NinaN, I have no problem with having a female writing partner playing a male. I looked over your O/O's, and even your past post's, and I think we can possibly write well together.
I really liked your idea/spin on the game; his past history, and motivations for acting inappropriately was what I was looking for. Sadie, wouldn't be completely innocent or naive, she's not a virgin, and her history tells of her taking care of herself at a young age. Despite that, she's a fairly outgoing, and happy girl still settling into womanhood. And the idea of someones eyes actually studying that most private part of herself makes her knees shake and her palms sweat.
She's supposed to be the victim, he's in a position of power and his desires caused him to act inappropriately towards this girl; and at first she even feels like a victim. But after a few days to think it over, she comes to the startling revelation that she can't stop thinking about it, even during private times when she should be thinking about naked men and throbbing members(that part made me laugh.)
Depending on how far you want this game to go, I can see her going back for another "examination," if only because she can't help herself.