Something I've been working on! MxF AND MxM (A bromance thing sorry guys)

Started by Exodice, November 09, 2017, 11:10:31 PM

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Ok so firstly this is a world building thing I'm going for. I've done basic mock up and stuff but I want to build a world with someone and I also am doing this to improve my writing abilities since I do want to atleast publish some books in my life time.
I've been lurking on here for about 2 months and I finally decided to not half ass or just post something I like but to see if I can get a story done with you wonderful people!
It is adult in theme obviously. I even have a fun character I want to discuss. It wont be Posted since I haven't done their summary yet.

Oh right soooo the genre. Well time to list em

Fantasy
Small tragedy
Struggle
Coming of age
Adult/mature....its sex. There's going to be sex
Slight Gore


With that said I'm going to throw my caution to the wind and post. REMEMBER THIS IS BARE BONES AND I WANT TO BUILD A WORLD T_T. Dont judge me..





Dark elves: Dark purple skin and red Irises. They are the more violent of the elves but still just as clever. They appreaciate nature as much as their nature elf counter parts but will NOT tolerate the disrespect of it. They were the warriors of the elves but since they split off from the nature elves they live amongst themselves in a different continent (more on that soon) and have not done much contact with the outside world. These elves specialize in weaponized spells and soem fortification. They can live up to 4 times as long as a normal human and last 6 times as long in a fight. The dark elves while believing in nature also have buildings similar to the humans. While no building is high enough to blow the moon they are higher then the average nature elf housing settlements. They also have carraiges for easier movent on they're smooth roads.  These elves reside on the continent of Korenth and the capital is called Lankis.

Nature Elves: The cousins of the dark elves and peaceful in nature. They believe in the good will of any race and cherish life above all else.  While they do hunt and kill for food they always pray after a kill, before dinner and after. They are more proficient in magic than the dark elves who use more weaponized spells.  the nature elves specialize in healing and fortifying themselves.  They live twice as long as the dark elves thanks to this. The elves major cities and towns are as you would think. Very naturist in concept. Trees are usually the surrounding element in the towns. The buildings are made from stone and wood. The cities are built from stone, white marble, and they're roads are slick and smooth. No carriages here just the elves dont believe in animal labor.  They let the surrounding environment grow in some places so parks and gardens are a very common sight.  They live off the land and give thanks to everything they acquire from it. Clothes, meat and other necessities

Humans: The odd race out in this story.  They live on the east half of shalemore and believe in growth more than anything.  They believe that expanding their race as far as possible will allow them to survive against all odds.  Knowing that the elves are outlasting them in life span they have colonized almost all of east shalmore with their structures and are planning an expedition to the unknown fourth continent to expand there as well.  As the elves live on the west side of the continent they have given up (or have they?) on expanding to that side. They do not wish to start a war when they know they will loose. As humans have been on that continent longer they are the dominant faction. The cities and Towns of the humans are industrial. Stone roads line the street, lamp posts on every sidewalk. Horse pulled carriages and tall buildings being built or already built, giving the city(s) a skyline.  The skies are usually but can sometimes get murky due to the exhausts of the steam trains that run from major city to major city. None of which connect to the elvish cities.

Shalemore: Housing both the humans and a large majority of the Nature elves the massive continent in the center of the world. Surrounded by 4 other continents the massive land mass has trade routes upon it to go through all that house life.  There is a massive river 500 meters in diameter starting around the neck of the continent going all the way to the tail seperating the two halfs. Its east side has been industrialized and buildings and trains can be seen from hill and mountain tops. The west said is almost completely covered in trees. kelrion the Elven capital can be seen shimmering at all times of the day from the hill and mountain tops.

The Rift Episode 1:
Duro Ernelis AKA Prince Duro Voidblight: Half dark and light elf. Boyish in nature and free in spirit. Has a strong sense of respect for the nature and magic around him.  Stands at 6'4 plantinumish hair dropping down to his the middle of his back usually wearing a Black Tunic and pants with a silver belt. An Bow and Arrow are his weapons of choice. Only ever used it for hunting and unknown to him or the rest of his world for that matter, he is the sole heir to the elven kingdom and bastard child to their king.
Magic is being used upon him to mask his eye color. They burn a bright blue like his mothers but in actuality are silver with red irises. (Mixed blood and what not). And is Hair which is platinum blonde should pure white.
19 in age.

Exodus Balxina AKA Exodus Voidblight: Duro's Friend and unknown half brother. (the king gets around) Liek Duro he knows nothing of his lineage and has the same magic casted upon him to mask his eyes and hair. His eyes are green and is a carbon copy of his brother. Boyish and strong willed he believes there isa  greater purpose for them and wishes to leave the village and find his own way in life. He is stubborn however and enjoys playing pranks on the village elders while Duro cheers him on.
17 in age.

Aravae Miana: half cousin to Duro and a persoinality to reflect her flaming hair. Her blue eyes are like a pale crystal. Always speaks her mind and not afraid to let the boys know she will do what she needs to do to win. Not a soft girl but still a girl none the less. She has been with Duro, Exodus and Nielah since they were all children and thinks of them as family. Her father has trained her in combat since she was a child as well.  Her family comes from the elves that fought in the War that divided the continent of Shalemore.
17 in age.


Nielah Ronala:  The friend of Duro, Exodus and Neilah. She has been with them every single day since they met and never leaves them alone.  The voice of reason in their small group and the shyest of them all.  A girl through and through. She loves horses and always wears a bracelet made of flowers made by Duro in their youth. Her eyes are grey and her hair is a golden yellow.  She loves Duro and knows Exodus is aware of this. In a rare moment of anger, and albeit panic, she trapped Exodus in a bundle of bushes until he promised he wouldn't say a word to Duro about how she feels. Exodus has never forgotten this moment and stays far away from bushes when around her.
18 in age.


The character here are the one's I would be in control of. Or If someone else want to try one out sure thing! I'm not one to fuss. Alright so now comes the part I'm actually more nervous about, the pics.
I'm pretty sure I'm forgetting stuff here but I can't remember it for the life of me! Anyways what I'm looking for is semipara, para and even short responses are fine.  Looking for male and female I'm down for it all bros and madams. I dont know why i said that but yeah.

Now do understand I can not draw.  Atleast not well enough to my own standard so I've gotten some stuff from google and pintrest and blah blah you get the idea. I'll be giving off the images I've set in mind for this.






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[How big the river for Shalemore Would Be]


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[Ok so the Third person is too modern and this is set in like middle ages with some industrial stuff going on. So the First, second and fourth are what I'm aiming for in terms of casual human Clothes.]


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[Ok so again the first person is too modern for my idea but everything else fits.]


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[A female elven dress. Think formal occasion]


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[Again think formal but this is for male elves]


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[I just like this dress  :-)]


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[I feel like I should have gave you guys this one right away. lol. #2 and 7 are normal attire to me. You guys should get where im going here]


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[Human Male armor. Ok so not that Color but you get the idea I hope]


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[This one is like a distinguished knight. Not Ridiculous on the sword but yeah]


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[Female knight. (yes the can be knights too!)]


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[Archer female. Men can also be archers! Just giving the idea here]


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[All of that SASS!]


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[Again males can be archers too. Just the idea]


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[Ok so the pauldrons. See how the scales go down the shoulder? The number of scales indicates rank. The female pic has it too I believe]


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[The human main city MorningGarde.  Totally forgot to name this one!]


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[Excluding the bird man! Yeah basically that!]


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[Kelrion the elven capital :D]


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[And this is it during the day time!]