Thanks Loves! Sent her to you and Swash...hope you guys like a couple of the twists I took on a bit more grown up version of Gretel. I took a few liberties since her story basically ends while she's still just a child. Let me know if she needs to be tweaked!
the way it works with the "in story" side, is that the story is told like a never ending loop. So, your character, while in the fantasy side of things, would basically be living out her childhood story over and over and over again. There is nothing beyond where her story ends other than it resetting to the beginning of the story again.
when she finds herself in the real world, that is when changes occur... she is suddenly older, has free will, that sort of stuff. depending on when you want the transfer to happen, her memories would only be up to that point with just a sense of deja vu. :) I haven't had a chance to read your sheet yet as I am still at work... but will do so the second lunch time rolls around .