So, first impressions from running it at a game group.
- "Party Campsite" needs a name change. Maybe "RPG Campsite".
- Enchanted Forest might be better as fairytale woods or just 'the woods'
- Things to add: Come sort of caveman setting, and something like Dinosaur island or Jurassic park
- Add a few more locations that deal with death or the afterlife, heaven and hell are too easy to guess.