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Offline PixiliciousTopic starter

The Pleasure Factor
« on: May 06, 2010, 11:52:49 AM »
This is one of two poems that I wrote as a final project for my creative writing class this semester.  Thank you to Chelemar for helping me to clean it up a bit! <3  ~Pixi Kisses~

The Pleasure Factor

Wrapped up underneath silken sheets
Bodies pressed together
The warmth from his skin seeping onto hers

Breathing harsh and labored
Moans from every space
Bodies slapping against each other
Places that he could find that she hadnít discovered

Nails scratching along soft skin
Soft hisses of pleasure
The mix that cannot be separated
Her mind couldnít process what he was doing to her all at once

Then that final moment when climax approaches
Nerves being set on fire
She tries to speak but his mouth on hers is all she needs

When calm approaches
After the throes of passion
The body is once again satisfied
In the afterglow, his arms tight around her, she is secure
She is his

Offline alxnjsh

Re: The Pleasure Factor
« Reply #1 on: May 06, 2010, 01:20:10 PM »
Exceptional Pixi, thanks for sharing  ;D

Offline lordray

Re: The Pleasure Factor
« Reply #2 on: May 07, 2010, 10:40:02 AM »
erotic . love it

Offline saad

Re: The Pleasure Factor
« Reply #3 on: May 31, 2010, 07:44:53 AM »
WOW! loved it!