Interest Check for St. Arcadia Academy (Hentai, based on Discipline series)

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Iveril

Thank you! Yeah, that would actually make a lot more sense. Just finished editing it, so what do you think?
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Thanks for the edits. Yes, that's more solid now and more effective. Nile Goddess is the game's main GM, so I'll let her have the final say.

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Sorry I'm late to greet the interested parties! My job has been a zoo lately, to which most of is beyond my control. I started this game when I was wrapping up my college days, and I've since moved to a full-time career with crazy hours. So I don't have quite the same amount of free time for St. Arcadia like I used to.

Zeth, I also appreciate your efforts in looking into the source material. Discipline has sort of a natural charm to it, even if it is a bit unpolished. After watching only a bit of it, I immediately fell in love with Reina and Leona, and it has been a blast expanding on their characters with our own personal twists. If you have any questions about the hentai, let me know. I also played about half of the original game and have a basic knowledge, and our game borrows from bits of both with original content.

Iveril, thank you for the character. I did see the original draft on my phone, and I agreed with Haibane's initial comments. The blackmail angle you have in now is very appropriate for the game. So Chisato looks good.

Go ahead and post her in the Student Directory. This is where we log all characters, and I really need to go through and do some trimming and housekeeping, because it desperately needs it. But you can go through there and get a sense of who's active. I'd also recommend reading the Student Handbook, as that has some game information. And lastly, drop a line in the OOC to talk with other players, and we can see how to go about getting you into the current scene, which is a school costume party. All threads are found in the Big Group Games section.

Quote from: Haibane on May 24, 2014, 06:47:50 AM
I don't think we can have a parent who is also a client since there's too much risk of the Morimotos own dirty laundry being exposed by lawyers.

Not to mention, the last time we had a client overly abuse a Morimoto girl, they met the business end of a strap-on administered by Leona and Reina personally.

Haibane

I forgot to mention that! That was a fun scene. Reina, Leona and Karen then used strap-ons to double-rape his wife and daughter in front of him, so... yeah... maybe we could use another wayward client? :P

NileGoddess

And I know I've been wanting to do a scene like that with a male faculty member or a student in Reina's office!

Moon Hound Hati

I recall having seen the series years ago and even attempted to find the game version a few times. Are you still looking for male characters, or are you filled up right now?
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Haibane

Its the kind of game that can almost always accept characters. We like to keep a balance between the genders but another male now would work.

zenpai

I wonder would this fit into your story as a good reason for a rpc. his father is a clergymen or governor in the U.S. that has a thing for young girl. he got one of his favorite girls pregnant and she kept the child. Now he being blackmailed cause a child by another woman who was not of consenting age ( in the u.s.). whould kill his credibility, and marriage.     
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Quote from: Haibane on May 25, 2014, 02:58:27 PM
Its the kind of game that can almost always accept characters. We like to keep a balance between the genders but another male now would work.

Alright, I'll get to work on a sheet likely tomorrow then. :)
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Quote from: zenpai on May 25, 2014, 03:27:56 PM
I wonder would this fit into your story as a good reason for a rpc. his father is a clergymen or governor in the U.S. that has a thing for young girl. he got one of his favorite girls pregnant and she kept the child. Now he being blackmailed cause a child by another woman who was not of consenting age ( in the u.s.). whould kill his credibility, and marriage.   
As far as I know about the game/hentai, that isn't a motive.....blackmail, almost always BUSINESS related, is the best bet.

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Thanks Serp, yes, that's right. We'd prefer the families to be Japanese as well. Its one thing to have the Morimoto Corp be powerful in Japan but if we extend that to being powerful in other countries we start to stretch believeability a bit much. Zenpai, please look through the other characters in the game and see what kinds of circumstances had led their families to be blackmailed. Keeping it simple and beleivable is always a good idea.

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Quote from: Haibane on May 25, 2014, 04:36:38 PM
Thanks Serp, yes, that's right. We'd prefer the families to be Japanese as well. Its one thing to have the Morimoto Corp be powerful in Japan but if we extend that to being powerful in other countries we start to stretch believeability a bit much. Zenpai, please look through the other characters in the game and see what kinds of circumstances had led their families to be blackmailed. Keeping it simple and beleivable is always a good idea.
Indeed.  For instance, my Hanako Sakamoto's being at the school stems from her father, who has somewhat high status in the Japanese government, being caught on camera having homosexual relations with another member of the government.  To keep the event buried, he gave up his daughter to them.

This is the kind of thing that the Academy does.

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Name: Tsurugi Takahiro "Hiro"
Age: 18
Position: Student
Sexual Preferences: Dominant, heterosexual
Appearance: With hair a shade of ash, with matching eyes to boot, Takahiro stands tall at about six feet and one inch, his body slender but toned well through years of exercise and training. While in top physical condition, he suffers from less then perfect eye sight, so he often wears either contact lenses or stylish glasses.

Personality: A very cool and calculating young man by nature, Takahiro is not one to wear his heart on his sleeve casually. He is calm and calculating, always observing, watching and planning. Though not very fond of the fact that he's basically become a hostage of the Morimoto family, he silently acknowledges that right now he can't challenge their might, lest he see his family and its business fall to ruin. He feels much like a wolf that has been caged and collared, a mighty predator that is captured but not easily tamed, if at all. While he does what is asked of him by those within the academy that stand above him in rank, he refuses to let his dignity be (completely) sullied by fully and willingly submitting like other have done, to become a tool without mind or will of its own.

Purpose at Arcadia: The eldest of two children and the only son, Takahiro is the heir of a Japanese yakuza clan. For many generations his family had held a iron grip on many illegal businesses and had begun using money earned from that to take over legitimate companies, which often ended up being used to white wash money earned in less honest ways. Often threats and intimidation were used to convince unwilling owners to sell their company to them. It was often a very persuasive method. The current head of the clan, his father, ended up becoming too greedy though. Attempting to gain control in a new market, he attempted taking control of companies belonging to Morimoto family. For that, they had paid the price, but not in the way his father had imagined.

Now the Tsurugi yakuza clan serves as little more then underlings to Morimotos, doing their dirty work while also supplying a large cut to them from existing ventures. The heir was to attend St. Arcadia Academy as collateral, though it was more as a glorified hostage then anything else. Initially his father had attempted to cut a deal with his new overlords, trying to have his daughter, Takahiro's younger sibling, attend the school instead. Takahiro would have none of it though, feeling that his sister, whose hands remained pure and untainted all this time, unlike his own, did not deserve such a fate, to pay for the mistakes of their father and clan. The feeble attempt to save the more valuable child were thus foiled.

At the acadamy Takahiro, or Hiro for short, has since come to be the president and team captain of the school's kendo club. Part of it was to keep himself sane and busy, the other was to keep his skills with the blade from becoming rusty. He knows his purpose at the school is be groomed to become the next head of the yakuza clan, to serve as a loyal puppet of the Morimoto family in his foolish father's stead. There was little reason for Takahiro to expect his father to remain in power, or even among the living for that matter, by the time he left the acadamy. While part of him is saddened by the prospect of losing his father, another tells him that he made his bed and now had to lie in it.






Two days later then I had hoped for, but there we go. Hope the yakuza background and kendo club thing is alright. :)
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Haibane

Thanks for submitting Hiro, MoonHound, he's got some good basic elements to him.

Just to be clear, you as a player are okay with him not being top dog and being given orders, even being put in a position of submission by the senior females in the school? Most of the things boys get used for / ordered to do is train and fuck the girls but there are a couple of noticeably more submissive males who've become playthings of senior females. I presume you're not angling for one of those roles? If you tell us OOC where you'd like to fit into th egame that will help.

I think his height could be trimmed by a few inches; we are trying to keep body sizes (well, other than breasts of course) mostly normal, and the bulk of Japanese men are quite a bit shorter than westerners.

Its the yakuza background I'm having the most trouble with. I'm thinking that a yakuza boss would have to be pretty stupid in the first place to step on the toes of what's well-known to be one of the most powerful corporations in Japan, with favourable links to politicians, the military and the police. Secondly we've been aiming to keep all of the Morimoto dirty laundry well-hidden and it would suit their purposes, if they encountered a yakuza annoyance, to just stamp it out and not bother doing deals with them. Crushing them utterly would look good in public and gain them more support from politicians, cops, etc who in the long run are much more useful to them than one more blackmailed family, and a powerful crime family at that who no doubt would have some members try to seek revenge.

If a blackmailed family has both a useful daughter and a son, Morimoto senior would just take both, there wouldn't be an element of the family choosing!

Nile Goddess is the game's GM so its her decision but I'm thinking that a different backstory avoiding yakuza completely will probably work better.

Moon Hound Hati

I'm fine with him not being top dog or even a "play thing." He'll do as told, but don't expect him to start liking you for making him do it. He'll simply give you that silent and deviant look while doing as told. He submits because he has to, not because he wants to, basically.

The height I can trim.

If the background is a complete no go I still have a back-up. The other one is to make him the son of politician who's in debt over campaigning funds. Hiro himself is a medal winning junior athlete in the kendo scene.
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Haibane

The issue that has worked well for almost all the student chars (and it was the reason used in the anime as well) was the fathers and/or mothers were employees of the Morimotos who had stepped out of line or defrauded the company in some way. The Morimotos then stepped in to both punish the perp, fix the damage and gain a student. Its still a dangerous game they are playing but at least they have a strong motive to get involved that way. If its just a bad-boy politician somewhere then we have to question why the family would get involved unless the politician was embezzling from Morimoto funds somehow.

Zeth

I have finished the source material. I request to take over the NPC Rinji Akitaro, if possible.

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Quote from: Haibane on May 28, 2014, 07:32:04 AM
The issue that has worked well for almost all the student chars (and it was the reason used in the anime as well) was the fathers and/or mothers were employees of the Morimotos who had stepped out of line or defrauded the company in some way. The Morimotos then stepped in to both punish the perp, fix the damage and gain a student. Its still a dangerous game they are playing but at least they have a strong motive to get involved that way. If its just a bad-boy politician somewhere then we have to question why the family would get involved unless the politician was embezzling from Morimoto funds somehow.

I mainly wanted corruption to play as a theme for my character's background. If most of the characters' parents are working for the Morimotos somehow, I'm sure I can work that out somehow. Perhaps an accountant that's been found to have stolen quite some money from the company over the years via backroom loopholes and hidden accounts.
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SweetSerenade

Would there be a possibility for a new transfer? I was thinking about an American, her family was stationed in Japan. The Morimoto's could have discovered that her father was trafficking in government secrets? Blackmailed him into sending his daughter to the Academy. She is unaware of everything that happens their, and all of the things aligned there.

I am thinking she has fooled around a little, but never quite gotten to the full sex part. She is a little too dedicated to her studies, and rather selective in partners. If that is acceptable, I am happy to make a profile. With a full list of IC and OOC kinks, as well as Hard No lines :D

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Quote from: SweetSerenade on May 28, 2014, 01:05:02 PM
Would there be a possibility for a new transfer? I was thinking about an American, her family was stationed in Japan. The Morimoto's could have discovered that her father was trafficking in government secrets? Blackmailed him into sending his daughter to the Academy. She is unaware of everything that happens their, and all of the things aligned there.

I am thinking she has fooled around a little, but never quite gotten to the full sex part. She is a little too dedicated to her studies, and rather selective in partners. If that is acceptable, I am happy to make a profile. With a full list of IC and OOC kinks, as well as Hard No lines :D
Haibane and Nile can explain better, but I doubt transfers will be allowed, at least I haven't seen any.  As far as I know, it is solely Japan based.

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I am talking about a new student going to the school. As in she has been living in Japan for many years, as her father is a higher up in the military and stationed there, but has been going to other schools. Transfering to the school from her current Academy set up. That kind of thing.

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Quote from: King Serperior on May 28, 2014, 01:17:39 PM
Haibane and Nile can explain better, but I doubt transfers will be allowed, at least I haven't seen any.  As far as I know, it is solely Japan based.

I think there were one or two other occurrences of a student from other countries.
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Quote from: AidenWhite on May 28, 2014, 01:36:56 PM
I think there were one or two other occurrences of a student from other countries.
Must have been before my time in the game.  Ah well, I guess if Hai and Nile say yes, then that's good then.   :-)

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Moon, as your profile stands right now, I'm not sure if it's the best of fits for the game. While dominant males can work, the impression I get from your character is that he would be a major annoyance to the Social Club girls, as well as the Morimotos. He would also not be aware of the fact that he is a hostage at any point; to him, this would be a transfer in schools. Something he may not be overly fond of, but he would never feel imprisoned or treated like a hostage. The yakuza and mob aspect is also completely irrelevant to the game, and something we've had to address to prospective players before. We are not bringing in any further organized crime. I'm not sure about the kendo club, either. It seems too serious and out of place at St. Arcadia. I would recommend going with some of Haibane's suggestions, and keep things simple.

Zeth, I received your PM, and will discuss it with you and Haibane. We can brief you on Rinji's current state, and see if that is something you are still interested in. He's been fairly heavily used as an NPC.

SweetSerenade, if you are interested in a transfer student, I would recommend looking at Linda Hamilton. In the hentai, she appears in one episode as a stereotypical American in a porno: blonde, busty, wearing a cowboy hat and boots and approaches sex casually. I didn't see her entrance in the game, but I believe she is a star baseball player, enrolled specifically to counteract a baseball game the main player is involved in. In this game, we have had a couple of transfers, though none of the players have stuck around. What sort of character type do you want to play? Linda would be probably be a switch, whatever would allow her to get the most sex. She'd bully or charm her way to bed. If that, or what you had in mind fits with her character, we could have you redraft a profile for her. She was used in a post or two by a player who did not stick around.

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Quote from: NileGoddess on May 28, 2014, 01:51:22 PM
SweetSerenade, if you are interested in a transfer student, I would recommend looking at Linda Hamilton. In the hentai, she appears in one episode as a stereotypical American in a porno: blonde, busty, wearing a cowboy hat and boots and approaches sex casually. I didn't see her entrance in the game, but I believe she is a star baseball player, enrolled specifically to counteract a baseball game the main player is involved in. In this game, we have had a couple of transfers, though none of the players have stuck around. What sort of character type do you want to play? Linda would be probably be a switch, whatever would allow her to get the most sex. She'd bully or charm her way to bed. If that, or what you had in mind fits with her character, we could have you redraft a profile for her. She was used in a post or two by a player who did not stick around.


I did look at her, but she is not my taste of character. I do not like playing characters like that, to be completely honest. Her proportions are also something I am not comfortable with playing.

In all truth I was looking to play someone who has been so focused on her studies and music, that she has not really had time to learn much about her sexual self. Though I would be doing Heterosexual, mostly because I am just not really comfortable with Bi-sexual in group games. She would also be primarily Demisexual and Sapiosexual, unless coerced or forced into the sex. (which is fine with me so long as it is plotted out accordingly).

I was thinking one of those military kids, who is afraid to make too many connections - because she is just going to move away again anyways. I am more on the coercian and blackmail angle, because that is more mental than just physical. I would like to state though though I will allow Non-con scenes with other women, I am not comfortable giving oral to a female...Strap on sucking - forced - fine, but not comfortable giving oral to females.

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