F for creative M. High fantasy, plot heavy, dynamic relationship

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Chantal

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Important: a lot of details here can be changed after discussion, and adjusted to my partner preferences. If you like it a bit, throw me a PM


A small, petite woman seems to be a girl at the first sight, but the second look reveals rounded hips and small but fully grown breasts. She is a princess, or maybe a priestess... she is always heavily guarded by an elite group of people. From the commons no one really knows why. There are gossips, that she is sick, unbelievably ugly or just very precious to the king, kingdom, someone else.

There is a thug, or maybe just a random boy, or a prince... your choice. Like everyone they speak of her for some time after she shows herself to the public, what happens now and then. Your character manages , or maybe by coincidence took a good look at her and realizes she looks beautiful, like all delicate princess would look for someone like him. He speaks of her, friends laugh at him, or maybe he takes a bet that he will steal something from her. This way or another he decides to take a challenge and get closer to her, sneak through the guards, climb the tower, swim across water... anything what we decide.

So he manages to get to her, even steal a kiss from her maybe. Problem is she is not as much guarded from people as people are guarded from her. Why? Not decided yet. Maybe her blood is special, needed for a certain spell or when she bleeds something bad happens. Or maybe something extremely good for someone who made the cut. Or maybe something else.
The guy gets addicted...?

Or maybe he is a king who just conquered this nation and heard of this guarded woman and her unspeakable beauty which drives men mad. He wants her at his court. The priests refuse to the level that they can reignite the war. He is surprised so much and got curious that he agrees on just having one glance at her. They won't take her to him, he has to come there on his own. He should behead them all for this, but he is so curious that he accepts. It turns out that she is pretty indeed but nothing spectacular. The king is disappointed. However, when she moves to walk away he sees horrible scars on her back in the split of her dress. Scars clearly made by something sharp in a regular way. He grabs her arm to stop her and move the dress to the side (or something similar) to have a better look, but his ring cuts her skin lightly accidentally. It is nothing serious, just a small drop of blood appears, which is smeared on his skin too. And she says one sentence to him, very enigmatic, maybe odd. Maybe she sounds like crazy or gets his attention instantly. The king discovers she has multiple scars, but the priests take her away instantly. The king can't stop thinking of her, he sees her in his dreams and is almost driven mad by lust?.

The girl comes form the line of the prophets, now nearly fully wiped from existence. Her family was basically bread by the temple for generations, allowing only one or two girls to live at the same time. They have the ability to speak or paint the future if their skin is cut to bleed. All wounds leave scars and the damaged skin can't be "used" again. So the temple made piles of money from these prophecies. The other problem with their blood is it makes people insane at contact. So in order to breed them the priests chose a man, make him inseminate the girl and when she gets pregnant safely, they usually kill the man as defloration is never safe. Insanities take various forms, the more prophet's blood gets contact with other human, the worse. Giving birth and delivering the baby is at very high risk.

Or maybe there are no priests but crazy rich family which runs their own kingdom basically. One of the girs in generation always has this special gift and they keep them locked in large tower. They can have everything they want but freedom or own kids.

The girl hates her life, though she understands she is a danger for other people, however being "milked" from her blood for money is horrible enough for her to want to escape at the first opportunity. Maybe she damaged her skin and touched the king a little bit hoping it would change her life somehow? Or maybe because she had no chance to damage the skin she bites her lip enough to bleed and kisses him?

She can be traded, kidnapped, or maybe they will be on the run, wanting to leave everything behind. Or maybe he is not the kind, just his son.


My expectations from the story
I want to see the male character so strongly driven to have the girl that he is willing to sacrifice nearly everything to get her. However he sees what is happening to him but he can't afford to appear mad (or can he?). Or maybe he doesn't care. Maybe he kidnaps her and runs away. Or maybe he makes everyone to bow to his will and have her. The initial strength of the feeling/ desire for her we can discuss. Can be just a stubborn love or maddening desire, where he eventually kills himself, herself, or she kills him. Or something else. I don't expect this story to be long.

I want to try to write a delicate character, gentle as a flower, physically. Mentally she will be as strong as iron. Someone who fights for own freedom and when she gets one bite, she wants everything else. She was kept in prison almost her won life, so her character features may not be quite normal. I think she will fall for the man quite fast, but the desire to experience more will make her careless and selfish. This all is open for discusson.

Their relationship is supposed to change, grow more and more maddening.


Important bit about me: Smut in my stories doesn't play major part (30:70 / 20:80). It is important, but I am not willing to write one scene after another. If they have sex every night I would rather fade it to black unless something changes significantly and doesn't make it boring. Or if the scenes are separated by a lot of action between. Please read my O&Os.



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