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Offline Chevalier des PoissonsTopic starter

Tears in the Rain
« on: March 10, 2010, 06:16:40 PM »
Here comes the night
From somewhere out of sight
And away goes the day
To somewhere I can't say

I could not see
I could not say
Those words you want from me
so you went away

I can feel the rain
Washing all my pain
Don't forget about me

-

Shadows and nightmares
At your eyes I stare
Tell me what do you see
When you look right back at me

Out there on the street
I am back on my feet
How will I ever say
The words that will keep you in my way?

-

I suffer from my pain
I let out tears in the rain
All because I can't say

...I love you

And the lovely moon flies
Sleeping on the heaven's skies
Looking over me

-

I am going nowhere
Maybe I will find you there
And you may finally see
You don't need those words from me

-

Angel in the sky
Hear me when I cry
I would like to ask you

...don't give up on me

Hold me in your arms
And everything is forgiven
For my words were finally given

-

Here comes the day
From somewhere I can't say
And away goes the night
To somewhere out of sight

March 10th, 2010.
Original conception by me. Special thanks to the user Rainsinger for the wonderful title on her Ons and Offs, which inspired me to write that poem

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Re: Tears in the Rain
« Reply #1 on: March 11, 2010, 01:44:47 AM »
ummmm... this is special and very very good.

Offline Chevalier des PoissonsTopic starter

Re: Tears in the Rain
« Reply #2 on: March 11, 2010, 03:37:34 PM »
Oh, thank you very much =D I appreciate your comment. ^^

Offline Tangi

Re: Tears in the Rain
« Reply #3 on: March 11, 2010, 03:40:54 PM »
I think that was absolutely beautiful like everything else you have written that I've read.

Offline Chevalier des PoissonsTopic starter

Re: Tears in the Rain
« Reply #4 on: March 11, 2010, 04:10:08 PM »
Thank you very much again, Tangi. Do you have a favorite poem so far?

Offline Bella90

Re: Tears in the Rain
« Reply #5 on: March 11, 2010, 09:24:08 PM »
i loved it!! ;D

Offline Tangi

Re: Tears in the Rain
« Reply #6 on: March 12, 2010, 12:03:45 AM »
This one is definitely 1 of my favorites, but its a long list.