A Love Letter to the Demon in my Head

Started by Athos, May 28, 2017, 09:41:40 PM

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Athos

I love the way you look at me.
Beautiful eyes,
Stripping my soul bare.
I hate the way you look at me,
Because I know that one day
You will no longer look at me.
On that day, I know, my soul will be torn to pieces.
It is inevitable,
Certain.
And yet tomorrow when I see you,
I will strip another part of my soul away,
Just to get you to look at me.
It is inevitable,
Certain.
I will do it so that in the years to come,
Long after you have gone from my life,
When all I can feel are broken pieces of soul,
I will remember the way you looked at me.
And I will smile.

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"Weep," said Athos, "Weep, heart full of love, youth and life! Alas, I would I could weep like you!"

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This is very intriguing and I love the title as well, very creative. Keep them coming.

Athos

Thanks so much, I'm glad you like it. :)

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"Weep," said Athos, "Weep, heart full of love, youth and life! Alas, I would I could weep like you!"

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Quote from: Athos on May 28, 2017, 09:41:40 PM
I love the way you look at me.
Beautiful eyes,
Stripping my soul bare.
I hate the way you look at me,
Because I know that one day
You will no longer look at me.
On that day, I know, my soul will be torn to pieces.
It is inevitable,
Certain.
And yet tomorrow when I see you,
I will strip another part of my soul away,
Just to get you to look at me.
It is inevitable,
Certain.
I will do it so that in the years to come,
Long after you have gone from my life,
When all I can feel are broken pieces of soul,
I will remember the way you looked at me.
And I will smile.
Wow , that is beautiful and deep in So many ways. You truly loved this person even thought it hurt you. I read this peom and it made me cry. It so touching .