in getting the new partner to allow her to sign the paper. All she had to do was prove to them that she'd truly learned everything her Mother could teach. Since she had enough money, she was able to convince a judge not to split up her brother and sister and leave her as their guardian. It's been three years since her Mother's death and she's managed to turn her family into one of the wealthier ones in the city.

Possible Crimes for Victims
[Yes - No - Attempt]
Robbery: yes
Kidnapping:yes
Assault:yes
Arson:no
Blackmail:yes
Forced Criminal Activity: yes
Rape:yes
Murder: no
« Last Edit: November 29, 2010, 12:42:02 PM by Queen Be Damned Sheiba »

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Re: [NC][Seeking More Players Who Want an In-Depth Game!] Burden City
« Reply #290 on: November 26, 2010, 08:44:59 AM »
Ooooo! I wanna mechanic too! *thinks up a suitable addition*

Just make sure to get in touch with me or Aiden about your character, his history and connection to the others. The crew is a close group of friends with a history since Jr. High and any additional people will have to fit that bill ;)

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Re: [NC][Seeking More Players Who Want an In-Depth Game!] Burden City
« Reply #291 on: November 28, 2010, 06:11:45 PM »
Act I. The Profile
Birth Name: Michaela Cooper
Name: Mickie Cooper
Age: 26, appears a little younger at times
Sex: female
Orientation: Bisexual with a strong lean towards men
Profession: nothing concrete, but hopes to earn a living by singing
Role: Victim
Alignment: Neutral, leaning towards Detective

Act II. The Diagnostics
Height: 5'5
Weight: 110
Hair: Black
Eyes: blue-ish gray
Skin: light, subtle tan perhaps
Tattoos: a clef in the shape of a cat on the back of her neck.

Act III. The Dossier
Likes: Blues, jazz, soul and rock, her car, partying and flirting, --> sexual on's are writer's on's
Dislikes: suits who think they own the world, people who pressure her, commitment, --> sexual off's are writer's off's
Attitude: Mickie is a complete flirt and tease, a fun-loving girl loaded with confidence and very positive attitude. She's blunt and doesn't have a shy bone in her body. She takes on a second persona on stage, a more low key, smoldering fire sort of attitude that matches her choice of music: mostly jazz and a little mix of blues and soul. (she doesn't sing rock even if she listens to it). She has real commitment issues and avoids such as much as she can. Her longest relationship was six months and that only lasted so long because the guy was away on tour for three months during that time.
Habit/Twitch: She has trouble staying still for too long. Her knee will bounce or her fingers drum on a table or her shoulders start to move to some tune in her head.
Quote:
Weapons: Knife-sharp sarcasm, wits and wittiness, killer-curves and pepper spray.
History: Mickie grew up in a city not unlike Burden but a few states away. She soon discovered her love for music and has been writing and performing since age 14. It has mostly been small gigs at bars and clubs, local festivals and open mic nights here and there. Her personal life was just as chaotic, with her parents not very happy about her choice of lifestyle and pressure from every direction to do something productive with her life she of course fought it strongly and basically eloped. She heard talk of MVP studios and Marcus "Percy" Varia, liked what she heard and decided Burden City was her next stop. Maybe she'd catch that break there...

Possible Crimes for Victims
[Yes - No - Attempt]
Robbery: yes
Kidnapping: yes
Assault: yes
Arson: attempt
Blackmail: yes
Forced Criminal Activity: attempt
Rape: attempt
Murder: attempt
« Last Edit: November 30, 2010, 08:49:00 PM by Amelia »

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Re: [NC][Seeking More Players Who Want an In-Depth Game!] Burden City
« Reply #292 on: November 28, 2010, 08:21:39 PM »
Act I. The Profile
Birth Name: Jordan Lee Avery
Name: Jordan Avery
Alias: N/A
Age: 24
Sex: Female
Orientation: Heterosexual
Profession: Custom Paint/Mechanic
Role: Crim/Vic
Alignment: Neutral

Act II. The Diagnostics
Height: 5'3
Weight: 94lbs.
Hair: Black
Eyes: grey/blue
Skin: Pale
Birth Mark: No
Tattoos: Wolf Tattoo on outer right thigh
Distinguishable Mark/Scar: No

Act III. The Dossier
Likes: The crew(including lugnut), European sports cars, street racing, drifting, fast bikes, music she can sing or dance to, clove cigarettes, flirty guys, and rough sex.
Dislikes: Chocolate, posers, shy guys, suck up girls, and people not paying their bills.
Attitude: Jordan's rough around the edges, some times she comes off a little rude or blunt, but she'd always strait to the point. She kinda a flirt and just can't help but tease the boys from time to time. On the job she's personable with the customers making friends easily and a perfectionist with her jobs, she can't stand it when something is not right once she done. Away from the job she's laid back and relaxed happy to just go with the flow of things as long as she's having fun.
Habit/Twitch: When mad or extremely irritated she rakes her fingertips threw her hair, chain smokes when she's stressed, bites her bottom lip when thinking.
Quote: "Well behaved woman rarely make history." Marylin Monroe
Weapons: Herself and anything close by she can hit you with.
History: Jordan always felt in the shadows at least where her sister was concerned. And while her friends were quiet easily as close to her as family she was a little relived when Ty went into the marines and Chris off to collage. She got to stretch her wings for the first time.

Jordan kept in touch with the others but for the most part took off on her own. She went threw a string of interesting relationships and working in diffrent garages wasting away her time. Her parents never forgave her for not going to collage like Chris but Jordan knew what she wanted to do and having her nose stuck in some book wasn't part of the plan.

She landed a pretty good job at an established shop in down town Burden and the owner who had a kind of a thing for her, let her go to school as part of the job. She learned to do custom paint something she adored and did well at. But Jordan lost that job pretty quickly once the owner realized she was a flirt more then anything else.

While working at diffrent odd jobs Jordan worked her way into the street racing world. With no one watching her and no one to tell her no Jordan started racing. She was certainly not the best her finaces wouldn't allow for that kind of thing but she had quick reflexes and could think on her feet and best off all knew every inch of her car and exactly how far she could push it. A few times that was enough to let her win.

After loosing the last job Jordan moved in with her current boyfriend, a small time car thief name Avery who thinks he's god gift to woman. It was only weeks after moving in with Avery that Ty popped up again back from his stint in the marines with the idea to open up Vulcan.

Jordan gave him what money she'd won from the races, several thousand, and told him it was her savings not sure how any of them would react to her night job. She continued to race though less after starting to work at Vulcan and didn't bother to move out of Avery's place even though she'd gotten a new job.

Possible Crimes for Victims
[Yes - No - Attempt]
Robbery: yes
Kidnapping:yes
Assault:yes
Arson:no
Blackmail:attempt
Forced Criminal Activity: yes
Rape:attempt
Murder: PM first

Jordan is approved, feel free to post her at your leisure.

Welcome to Burden City!

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Re: [NC][Seeking More Players Who Want an In-Depth Game!] Burden City
« Reply #293 on: December 01, 2010, 10:57:06 PM »
Without further ado, or what-have-you!

Act I. The Profile
Birth Name: Hiro Takahashi
Name: same as above, though racing name is “Pulse”
Alias: Racer name is “Pulse”, since technically street racing is against the law.
Age: 25, but looks barely out of his teens
Sex: male
Orientation:Heterosexual
Profession: Mechanic/Electrical Tech at the Vulcan
Role: Mild mannered mechanic by day, criminal thrillseeker by night.
Alignment: Neutral

Act II. The Diagnostics
Height: 5’11
Weight: 172 lbs
Hair: Brown, and in need of a cut, though he makes it work.
Eyes: Hazel
Skin: fair complexion, though it shows that he doesn’t get a lot of sun.
Birth Mark: No
Tattoos: Wolf tattoo settled between his shoulder blades, watching his back.
Distinguishable Mark/Scar: Negative

Act III. The Dossier
Likes: Miniskirts with high heels, and a girl who can handle stick. He’d much rather follow a woman’s tail lights than her ass, especially if she knows how to shake both. Average fetishes overall (standard sex, maybe a little food for fun), with a slightly unhealthy taste for large breasts.
Dislikes: Doesn’t do scat, or watersports. Knows nothing of bondage outside of the material he’s come across in magazines and movies, but something about it doesn’t seem right. Maybe he just needs to see it from another angle.
Attitude: soft-spoken, with a tendency to get excited about a particularly tasty idea. He’s at his happiest when he has something to work on.
Habit/Twitch: As “Pulse” he has a tendency to be the asshole the shackles of his upbringing never allowed himself to be. Pulse is his happy place when he’s not working.
Quote: Nan Desu ka?
Weapons: Handy with tools, if pressed, but no official weapons on his person. The character does have an Aikido background. Enough to fend off unorganized thugs.
History: Hiro was born in Hitachi, a city or two away from Tokyo. His father was a low level executive for the Hitachi Corporation founded in the same city. As such, Hiro was raised with a strong pride for both their city and the company that had given them so much. It was even through his father’s connections that he was able to work on his hobby in earnest. Using previous generation parts for study and scrap, Hiro found that he could do wondrous things if given enough time. He’d even placed third in his age division for the island’s amateur science expo. Though he’d admit that his study on sound probably wasn’t the best, he was sure the judges appreciated the good music in an otherwise boring competition.

Things took a turn for the worse when his father’s position was cut within the company. He was still too young to understand why, but he understood the sadness and shame his father took with him, and it burned his heart to see him in such a shape. After months of searching for a new position, his father was contacted for a position that mirrored his. The problem was that the job was in America. They would have to be ripped from all that they knew and loved, to make a life in a new place on the other side of the world.

His mother was the strong one, because she had to be. She was strong enough to help his father make the decision for the family’s future, and together they came to Burden City to start anew. Hiro’s life was a struggle to learn the many strange forms of English people spoke. Some was far different from what was in a book, though he supposed it was that way in his country too. He’d seen Tychus and his friends in junior high, but they seemed somehow unapproachable, and he was far too uncomfortable speaking English. He spent his two years of junior high mostly silent, but managed to land good grades anyway.

He grew more comfortable speaking English in High School, but the tendency to stay silent had become natural by then. It also almost got him in a heap of trouble. After accidentally tripping the star varsity quarterback of the football team, Hiro couldn’t muster the words to explain the situation, and it almost landed him in the hospital. The best he could get out was “Please. No trouble” before the guy and a few of his friends thought to get a little retribution with interest. Hiro looked around for help, and his eyes locked on Tychus’, but the guy didn’t budge, and neither did his crew.

The first guy that came at Hiro landed on the ground. Hard. There was always something interesting about how the body followed the arm as it was bent. A quick open-palmed shot to a second guy’s diaphragm, followed by a sweep took care of a second, but Hiro was still outnumbered, the things could only get worse. In his focus, he hadn’t realized that Tychus had moved behind him. When he bumped into him, he was about to lash out, until he saw who it was. “Easy…” was all he heard him say, before he had words with the quarterback.

He couldn’t remember exactly how it went, but he knew Tychus asked if the guy had a problem, which was followed by the QB’s complaint of being tripped. Tychus looked right at him “Huh…so…was it an accident?” To which Hiro nodded vigorously, “Then say sorry” Tychus simply said. Hiro bowed deeply to the quarterback, and then to the other guys on the ground “Sorry…very sorry. It was a mistake”. Tychus held his hands up and asked “So…we still have a problem?” To which the QB grudgingly said no, and departed with his friends.

Hiro bowed again to Tychus and gave his thanks, which was promptly returned with a “Forget about it”, along with some muttering about how he didn’t like that asshole anyway. It didn’t matter to Hiro why it was done, only that it was. There was a debt there, one that he wasn’t sure how he would repay it, until a chance encounter a few months later. There was a heated discussion on the proper way to route power for a custom light job. He stuck around to hear the argument, before one of Tychus’ crew noticed him. They didn’t say anything, but their eyes held the question “Well?”, at which point Hiro, shyly at first, then with more confidence explained the best way to perform exactly what they’d wanted to do. Suddenly everyone was looking him up and down, and Tychus only responded with a “Huh…well, there you have it people”

From there, he’d became their de facto go-to on everything electrical, though they had to bring him up to speed on the more finer points of an automobile. Though he was probably not seen as such, he did regard Tychus as a big brother figure, and the short couple of years spent in his presence were worth the pain of high school in a still strange place. He never forgot him or the gang when they left on to other things, and though sparingly, he tried to keep in touch with them through his University years in Japan, where he went as his parents wished.

One day he received an e-mail from Tychus. He was opening a new shop and still needed someone with a little electrical know-how. He was a different man by then, but the way he felt about Tychus remained. He immediately left the garage he’d worked for through school, and the group that reminded him of what he had back in the states. The garage was his finishing school, and he would return to Burden City to finally repay the guy who gave him direction. He’s been there since, helping to carve out a niche for the Vulcan in Burden City, one mod job at a time.


Possible Crimes for Victims
[Yes - No - Attempt]
Robbery: yes
Kidnapping: yes
Assault: yes
Arson: no
Blackmail: no
Forced Criminal Activity: yes
Rape: no
Murder: attempt, if for a good enough reason!



Offline Amelita

Re: [NC][Seeking More Players Who Want an In-Depth Game!] Burden City
« Reply #294 on: December 02, 2010, 12:15:28 AM »
Hiro "Pulse" Takahashi is approved... Welcome to Burden City! ;D

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Re: [NC][Seeking More Players Who Want an In-Depth Game!] Burden City
« Reply #295 on: December 02, 2010, 01:08:10 AM »
Michaela Cooper and Carrie Piper also approved, welcome to Burden!

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Re: [NC][Seeking More Players Who Want an In-Depth Game!] Burden City
« Reply #296 on: December 02, 2010, 10:21:36 AM »
Act I. The Profile


Birth Name: Jillian Cyclamen Rosetta Crow.

Name: Jillian ‘Jilly’ Crow.

Alias: Hush.

Age: 31-years-old (Current) and 27 to 29-years-old (Apparent).

Sex: Female.

Orientation: Heterosexual.

Profession: Supermodel/Bodyguard.
 
Role: Criminal.

Specialty: Personal hitman.

Alignment: Neutral until her brother, Charlie Crow, says otherwise.



Act II. The Diagnostics

Height: 5 feet and 9 inches.

Weight: 197 pounds.

Hair: Blackish-brown, her hair is long, thick and smooth that reaches to her midback with some highlights in her locks.

Eyes: Smoky green.

Skin: Bronze tan.

Birth Mark: N/A.

Tattoos: N/A.

Distinguishable Mark/Scar: A large discolored chemical burn on her throat when she is not wearing heavy cover up over it.



Act III. The Dossier

Likes: Her brother, naturally. Charlie calling her ‘Jilly’ when he does so. Her brother paying attention to her or giving her a ‘petting’ after doing something he wanted. Her older brother smiling at her genuinely and giving her a hug, for whatever reasons it maybe, Jillian likes this lot. Her brother letting her spends time with him during his meetings with others. He practically defines her from time to time. But she has other interests and likes too. Praise and attention lavished on her, no matter who it is. Luxuries like the manor she resides in, or the clothes and jewelery. Her jobs, both the normal one and the one she truly loves to do. Finishing a task in record time and in perfection no else. Perfection for her is the one of the biggest likes she has, seeing it as very important.

Studying and learning new things about things she doesn’t know. She likes being alone or with her brother when she wants to be, as Jillian likes her personal space. Also, she likes people respecting her wishes when she makes them known and acknowledging them. Reading and writing by herself, thinking of her thoughts and practicing her sign language skills. Unsurprisingly to some, she takes an interest in poker and is quite efficient at it. Jillian likes having people at her mercy, being able to play God with their lives and to choose what to do with them. Blood and screams from her victims as she kills them. Using grace and class during her kills, trying to perform even as she does something this violent and harsh. Sexually speaking, she is very willing and eager for whatever her brother is up for even if it means it’ll physically harm her in anyway.

Dislikes: Feeling like she’s being mocked or ridiculed by others. Letting Charlie down and seeing him so disappointed in her actions or thoughtlessness. Her own appearance, believing she is fat and ugly and unworthy of any love or appraisal when it comes to her looks. People reminding her of her dead parents, the very same ones she killed in cold blood, and having to fake her fake sadness of their deaths. Loud noises and people talking fast, since it remind her she doesn’t have her voice due to the Drain Cleaner Incident. Not being able to find her cover up or make up in time. Her scar, period, since it reminds her of the time she was unfaithful to Charlie and how much it hurt him. Also feeling like she was unable to perform a task to the best of her abilities, and/or feeling like she could have done better when she reviews her work. Lateness and tardiness from either herself or others, viewing punctuality as a must in her life.

Someone using her trust and faith in them, anyone that isn’t Charlie of course. Anyone trying to poke in to her and Charlie's private matters, for whatever reason it maybe. Jillian hates people looking or talking to her like she’s some kind of freak due to her mannerisms or after they’ve seen her burn. She hates people flirting or hitting on her and she loathes anyone that flirts with her brother and even more so if her beloved brother flirts back with that person. Feeling unworthy of her brother's love and sex, which is a lot of times thanks to him often agreeing with her sentiments. She does not like it when someone calls her ‘Jilly’ and it is not from her brother. And anything her brother hates, she hates as well with a burning passion. Anyone attempted to harm her brother or even jokingly mocks him immediately comes here as well.

Attitude: ‘Robotic’ is the best term to use for Jillian. Though having a regal bearing and grace that one could only be born of, she is a bit 'alien' to some when they first meet her and she does not talk, due to the destruction of her voice box. It does not help matters that is i cryptic and honestly 'weird' to many. She is cold and unreadable to others, having the best poker face you’ll ever come across. A woman of no words, she relies heavily on hand, body and face gestures to get her point of whatever she’s trying to ‘say’ across. She is stoic and still at first glance. Able to contain her emotions with skill and keeping it locked up tight. But she isn't unfeeling and harsh like others believe. Because, deep inside her, she is still a passionate and violent young woman. Lead on by her twisted views of the world thanks to her upbringing. Her emotions are strong, powerful and often depressingly negative.

Efficient and dependable, she hates feeling like she’s lagging behind or not pulling her own weight. Self-loathing and self-deprecating to herself due to the years of abuse Charlie made her go through. Jillian is smart and unfortunately knows this, using it to her advantage when the time calls. Has little sense of morality or decency, and has to actually study on that in order to look socially functional. She is not hesitant to play dirty and willing to fight to the bitter end if she feels like something she loves is threatened. This is a dangerous combination, seeing her job and eagerness to do anything for Charlie.

She is ruthless, observant and downright merciless when it comes to her killings. Feeling no empathy or remorse for her work, she takes some glee in killing people and playing God but mostly feels her pride at its best when Charlie praises her for her work. Though she is truly a masochist at heart thanks to Charlie, she likes playing with others and making them feel pain as if fascinated by their pains and anguish. Still needy and desperate for his love, she is willing to do many things to her and others that are degrading and downright cruel. A warped sense of loyalty and love for Charlie defines her the most, since that’s all she focuses on. When hurt or feeling betrayed by someone, her fury is dangerous as she snaps and goes into a berserk rampage against the person who wronged her.

Habit/Twitch: Makes expressive hand gestures due to her inability to talk. Clenching and unclenching her hands when angered and she is trying to hide it. She also has a habit of staring for long periods of time without blinking at all.

Quote: “Silence is the loudest of all actions.”

Weapons:

Guns:

Uzi .45 ACP (16 rounds per feed. She keeps two magazines on her whenever she has to do a job. She does not use it at all when in civilian.)

Sako TRG-22 sniper rifle (10 rounds per magazine. She keeps one magazine for it on her when she has to do a job. She does not use it at all when in civilian.)

Two Smith & Wesson 9mm (12 rounds per magazine. Keeps two magazines for both guns on her at all times and has them on her at all times. She keeps one on a shoulder carrier and another on a thigh carrier.)

Hand-to-Hand:

Various martial arts and fighting skills she has learned.

Butterfly knife (Keeps it on her at all times, tucked into her belt and hidden from view.)

Garrote (Tucks it in her belt and uses it only when she has a job to do. She does not use it at all when in civilian.)

Chemicals:
None.

History: Jillian was born to the Crow family on October 31, 1979. The Crow family is a rich and affluent family in Burden City. The Crow Clan, as they are usually called by the circles, have many politicians and businesses people of power coming from them either through blood or marriage. They also have a dirty and seedy reputation, with many vicious rumors (like rape, inbreeding and murder) about them circling about. Born to Michael and Samantha Crow, ambitious and powerful politicians, Jillian was shoved aside. As she grew up, her transparent neediness was noticed by all. Including the manipulative Charlie. Sensing a potential 'pawn', the 10-year-old boy took the 7-year-old girl under his wings and gave her what she wanted the most: attention and ‘love’. He made sure she would never leave him or trust others by abusing her mentally, physically and more so. When she was old enough, he started sexually using her as well in order to keep her collared to him and because he did love her in a twisted way. She accepted the abuse with glee, happy to make her brother satisfied in any fashion.

At the age of 19, during her time in college in the year, Jillian started to relationships with other boys as a rebellion against her brother when he started to pay less attention to her and more on his work, future and other women back at the Crow Manor. A boy she was with convinced her to have real sex with him since she had only sexually stimulated encounters but nothing more and to also film it on tape. She felt guilty for what she did afterward. She left the college so she could be with her brother again. The life changing moment for her happened when the year had just become 2000. Her brother discovered the sex tape she made and they were alone in the manor. In insane jealousy, he stormed to her room, grabbed and dragged her to the bathroom and forced her to drink drain cleaner as punishment for lying to him about this.

Instead of being scared, she accepted it and wanted to make amends to her Charlie somehow. She even claimed the drinking of the drain cleaner was her fault so he wouldn’t take the blame. She did many things for her brother and he eventually forgave her but made sure she never forgot this. Then the second life changing day came in the year 2002, when she was just 23-years-old but now properly trained in the art of fighting and killing thanks to Charlie. Her father and mother discovered their relationship when they found the two having sex in the private lounge. They confronted the children one night when everyone was out, threatening to separate the two from each other. The following hours when everyone went to bed, Jillian sneaked into her parents' room and killed them and made it look like it was a murder-suicide pact. Charlie then bribed the cops, making sure that it was agreed on that certain conclusion. With no direct relatives and them as of age already, they (meaning Charlie, since Jillian gave her shares of the company to him) had complete control of their power and wealth now.

She is still in Burden City, helping her brother run the Crow Company and all other branches the Crow Clan has had for generations. She does so by using the survival, training and military skills Charlie made her go through, becoming a personal criminal/hitman for him. She is known to the Burden City underworld simply as ‘Hush’, an assassin who is so mysterious no one even knows his/her gender. He/she kills seemingly random people, who are in reality people that were threatening the Crow Clan in anyway. Her calling card after a killing or massacre (usually a massacre) is slicing all the throats of the victims’ wide open and forcing the right hand to be stuffed inside of it. She has yet to be caught by anyone or even noticed.
« Last Edit: December 05, 2010, 07:38:32 AM by AngelsDemonsCode »

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Re: [NC][Seeking More Players Who Want an In-Depth Game!] Burden City
« Reply #297 on: December 03, 2010, 06:37:06 PM »
WIP

Act I. The Profile

Birth Name: Lana & Mark Piper
Name: Lana & Mark Piper
Alias: N/A
Age: 16 & 9
Sex: Female/Males
Orientation: Heterosexual
Profession: Students
Role: Victim
Alignment: Detective

Act II. The Diagnostics
Height: 5'4" / 4'8"
Weight: 107lbs./ 85lbs.
Hair: Dirty Blond
Eyes: Blue/ Brown
Skin: Pale
Birth Mark: She has a small Dark patch on her left thigh. He doesn't have any birth marks.
Tattoos: No
Distinguishable Mark/Scar: No
Model: Dakota Fanning / Paul Butcher

Act III. The Dossier
Likes: Lana likes simple things, quiet music and art. Mark, is an opposite. He likes everything loud and fast moving.
Dislikes: Both siblings have a definite hatred for criminals, even though Mark has a tendency to get into trouble both in school and with the cops.
Attitude:
Habit/Twitch:
Quote: [Either a quote that fits or perhaps something your character may say]
Weapons:

History: Lana and Mark Piper are the younger siblings of Carrie Piper. After the death of their mother (see Carrie's profile for details) Lana and Mark were forced into the system. Thanks to the quick thanking of they're older sister, she became they're legal guardian. It took some time for them to be found and things were hard for a while, but after the merger of their Mother's company, a home was made for the two of them and they weren't sent to a prep school in the richer part of the city. Despite having a house keeper and a nanny of sorts, they still remain a closer relationship with each other. With their Father not in the picture  and their Mother gone, they only have each other and they don't take that for granted.



Possible Crimes for Victims
[Yes - No - Attempt]
Robbery: yes
Kidnapping:yes
Assault:yes
Arson:no
Blackmail:yes
Forced Criminal Activity: yes
Rape:yes
Murder: no
« Last Edit: December 03, 2010, 08:22:14 PM by Queen Be Damned Sheiba »

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Re: [NC][Seeking More Players Who Want an In-Depth Game!] Burden City
« Reply #298 on: December 05, 2010, 06:57:00 AM »
Act I. The Profile


Birth Name: Charlie Cassius Coriander Crow.

Name: Charlie Crow.

Alias: N/A.

Age: 34-years-old (Current) and 28 to 32-years-old (Apparent).

Sex: Male.

Orientation: Heterosexual.

Profession: Businessman/Playboy.
 
Role: Corrupt Victim

Specialty: Personal hitman.

Alignment: Neutral until he needs something from someone.



Act II. The Diagnostics

Height: 6 feet and 2 inches.

Weight: 183 pounds.

Hair: Dark brown, styled and cropped in a neat, clean but casual and trendy fashion.

Eyes: Blue.

Skin: Healthy tan.

Birth Mark: A circle shaped mark on his left hand, right on the middle knuckle.

Tattoos: N/A.

Distinguishable Mark/Scar: N/A.



Act III. The Dossier

Likes: Upstaging and overshadowing the competition, leaving them in the dust and making them eat it at the same time. Rising to a bigger, better position and having people acknowledging it. Work being done right, of course. Charlie likes his jobs, both the legal and illegal, to be executed in a swift, efficient manner that requires little money and manpower. The Crow Company keeping up with today’s economics, and seeing it stays in tiptop shape. Results getting down and given to him since yesterday. He enjoys the good life like any rich patron of Burden City; he’s surprisingly simple when it comes to it. He doesn’t like to drive too flashy cars or go out dining in the most expensive areas, but he does indulge himself when it comes to clothing. He likes personalized tailor suits and fashionable sunglasses, both simple and nondescript that won’t bring attention to him when doing his dirty business. But when he does do the ‘good’ ones, he expects all the attention on him and pronto. Charlie also enjoys classical things, like music, television shows and books and having time to pursue in his hobby of stamp collecting.

Though he’s reluctant to say it out loud, he does have a soft spot for his sister, Jillian. And not just using her like the pawn he brought her up to be, but also as an actual human being. For some reason, he has a ‘weakness’ for her that, while not a good thing, it’s something he’s not willing to let go even if it’s risky. He likes to spend time with her when it’s not concerning manners of their work and either screwing her brains out or simply ‘talking’ to her or spending time with her. Whether or not it’s because he genuinely cares for her being is anyone’s guess. He’s sexually deviant, in a sense, since he’s willing to explore new and rather dark areas of sex more than once, even if his partners are not that willing to try. It stems from his need to be in control of the situation, down to whoever is part of the situation as well. He likes orderings others around and controlling their every move, fancying himself as God from time to time. Enjoys challenges and situations where he has to think and ponder his next move, but he likes the easy situations as well and they are more preferred.
 
Dislikes: Someone or anything mentioning his parents. Period. Charlie also doesn’t like being compared to his dead father, the successful industrialist Michael ‘Iron Man’ Crow. The memory or thought of his dead father makes him bitter and angry. He basically hates the memory of his father and/or mother, but his father especially. Despising the man who raised him, and at the same time bullied him, taunted him and his goals and made him feel inferior, he hates being compared or forced to recall the dead man. Charlie also hates his mother, who he thinks was a ‘surly’ and ‘useless’ woman when not ‘whoring herself for votes’. He basically has very negative views on his parents. The man also doesn’t like it when someone challenges his authority and leadership in regards of him leading the Crow Company or anything else that he leads.

His choices and/or actions being questioned flat out, or someone rebelling against him. The due attention and praise not being showered on him when a job is accomplished. When someone especially tries to steal his sister's attention away from him, since he doesn't like competition on something that he deems as 'his'. Being labeled as ‘weak’ by others for something he genuinely cares about, due to his easily hurt pride and ego. He hate anyone that is attempting or trying to hurt Jillian when they’re not doing their illegal activities and also making him believe that it was somehow his fault or doing. Guilt and remorse for his actions is a rare thing and he would rather keep it that way. Being failed one way or another and he has to shoulder the consequences of it all. Being refused or denied to something that he wants or demands to have. Forced to actually wait and be patient also applies here as well. Business deals becoming sour for one thing or another and left to hang.

Attitude: Charlie is the complete opposite of his little sister, Jillian, in terms of jolliness and likability. With wit and crafted humor, he uses it to his advantage in order to get what he wants from others. There is no need of gestures for him unless the occasion calls for it since he can easily capture the room with his presence and conversation skills alone. He is very robust and cheerful when in social gatherings or meetings, a suave and charming man that can leave you feeling giddy and excited. He is also a social chameleon, able to turn himself into this person or that when the situation calls for it. Sharp and with an eye for detail, he can read the situation and atmosphere he’s in and easily adjust himself in order to slide into that community better. Cool and calm even when faced with danger, he won’t let anything (except his ego and the mention of his parents, of course) get under his collar and just take it all with a smile. He is a man of opportunities, making sure to keep his eye out on the best situation for him and will jump on it when given the chance. The man won’t hesitate to drag others into this if needed, even if it hurts them because sacrifices must be made. Just long as he isn’t part of the sacrifices of course.

And he is also a sociopath, through and through. While he’s a charming, witty and engaging sociopath, he’s still one nonetheless. It’s just he hides it very well. He is intelligent and socially educated, with the former coming naturally to him and the latter being able to read others through their actions or words. He is one of a kind and, unfortunately, knows this all too well. When he does something with (usual) perfect results, he expects praise and fawning right off the bat. Due to this, and Jillian’s willingness to do the said praising and fawning, he has an easily bruised ego. Passive aggressive, he can easily insult you with some backhand compliments with an easy going smile and actually make you believe that they are compliments. That’s him at his best. At worse, he’ll snap. But not in explosive manner, though he does sometimes, but in a cold, calculating fashion before extracting his vindication against you.

He is a grand manipulator of emotions, words and thoughts, having done it for such a long time. His methods are harsh, cruel and very unusual due to his creativity that he channels in brutal, brutal fashion. Done in a subtle, the man can easily take what you said five minutes ago, twist it beyond recognition and make you actually believe that’s exactly what you said. Having an actual heart buried in all of this negativity, he shows gentleness and compassion to Jillian and only Jillian when he feels like it’s ‘safe’ to do so. When he feels like its ‘wise’ to do so, he’ll do the same. Charlie is a naturally competent and magnificent host, and can actually be fair and kind to those who come to his house or business with no ill intent. But if he feels like you're threatening him or his life or, he won't say, Jillian - expect hell to be paid. Usually he does that through money or force.  He believes anyone and anything can be brought, and he has no problem using his bank accounts to get what he wants. It that doesn’t work, he believes beating someone into submission also works.

Habit/Twitch: Giving a tight smile that doesn’t reach his eyes when he’s infuriated. Petting Jillian’s hair when trying to calm himself or her and calling her ‘Jilly’.

Quote: "Hell or glory, I don't want anything in between."

Weapons:

Guns:

.357 Desert Eagles (9 rounds per magazine. Keeps two magazines on him in either his suitcase or inner coat pocket of whatever he wears. Keeps this with him at all times since it's properly registered and noted.)

Beretta 96 (15 rounds per magazine. Keeps two magazines on him and both are in his suitcase. Uses it for his shadier business transactions. He will not use it when doing legal activities or in civilian.)

Hand-to-Hand:

Butterfly knife. (Keeps it with him at all times, in his suitcase. Does not use it for himself and instead has it just in case Jillian loses hers or something.)

Jillian, his sister. (He is not kidding at this aspect. There is a fucking good reason why he trained her so intensively when she was younger.)

Chemicals:

A syring filled with a clear colored sleeping chemical that knocks one out when administered. (Keeps with him at all times, usually kept in his suitcase or in his pocket of whatever he is wearing. He uses this for Jillian, and only her period, when she becomes stressed or too angry.)

History: Charlie Crow was born on November 12, 1976 to the infamous Crow Clan. The family, when he was born, was already plagued by supposed scandals and whispered rumors of inbreeding, insanity and malicious deceit towards one another. If the scandalous hear say about the Crows were all true, than he certainly fit right in with the family with his intelligent and cunning nature. Though he was still a young lad, he was already showing signs of a budding genius and heartless man. His parents; Michael and Samantha Crow, saw this budding potential in him and started to groom and train him to be the proper heir for the Crow Company. A large and successful company that specializes in just about in all production of electronics and advertisements that ran about in Burden City. He was given whatever he wanted when he demanded it due to his status and was rarely punished for his bad deeds when he was younger. When his sister, Jillian Crow, was born and introduced her to the rest of the immediate family, he didn’t really care for her and often ignored her since he didn't need anything from her. But, when he was 10-years-old, he noticed how needy and desperate she was for attention and he realized he could use her to his advantage.

He quickly showered and gave her attention, making her trust him and only him while brainwashing her to fawn and adore him like she should. He quickly started to abuse and torment her emotionally and mentally to make sure she was 'his' officially. He wasn't above on gaslighting, abusing or manipulating her to ensure that. He kept this up for ten It worked, as Jillian stayed loyal and true to him only. Even when she left for college in 1998, she 19 and he 21, for college. During this time, he had to focus on his job in the company since his father continued to threaten him to leave him out of his will and strip any claims he has on the company. And the bastard continued to poke holes and issues in what ever he did. That meant ignoring Jillian while she was in college for both his and her shake. He knew of her other flings but thought nothing of it, since he needed to focus on his work and life. His decision was further proven when she returned home just to be with him, leaving him with smug sense of right that only lasted until the year 1999, when everyone was out of manor celebrating the approaching New Millennium, and found the sex tape she made with one of the boys.

Hence, he forced her to drink drain cleaner as punishment and has no qualms with her taking the blame for the incident when it left her voiceless. She stuck to him and stayed loyal after that, like she should. Another, and the biggest, life changing moment happened when he was 2002 and he had just turned 25-years-old on his birthday. In order to celebrate it, he and Jillian had sex in the private lounge but their parents accidentally walked in on them. His parents confronted him with this and threatened to not only disown him or strip him from their wills but they would also have him arrested and be separated by Jillian for the rest of his natural life. In reply to this, he ordered his newly trained assassin of a sister to go into their parents' room late that night and kill them in what would look like an apparent murder-suicide pact. He bribed anyone involved in it to say thate. With no direct relatives and already of age, he and Jillian took over the company their tragically departed parents left behind to them in their still valid wills since the ones they were making that night were not officially legal.

He is still in Burden City, controlling all of Crow Company (due to Jillian giving her 50% shares of it) and all branches under it. In order to make sure no one attempts to step on his turf, he has his trained sister go out and kill the competition or threats under the alias "Hush" under his orders and directions. He and his sister haven't been caught for any of their deeds to this day, and he's pretty certain that will continue on until his twilight years. He also claims what he had done to his parents was 'for the best' in his life and feels no remorse for what he has done to the two.

Possible Crimes for Victims
[Yes - No - Attempt]
Robbery: Yes.
Kidnapping: Yes.
Assault: Yes.
Arson: Yes.
Blackmail: Yes.
Forced Criminal Activity: Yes.
Rape: No.
Murder: Planning something.
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Re: [NC][Seeking More Players Who Want an In-Depth Game!] Burden City
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Act I. The Profile
Birth Name: [The name given at the time of your character's birth.]
Name: [The name your character goes by now.]
Alias: N/A
Age: 17 (going on 18)
Sex: Female
Orientation: Pansexual
Profession:  Student
Role: Victim
Alignment: Neutral

Act II. The Diagnostics
Height: 5'7"
Weight: 122 lbs
Hair: Long Black Hair with shorter cut mid length bangs (see picture)
Eyes: Dark blue sapphire (almost black)
Skin: Pale, Light
Birth Mark: yes, a dark crescent shaped mark on her middle left side, about two inches in size.
Tattoos:No
Distinguishable Mark/Scar: a long stitched scar along her upper thigh and a small one on the corner of her left eye

Act III. The Dossier
Likes: (See Players Ons)
Dislikes: Scat, Vore, Gore, Watersports, Pedophilia, Facials (of the Semen variety)
Attitude: Soft spoken and quiet unless provoked -- then she is brash and stubborn
Habit/Twitch: Lip biting and hair touching
Quote: "Life is what you make of it."
Weapons: A nail file, small swiss army knife set (with corkscrew, knife, bottle opener,etc), and a small keyring size can of pepper spray.
History:  Why did your Victim move to Burden City?

Possible Crimes for Victims
[Yes - No - Attempt]
Robbery: Yes
Kidnapping: Yes
Assault: Yes
Arson: No
Blackmail: Yes
Forced Criminal Activity: Attempt
Rape: Attempt
Murder: Attempt