Presence 3 should still be fairly serviceable, especially since you want to be more than just a face. ^^
Looking over your skills, I should note that Brawl is no longer a career skill for smugglers. Which ones did you select for your free skill ranks, and which ones did you spend experience to purchase?
Your Wound Threshold should be 12, not 11, and for your equipment, I'm assuming you took the extra obligation to get extra starting credits, rather than XP? If so, you should have 300 credits leftover, not 200.
It looks pretty good aside from those issues, though. ^^ Are there prices for any other tools in the beta rules, or is it all just weapons and armor?
Edit: Ah, and I might as well post up my own character sheet
. ^^; I got permission to play a non-standard race, but it's one that's fairly iconic, so...