Hey all! Sorry for my delayed reply. I have been pretty darn busy. First, I think the name "Forced Arrangements" sounds pretty cool. Second, I was only able to skim the other posts before writing so if I touch on something that has already been covered, I apologize. I think the characters we all have are good (honestly, I preferred your 3 over pretty much all the others). I'd like to see this be something fun, but I think there needs to be some sort of tension-churning underlying dynamic or issue, perhaps something that either creates conflict between the characters at first or throughout. I think tension always pays off.
Second, how open are you 3 to mixing up the couples either at first or in the middle? That could be a tension-churning device, or something happens between two characters that, if exposed, would threaten the whole dynamic. I am just spit-balling here. I think it might be fun to do something a little dark or kinked. Not sure what though.
Finally, where are we on the age thing and how connected is this story to the other one? Could it be that Raven and Grimm's characters got married and stayed together and perhaps mine and Chaotic's did not (either get married or stay together)? These are all just thoughts. Love to see what you all think.
P.s. I am excited this little foursome is coming together, I was kind of digging the characters.