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Offline Chevalier des PoissonsTopic starter

The story I wrote
« on: May 02, 2010, 05:07:31 PM »
In a piece of paper
I wrote a story about her
Her face was so bright
She could even light out the whole night

This is no fairytale
No matter how precious is her smile
Sun or moon in the sky
There is nothing as sweet as her eyes

With one drop of ink
I could tell everything my heart could think
Of having you with me
Flying up to the sky for the world to see

-

And we will fly
Right away into the blue sky
Just you and me

I am with her
From today until we reach forever
Ever again

-

My heart is set sailing
Drowning in her feeling
As I take the red princess
Into a blue kiss

In my dream
I don't know anymore who I am
Without her

In my soul
I wonder where should we go
To be as one

-

And today I wonder
But I have no clue
Of what to do with her
So this dream becomes true

...In the story I wrote


May 2nd, 2010
Original concept by me. Based on a dream I had yesterday.

Offline Fairehawke

Re: The story I wrote
« Reply #1 on: May 03, 2010, 09:15:25 PM »
Chev is there a person you ever think about when writing? A muse? A former gf? current? just wondering, because I aspire to write like this. I am better at novels then poems.

Offline Chevalier des PoissonsTopic starter

Re: The story I wrote
« Reply #2 on: May 03, 2010, 09:17:21 PM »
Chev is there a person you ever think about when writing? A muse? A former gf? current? just wondering, because I aspire to write like this. I am better at novels then poems.

Actually not. I don't have the concept of a "muse". I simply create the idea that amuses me, surrender to my feeling and explore the intensity of it when I am writing.

Basically I fall in love for someone who doesn't exist at each poem.

Offline Fairehawke

Re: The story I wrote
« Reply #3 on: May 05, 2010, 06:32:55 PM »
Ah that makes sense. No wonder the writing is so universal. As in anyone can use it. I have to admit it makes me want to get to know you on a more personal level.

Offline Chevalier des PoissonsTopic starter

Re: The story I wrote
« Reply #4 on: May 05, 2010, 06:43:07 PM »
Ah that makes sense. No wonder the writing is so universal. As in anyone can use it. I have to admit it makes me want to get to know you on a more personal level.

Oh, you honor me very much with those words, again.

Thank you <3