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Sorry I took so long...but I figured I'd let you two boys alone ><...only for poor Zaniel to have to go and leave the poorer Demi all alone
no respect for her[/b], speaking as sarcastically as he was. On top of that, he chose to speak in a language he had obviously come to understand she had no knowledge of. While Zaniel did so clearly out of habit, Samuel was doing it to undermine her.
Real Name: Zaniel ( Wait, is this real name as in real life name? )Age: 27Gender: MaleSexuality: Heterosexual Role at school: VisitorMutation (Powers): Increased synapse and eletrical impulses giving a high reactionary speed. NOT super-speed.Special Skill or training: Expert swordsmanAppearance (can be a picture or a description, whichever works for you): http://www.fond-ecran.com/ORIGINAUX/bd/bd_le_scorpion/bd_le_scorpion_003.jpgSimple...how is that?
She can always call him, she had to have his number in order to get the job.
I'm kinda of confused as to what Jacob said.
Uh just the way you wrote it out I guess. It was kinda of garbled to me, unless that was your intention. It's probably just me though
Yeah. What are you talking about specifically?
Actually never mind, after reading it a couple times, I'm no longer confused by it.
Damn it I was gone for a freaking day...... Ok first things first, this sheet is fine except for a few things I am having a slight issue with. I can look past the fact that he is a visitor if the following is addressed...1) He would have to be directly related to a student because the school would not openly announce it is a school for mutants. "Gifted" could imply anything not just mutants. 2) How the hell are you going to keep him in the school. If you would like to work with me on this I have some ideas we can talk about. Also he is going to need a last name. Often times my character refers to both teachers and students by their last names and there is not a soul without one. I understand his reaction speed is enhanced but can you go into a bit more detail on this? How fast is it? Also how often does he use it and in what situations? Can someone get me up to speed on the game? I will be posting more frequently from here on in.
Morning guys, Zaniel, I'll have a post up and running in a few.
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