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Offline Edhel TariTopic starter

WOULD YOU BE MINE?
« on: July 05, 2010, 06:28:45 PM »
WOULD YOU BE MINE?

What if I approached.....intent
on touching you till my resolve is spent,
caressing soft hair between finger tips
searching for your hidden strength.
Would you be mine?

And if I...with all my feminine charm,
your defenses my goal to disarm,
pressing soft against your manly chest,
face to face, breast to breast.
Would you be mine?

What if I...gazing into your eyes,
discarded your shirt, I most despise,
where lips meet mine, and flesh to flesh,
and heaven is lined in carnal depths
Would you be mine?

And if I...arms round shoulders, sway
to the rhythmic beats your heart will play.
Shyness, nor feigned naivety displayed
as I take dominion over my foolish prey.
Will you be mine?

What if I..cascading on your bed,
became a gentle captor instead.
both lost within our animal lust
moaning in ecstasy with every thrust.
Would you be mine?

And if you....at the edge of madness, cum,
body shaking in dark, forbidden emotion,
waves of aftershocks break free your soul,
as I ride the waves to worlds unknown....
Would you be mine?

Would you?....be mine.

Offline Zaphod

Re: WOULD YOU BE MINE?
« Reply #1 on: July 18, 2010, 01:10:56 PM »
This one is really beautiful, Edhel.  :-)

Offline mongoose

Re: WOULD YOU BE MINE?
« Reply #2 on: July 23, 2010, 01:17:34 PM »
I really liked that, particularly the way you laid the stanzas out. 

Offline Kenshin

Re: WOULD YOU BE MINE?
« Reply #3 on: July 23, 2010, 05:59:36 PM »
Thank you for sharing :) Very good poem. 10/10

Offline Edhel TariTopic starter

Re: WOULD YOU BE MINE?
« Reply #4 on: July 23, 2010, 09:27:24 PM »
Thank you all for replying, I really appreciate your compliments, they mean a lot to me.   :-)

Offline Kenshin

Re: WOULD YOU BE MINE?
« Reply #5 on: July 27, 2010, 05:07:22 PM »
I shared this with a friend the other day as the words were quite beautiful, and I did not comment. So now I am here to let you know that your poem is awesome, thank you very much for sharing it.

Offline Edhel TariTopic starter

Re: WOULD YOU BE MINE?
« Reply #6 on: August 11, 2010, 11:14:36 AM »
Thank you, Arcaina, that is a great compliment indeed.  I'm so glad you stopped by to share that with me.   :D