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Offline Chevalier des PoissonsTopic starter

Another Poem
« on: September 18, 2010, 05:17:19 PM »
So I have decided to make a new rhyme
While I still have time
Before I have to go to sleep

And here I put my first verse
With another line
To my own universe
Then everything is so fine

So I can build my poem only for you

I will need a good theme
Or all my sweet rhymes
Will mean nothing to you

Talking about the blue sky
Linking it to your blue eyes
My words love you
Yes, my dear, they do

Give me another of rhyming tips
Just for her to see
How much I want her with me
So I can feel the taste of her sweet lips

Now I am going to move on
...Wait, I forgot something
I have to add this feeling
And maybe even a pretty blue moon

That is still not enough
These rhymes are a little bit rough
Will you help me
Or we'll leave it be?

But what is a good feeling
If there's nobody here for me to share?
Tell me you are not going anywhere
So my rhyme will then have a happy ending

And I have built my poem only for you


September 18th, 2010
Original concept by me

Offline defientslave

Re: Another Poem
« Reply #1 on: September 28, 2010, 08:20:44 AM »
i liked your poem it was unique i have never heard one like that before

Offline Chevalier des PoissonsTopic starter

Re: Another Poem
« Reply #2 on: September 28, 2010, 02:19:51 PM »
Thank you very much for your comment ^^ I am very glad you enjoyed the poem.