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Author Topic: Quiet Moments  (Read 853 times)

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Offline AthosTopic starter

Quiet Moments
« on: May 28, 2017, 09:47:10 PM »
It’s the quiet moments that are truly dangerous.
When the white noise of life dies away,
That is when the doubts come calling.
Needling, nagging, burrowing.
They force themselves,
Ever deeper,
Into the places where I once found solace and peace.
A sudden gasp wakes me in the middle of the night,
Waking me from my sleep.
A vision of unimaginable loss,
The premonition of a nameless doom.
Even in the sweet moments,
The beautiful moments,
The doubts remain.
Always there.
Always needling,
Always nagging,
Always burrowing,
Ever deeper,
Into the places where I once found solace and peace,
Always.

Offline PassionInsane

Re: Quiet Moments
« Reply #1 on: June 27, 2017, 06:58:22 AM »
Mmmm... sublime

Offline AthosTopic starter

Re: Quiet Moments
« Reply #2 on: June 27, 2017, 07:18:46 AM »
Thank you. I'm glad you like it.

Offline mh0131

Re: Quiet Moments
« Reply #3 on: July 25, 2017, 06:16:03 PM »
This is beautiful. I am a poetry writer myself. Your work intrigues me and I hope to see more of it :-)

Offline AthosTopic starter

Re: Quiet Moments
« Reply #4 on: July 28, 2017, 11:03:29 AM »
Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it.