So..err..apparently proof reading is a thing :/ *Blushes* Corrected parts of it, feel free to let me know if there are any other errors I missed (There will be).
As for the pink, yeah, I can change it. It's rather horrible when mixed in with the background
Looks wonderful <3 If you'd like, we could establish our characters to know one another, my own character has been bouncing around between jobs a fair bit as well, so it wouldn't be too unlikely that they've met.
If you would like a link, I think it should be rather light, considering Evelyn's character. Perhaps having met on the way to the cruise, hitched a ride together, that sort of thing. Rather than through a pre-existing relationship. PM me maybe? Better than clogging the thread.