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Offline NileGoddessTopic starter

The original interest check for St. Arcadia Academy has grown to more than 600 posts, so to avoid the necessary clutter of such a huge thread, this new one will replace it. If you have interest in joining a hentai-based group game set in Japan, then please post your interest here. Note: if you have read the previous interest check, there have been significant changes to this one. Please read this first post thoroughly and understand it before expressing your interest.

New - Index of past St. Arcadia Scenes Check here if you're interested in reading up on past scenes and events about the game.



Welcome to St. Arcadia Academy

St. Arcadia Academy defines the standard of excellence. Those who enroll hold their heads high knowing that the path they take is one of exclusive achievement.

Our world-renowned classes and devoted faculty shape and mold youths into fine, upstanding adults. The facilities of Arcadia are equipped with state-of-the-art technology, with only the best textbooks and resources available equally. Within our walls, education is the utmost importance, as is school pride and personal self-esteem. The teachers that educate and advise build not only intelligence, but manners and lifestyle as well. Whether you pursue physical strength in many of our outdoor facilities, or delve deep into the expansive shelves of our library, Arcadia will accommodate your every need.

Historically, Arcadia was a girls-only school, but has recently opened its doors to boys as well. This was the decision of the Morimoto family, who now are the primary management of the campus and its grounds, and believe that all students be given the fair and equal opportunity to obtain the best. Though the campus is largely dominated by females, this is by no means a suggestion that males cannot excel to their fullest potential. In fact, our male alumni have gone on remarkable things, as do our female alumni. Our staff is willing to go beyond their duty to make sure that each student, regardless of gender, is able to excel in their field. Arcadia graduates include a long and respectable list of some of the world's finest: physicians, lawyers, architects, and engineers, and it is our hope that you join the growing list as well.

It is my pleasure, as Headmistress of Arcadia, to welcome you personally to our campus. The path to excellence begins here.

Sincerely,
森本麗奈
Reina Morimoto
Headmistress of Arcadia






(Please present this letter to the Headmistress upon initiation.)

OOC
This group game is set within the setting of the Discipline hentai series. It includes elements from both the hentai game and the anime, and it is preferred if players had some knowledge of either, but ultimately, just the players desire to be involved in a sexual school-based roleplay is fine as long as you appreciate and play within the structure the game has taken since it began. The game does not specifically follow the course of either the game or the hentai anime, but it includes characters and similar themes from the series.

The plot of Discipline is about a private, prestigious academy and the students and staff that attend. While it seems like any other private school, it is run by the corrupt Morimoto family who use blackmail and sex to prostitute some of its students, as well as faculty, to high paying clients, some of which are involved in illegal activities. Students run amok and engage in sexual activities, both consensual and non-consensual..









The story so far
Since this roleplay is still ongoing, new players will have to jump into an existing story, and so things must remain continuous. Below is a list of major events and happenings at the school that must be adhered to:

  • Students are, by now, well aware of much of the sexual deviance that goes on at the school (unless a student happens to be a transfer student just arriving)
  • It is widely known that the Social Club, led by Leona Morimoto, is an extremely powerful and wicked group of girls
  • Some students have been deliberately focused on by the Morimoto family and Social Club for further sexual training
  • Students have attended a weekend retreat at a nude campsite

Things to be explored

Consent between players is the first and foremost thing that needs to be adhered to. No one will get forced into a scene if they don't want to do it. Likewise, it would be preferred that players have a wide range of tastes, as players with very focused interests may have a lot of downtime, or find it difficult to get into scenes. Limits explored so far have ranged from intense BDSM to light vanilla and plenty in between. You must be comfortable with players describing these things within the group, though not necessarily with you or your character.

The school will remain a school, however; students will still attend classes and are expected to do well. Not all students are targeted to become prostitutes and whores, but will nonetheless be exposed to a lot of those aspects. Students will live on school grounds, be required to wear a uniform, eat in the cafeteria, etc. Despite the sexual ongoings, St. Arcadia will maintain its standards and etiquette. There will be no outright sexually-based classes, but given the power of the headmistress's sister and her gangs, as well as some of the faculty, sexual situations may begin to overlap into classroom settings.


Characters

As of right now, only student characters will be accepted. Teachers are NPCed for the most part, or taken as temporary characters from time to time. Characters must also fit the correct age range to be in St. Arcadia ~16-18 years old based on their background, and unless permitted by myself or Haibane, must be in their first year in the school. Characters may also be the type to greatly enjoy the sexual ongoings at the school, but I'll ask to refrain from any 'super shy' type characters. Players will be responsible for their student's interactions; other players will not go out of their way to incorporate them under the pretense that they are 'too shy'.

The types of characters we need are pretty flexible. Below is a list of character types that would be especially fitting in the roleplay:

  • Submissive/wanton girls. These types of girls are usually innocent outwardly, but have a lust for sex, and will be willing to engage in almost anything.
  • Playful sluts. Girls who flaunt their sexuality and embrace the deviance at St. Arcadia. They can be dominant or submissive, or a mix of everything if that suits their needs better.
  • Malleable boys. Boys willing to be used by women to serve their own ends or as tools to train other girls. These boys would be submissive to dominant women, but dominant to submissive women.
  • Protective boys. Boys willing to stand up for other students against and perhaps form a serious relationship with another student. They would most likely be dominant in nature.

Original characters are accepted, but must be based of manga/anime style. Therefore, no CG or real life photos for character images. Furthermore, they must be rooted in the real world with realistic personalities, backgrounds, and behaviors. Nothing like teenage karate masters, computer hacking experts, or secret military commandos will be accepted; your character must have a realistic persona. Body types can be a little more disproportionate (ie, large breasts) as long as they are within reason. No girls with breasts that need to be carted around in wheelbarrows, or boys with two-foot long cocks. It would help if the character is attractive, for reasons in the next paragraph.

The families of all students enrolled in St. Arcadia must be under some form of blackmail or extortion, and the 'purpose at St Arcadia' section of the character profile should reflect that. The nature of this situation can be flexible, but it should be kept simple, concise, and to the point. Realistic and believable situations are preferred over outlandish reasons based around the extremes of crime. It must involve the Morimoto family blackmailing your character's family, with the more visually appealing student being enrolled into St. Arcadia as both collateral, and to be used in the sexual activities of the school. Failure to abide by their terms would result in the complete destruction of their family's reputation, career, social status, etc. There may be no exceptions to this rule as it is a basic building block of the main premise of the role-play and is a carry over directly from the anime and H-game. Students can't get into the Academy through money, merit, or influence alone. The students themselves should technically be unaware of the blackmail plot as well. If you have questions about it, please contact me.

The Discipline series also had a variety of canon characters, many of which are not being used. Many of these characters were also very vague, and could be played in multiple ways. If you are interested in playing a canon character, please let me know.


Please use the following template, and post your characters and interest in this thread. Also, if you have any questions, feel free to either message me or post them here to start a discussion.


Code: [Select]
[floatleft][img](Character Image here)[/img][/floatleft]
[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Age:[/b]
[b]Position:[/b] (Teacher/Student)
[b]Sexual Preferences:[/b] (Dominant/submissive, straight, bi, etc. Can also include kinks.)
[b]Appearance:[/b] (Brief written description in addition to picture)
[b]Personality:[/b] (How they act, quirks)
[b]Purpose at Arcadia:[/b] (How they got enrolled/hired, why they are there, additional background)

All story threads
OOC Thread
Characters
« Last Edit: April 27, 2015, 12:20:52 PM by NileGoddess »

Offline SlaveVictoria

Are there any NPCs / abandoned characters available? I wouldn't mind jumping in and taking over.

Offline Haibane

Yes, lots. We have had a go at filling these character slots in the past but most RPers prefer to make a new character.

Here's the character thread, so please take a look. Only Shintaro Kido is definitely not up for grabs because the player asked that his character was not played by anyone else. There are one or two others who in the current direction the game has gone would not fit in so well, Kaoru Itou the transgendered girl is one of these. We think its best if that character is also left to fade into the background. Some of the others like the Nishizaki twins are so useful as NPCs we would prefer they remain that way - as NPCs they can be easily shifted into scenes where they are needed then removed again, something we could not do if they were player-controlled.

We are looking for student places to be filled, we are finding that teachers are best left as NPCs. Those in green below are the current NPcs/available ones.

   Students

   Leona Morimoto
   Ileya Shirou
   Sanada Makatake
   Saeko Mizuki
   Rinji Akitaro
   Karen Himeki
   Emily Tachibana
   Asuka Momonaki
   Shintaro Kido
   Natalie Milano
   Saori Otokawa
   Kaoru Itou
   Hiraga Tadayoshi
   Ami Ito
   Ando Masahashi
   Sakura Miramane
   Saki Yamagata
   Ruri Nonomiya
   Koga Naoki
   Chiba Hiruyugi
   Sei Sago
   Saori Takahashi
   Nanase Fujiwara
   Evelyn Maharishi
   Yukiko Amagi
   Daisuke Hashimoto
   Ginei Aokoto
   Sakuragi Hanamichi
   Umeki Matsuyuki
   Tsutomu Suudo
   Linda Hamilton

These are the ex-player NPCs. There's other characters who have always been NPCs; many of those are open to be taken up by a player. These are listed here.

EDIT: Oh, in case anyone is not aware I am a joint GM with Nile, though the game is her creation and she has the final say in all decisions.
« Last Edit: June 09, 2013, 01:38:14 PM by Haibane »

Offline NileGoddessTopic starter

I would also like to say that Linda Hamilton is also available, as her player has not been active on E and had not posted for even longer.

Offline Haibane

Thanks, Nile. I've coloured Linda's name green above to indicate this. I'd also say that Umeki Matsuyuki is listed among the NPCs in the second link of my post above but she has mostly now become one of my characters and is embarking on a relationship with a male student so its best if I keep her under my wing.

Some of the NPCs are involved in on-going minor plots such as Natalie Milano's severe punishment and abuse regime ever since she insulted the head girl on day 1, so if anyone wanted to play a girl who is suffering a great deal, she's a possible choice.

Offline spooky

I'm interested I'll have a character drawn up in short order.

Offline spooky

Name: Adam Hartwell
Age: 17
Position: Student
Sexual Preferences: Switch, Straight. assumes himself dominant in most cases.
Appearance: Adam is about 5'9" with brown eyes and dark brown hair. His skin is unscarred and smooth, and his stature is lean, but of course healthy. He likes to present a very tidy and authoritative image, so he normally ensures his uniform is impeccably kept. His hair falls rather straight about his head and he normally keeps it that way.

Personality: Adam is a gentleman and a scholar, though he comes from a wealthy family he was able to gain a scholarship to St. Arcadia and would have it no other way. He is very headstrong and can seem overly confident in his actions and decision. He aims to be the center of attention and acts in whatever fashion he feels would be expected of him. On the other hand he is actually quite afraid of crowds and is often slightly intimidated by members of the opposite sex. Though he plays the role of a playboy he really knows little about the satisfaction of the fairer sex. He is simply an image of pomp and pizazz but as long as he can he'll be keeping the front going, if only for the sake of his stubborn pride.

Aside from this, Adam takes his studies very seriously, he is an avid reader and believes his mind to be his only ally. He has taken fencing lessons most his life, but never really became more than and average combatant. Due to his moving and his need to meld easily into each new place Adam has gained a decent knowledge of languages. To date Adam has learned English (his mother tongue), French, Spanish and Japanese.

Purpose at Arcadia: Adam is a new transfer to the school, having gained a "scholarship" there and desiring to leave the shadow of his family behind. Though, He is used to being given the finer things in life, and after an argument with his older brother he has decided to venture out and do for himself. Nothing in his life prepared him for the full extent of leaving home, but his pride keeps him far from admitting it.

Adam grew up in boarding schools from one country to the next as his father traveled on business. In his lifetime he'd been uprooted three times and was soon to be moved again by his fathers next assignment. Adam was born in England, his mother dying in childbirth. His father took the blow rather hard and made a point to never let his sons leave his side. Adam's older brother taught him Japanese in his youth, before he started primary school as it was their mothers native tongue.

When he began school,he never really did much more than meet new people and convince them that he was god's gift to the world. He played a part, one that place him above the common man and out of reach to those around him. In doing so he kept himself from the fears he held inside, never having a girlfriend for more than a week and never having anyone close enough to see his lies. Well, except for his brother, who for most of his life played the role of his caretaker.

When Adam told his brother he was tired of being dragged around by his father, his brother simply berated him. Like a flow of words normally left unsaid had breached his cool composure. It was then that Adam was informed that he was known, known as  coward afraid to face himself and the world and that he was unworthy of his own choices. Adam of course took full offense, refusing to accept the truth and instead proclaiming that he would venture forth and make his own empire, and without the help of his family.

So without wasting any time he began looking into his options to transfer to a school that would provide both a dorm room and a challenge to his mind. He found a pamphlet to St. Arcadia Academy in the mail and felt his desires had been met with fortune. After a brief discussion with his father concerning his desire to finish his high school years in the country his mother came from he found he was given permission with ease. Unbeknownst to Adam his father had already known about the pamphlet and left it there for his son to find. He left only on stipulation to the deal, and that was for Adam to join the schools "Social Club".

Adam's father at one point in his career had found his hands deep in a human trafficking ring, one which brought about a large profit until he was caught. Adam would have lost his father and his family would have lived in shame if the Morimoto hadn't come to "lend a hand to an old friend". Adam, and his entire family belonged to the Morimoto family, and he himself was still the only one that didn't know it.

Now, not more than a few months after this battle with his brother, Adam finds himself at the entrance to St. Arcadia. What he believes will be the place to start his self made future. Unknowingly marching already to the tune of a puppet master he was soon to face.
« Last Edit: June 15, 2013, 03:11:26 PM by spooky »

Offline Haibane

Spooky, thank you very much for your character submission, however, three things. Your profile mentions that he travels a lot due to his father's business but this still does not explain specifically why he's in Japan. Most fathers who travel on business, even for long periods, leave their families at home so as to not cause the disruption in their children's education you are claiming for Adam. Why did the father make such a strange choice? If he travels between countries this would be even more damaging to a young man's education due to fresh language barriers with every move. I would have thought that if there was some special need to have his family with him on his business travels the father ought to use a private tutor so that some stability is maintained.

How long has he lived here? What about a language barrier? (I think about two years minimum would be enough to remove that). Those issues, along with the big 'why?' question would need addressing.

Secondly, your mention of his skill as being "an achieved" violinist implies he's quite good which would require many hundreds of hours of practice and playing, possibly at school concerts. For a person to be achieved in a musical instrument would require a fair level of committment yet in the next line of your profile you dismiss the skill almost completely. Being a good violin player is definitely not a "weak" skill, it can make the best players world-famous. I am thinking that if he's a good violinist he should be proud of that skill and you ought to make it a more prominent part of his character. If its a throw-away thing, why not just throw it away and leave it out? This skill, which requires committment and dedication also doesn't seem to sit well with his personality - that of a dilletante and a shallow person.

Lastly, and most importantly it is clear that you have not fully read the opening post and I'd ask you please to do so, and understand it, since it states there that St Arcadia does not offer scholarships and there is only one way into the academy. The part you have missed out is fundamental to the whole RP and life at St Arcadia. This will need a major change to the backstory for the character.

Once you've read the opening post and made suitable changes to the character we'll be happy to look at him again, or if you've any questions, please ask away.
« Last Edit: June 15, 2013, 06:34:20 AM by Haibane »

Offline NileGoddessTopic starter

Spooky, I agree with all of Haibane's critiques, and it does seem like you skipped a good portion of the interest checks most important parts. It clearly states that you cannot be enrolled through money/influence.

Also, your profile seems to say two separate things in some places:

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He aims to be the center of attention and acts in whatever fashion he feels would be expected of him. On the other hand he is actually quite afraid of crowds and is often slightly intimidated by members of the opposite sex.

If he wants to be the center of attention, why is he afraid of crowds? And girls? Especially if he is supposedly a gentleman?

Offline spooky

I'll work on the fixes to the character now. I didn't skip much.. I simply became excited after reading and missed a paragraph... apparently a paragraph that assumes an importance greater then the rest of the opening post. I will edit and fix.

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Spooky, thank you very much for your character submission, however, three things. Your profile mentions that he travels a lot due to his father's business but this still does not explain specifically why he's in Japan. Most fathers who travel on business, even for long periods, leave their families at home so as to not cause the disruption in their children's education you are claiming for Adam. Why did the father make such a strange choice? If he travels between countries this would be even more damaging to a young man's education due to fresh language barriers with every move. I would have thought that if there was some special need to have his family with him on his business travels the father ought to use a private tutor so that some stability is maintained.

Well, for his father's choice I would impress that the father moved his family to keep them close, I shall further specify a number of moves, and in turn relate that to languages he has learned. My apologies for the original lack of detail.. and to make this idea more feasible his mother is now dead.

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Secondly, your mention of his skill as being "an achieved" violinist implies he's quite good which would require many hundreds of hours of practice and playing, possibly at school concerts. For a person to be achieved in a musical instrument would require a fair level of commitment yet in the next line of your profile you dismiss the skill almost completely. Being a good violin player is definitely not a "weak" skill, it can make the best players world-famous. I am thinking that if he's a good violinist he should be proud of that skill and you ought to make it a more prominent part of his character. If its a throw-away thing, why not just throw it away and leave it out? This skill, which requires commitment and dedication also doesn't seem to sit well with his personality - that of a dilettante and a shallow person.

Honestly, I have no clue what I was thinking.. I think I was mixing in another character idea here without paying due attention to character.. it is to be removed as suggested..

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Lastly, and most importantly it is clear that you have not fully read the opening post and I'd ask you please to do so, and understand it, since it states there that St Arcadia does not offer scholarships and there is only one way into the academy. The part you have missed out is fundamental to the whole RP and life at St Arcadia. This will need a major change to the backstory for the character.

As before mention, my apologies. This is a rather easy fix for a blindly proud young man.. and the blackmail should be simple enough to conjure.

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If he wants to be the center of attention, why is he afraid of crowds? And girls? Especially if he is supposedly a gentleman?

Now this was one thing I did rather intentionally. Many youth's in school play roles and put on faces. Adam simply feels his father wishes him to excel and be well known. As such he acts the part of a flashy and social person. His inner fears are just that, fears. One need not be extremely fond of the opposite sex to be polite and well mannered. He simply doesn't wish for intimacy, rather he doesn't want women close to him. Crowds simply make him nervous, which I would relate to a phobia, more people around makes him feel as if he may be seen through his facade, shaking his confidence and encroaching upon his character.

If my explanations are enough I will get to editing my character to suit, else wise tell me what else I must do so that I may join your lovely game.

Offline Haibane

Spooky, thank you for getting back to us and amending the character.

Can I ask where you see Adam fitting into the RP? Specifically, given what he will find within his first 24-48 hours what might his reaction be and would he fall into line to aid the Social Club (he's going to hear about them and what they do pretty quickly) or might he react negatively? As regards the slightly switchy-but-mostly-dominant sexuality he has, where do you see that being applied in the game?

Have you seen the hentai anime "Discipline" or played the h-game? Having done either will help quite a lot, though we are maintining the status-quo in the academy in the RP, so you can consider big chunks of the second half of the series where the main male and female students overthrow the Morimotos to be beyond the scope of the RP.

We have one male character in the game who has refused to get involved with the Social Club - a resistant stance could see Adam becoming his ally; a second one is quietly trying not to be dragged in as well. Around campus though and even in classes there is unbridled sexual goings-on; gang rapes in the dining hall... students being collared and trained by teachers. I'm curious to know where he'll slot into this social whirl ;)

Offline spooky

Well as it seems my plans for his adaptation are fine I'll complete them shortly, as for how he'll play that's difficult to determine honestly. I feel like he'll attempt the same act of bravado in the start, and as I plan to have him willingly attempt to join the social club things may be interesting. He'll actually be getting advice from home to at least "Check them out." His sexuality should be easily enough exploited since I meant him to be more of a sub who acts like a Dom... so a reasonably strong will woman may break him without much effort. His general discomfort with women would make that feat rather simple.

I never saw the anime but I did in fact play the game, at least one of them.. if there are more I don't know. And I think I failed to get to the ending that overthrew the Morimotos. Sadly I only either escaped and left the main female to be a pregnant shamble or got locked in a sad state of servitude...

For the start I do believe Adam is going to fall to the Social Club and be a proper little pet, though if he gets a little helpful guidance I can grant audience to the idea of rebellion catching hold of his shattered pride. Either way, I feel it only that much more interesting to toss him to the lions from the jump and play him scrambling up from his pit. Does that sound acceptable?

Offline Haibane

That sounds good, looking forward to seeing the character sheet edits. Nile Goddess is the game's designer and main GM though, so her word is final.

Offline spooky

Character edited, please do tell me if there is any further edits required.

Offline Haibane

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The families of all students enrolled in St. Arcadia must be under some form of blackmail or extortion, and the 'purpose at St Arcadia' section of the character profile should reflect that. The nature of this situation can be flexible, but it should be kept simple, concise, and to the point. Realistic and believable situations are preferred over outlandish reasons based around the extremes of crime. It must involve the Morimoto family blackmailing your character's family, with the more visually appealing student being enrolled into St. Arcadia as both collateral, and to be used in the sexual activities of the school. Failure to abide by their terms would result in the complete destruction of their family's reputation, career, social status, etc. There may be no exceptions to this rule as it is a basic building block of the main premise of the role-play and is a carry over directly from the anime and H-game. Students can't get into the Academy through money, merit, or influence alone. The students themselves should technically be unaware of the blackmail plot as well. If you have questions about it, please contact me.

I'm sorry but you still haven't taken on board the reason behind why any student enters St Arcadia.

Blackmail.

Adam's father needs to be an employee of the huge Morimoto corporation, and to have been caught doing some evil deed (theft, syphoning funds, secrets or technology, something of that nature). Rather than expose him to the police and destroy his career, and destroy the family honour (one reason we prefer Japanese characters) the son is selected by the Morimotos to attend the academy. In other words the father is blackmailed into sending him. If he attends the crime remains a secret between teh father and the Morimoto corp, however if the son does not do as he's told, the father is still liable to be ruined.

So it can't be Adam's choice to attend since no-one ever chooses to go there.

A big rewrite is still needed unfortunately.

Offline spooky

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So without wasting any time he began looking into his options to transfer to a school that would provide both a dorm room and a challenge to his mind. He found a pamphlet to St. Arcadia Academy in the mail and felt his desires had been met with fortune. After a brief discussion with his father concerning his desire to finish his high school years in the country his mother came from he found he was given permission with ease. Unbeknownst to Adam his father had been getting those pamphlets to send his son to the school for years, and only recently had it become near impossible to ignore. He left only on stipulation to the deal, and that was for Adam to join the schools "Social Club".

Adam's father at one point in his career had found his hands deep in a human trafficking ring, one which brought about a large profit until he was caught. Adam would have lost his father and his family would have lived in shame if the Morimoto hadn't come to "lend a hand to an old friend". Adam, and his entire family belonged to the Morimoto family, and he himself was still the only one that didn't know it.

Human trafficking isn't enough?

Offline NileGoddessTopic starter

I'm sorry but you still haven't taken on board the reason behind why any student enters St Arcadia.

Blackmail.

Adam's father needs to be an employee of the huge Morimoto corporation, and to have been caught doing some evil deed (theft, syphoning funds, secrets or technology, something of that nature). Rather than expose him to the police and destroy his career, and destroy the family honour (one reason we prefer Japanese characters) the son is selected by the Morimotos to attend the academy. In other words the father is blackmailed into sending him. If he attends the crime remains a secret between teh father and the Morimoto corp, however if the son does not do as he's told, the father is still liable to be ruined.

So it can't be Adam's choice to attend since no-one ever chooses to go there.

A big rewrite is still needed unfortunately.

Yes, that is definitely the biggest point to consider. From what I see, the rest of the profile is fine, but the blackmail part is often the most important, and most tricky, part. While Adam might be told that he's been enrolled for some reason or other, the real reason will be kept from him.

Offline NileGoddessTopic starter

Human trafficking isn't enough?

The problem seems to be in this part right here:

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So without wasting any time he began looking into his options to transfer to a school that would provide both a dorm room and a challenge to his mind. He found a pamphlet to St. Arcadia Academy in the mail and felt his desires had been met with fortune. After a brief discussion with his father concerning his desire to finish his high school years in the country his mother came from he found he was given permission with ease. Unbeknownst to Adam his father had already known about the pamphlet and left it there for his son to find. He left only on stipulation to the deal, and that was for Adam to join the schools "Social Club".

Adam's father at one point in his career had found his hands deep in a human trafficking ring, one which brought about a large profit until he was caught. Adam would have lost his father and his family would have lived in shame if the Morimoto hadn't come to "lend a hand to an old friend". Adam, and his entire family belonged to the Morimoto family, and he himself was still the only one that didn't know it.

If I'm reading it correctly, it sounds like Adam's father has no affiliation with the Morimoto family or their business at all? Unless that's what you meant by being owned by them, unless that was after he was caught. It's just not presented clearly.

I think you are shooting a little high in terms of a blackmail plot. The Morimoto family business isn't exactly specified, either in the game, anime, or our own roleplay. While they're not above pulling off some swindling practices, there's nothing illegal about what they do, the exception being the honey pot that is St. Arcadia. They use the girls their to broker more deals for their business, and in general, to charm and corrupt their way into business further. So they aren't really involved in anything illegal, because then it would just be a house of cards ready to fall down.

What I would suggest is something simpler, and it can even be left pretty vague. Have Adam's father either work directly for the Morimotos, or work in a closely partnered business. If he works for them/alongside them, he could try to cheat them out of money for himself through his own illegal actions, and upon getting caught, is threatened to be exposed...but since he does such good work, they're willing to give him a second chance, provided his son attend their fine, 'private' academy, and if he continues to do such good work, then he won't have to dishonor his entire family and be thrown in jail.

Offline NileGoddessTopic starter

Lightning, I'm sorry, but your character simply won't do, and for a number of reasons.

First, his picture isn't really applicable to the setting. It looks more suited for a Dragonball Z story. We need images that reflect a fairly close representation of their character, though since this isn't always easy, it's better to tailor the photo to the profile than it is the profile to the photo. Something more fitting of a 17-year old in school would be better, and we are looking for slightly more realistic attributes (ie, no red eyes, blond instead of silver hair, etc).

Next, the split personality concept has no place in the game. People with this condition, while they can lead ordinary lives, would require special settings, not to mention supervision, and none of this will be available at St. Arcadia. The concept itself almost sounds Incredible Hulk-ish, and confusing because there are two character combined into one that are completely different for people to track. The first post of this interest check explicitly states that there are to be no super-powered characters, especially where fighting is concerned, because there is none in the game. I'm not sure what '2nd rank' means in MMA, but it sounds like he's already a master martial artist at age 12, with the ability to dodge pain as you say.

Lastly, the who private military backstory is completely outlandish for this setting as well. Please read the prior posts here about looking for something simple, concise, and to the point. The Morimoto family has nothing to do with private militaries or conflict, so there would be no reason for them to be leaked the information. Other than their own internal 'security' that one might find in an every day business, the Morimotos do not have any specialized security, or a use for a former military person like his father in their security, because it's all business related, not fighting.

In summary, the profiles we need need to be ordinary. We need ordinary boys and girls, albeit very attractive boys and girls, to be enrolled. Their parents might have made a few bad decisions that came back to haunt them, but they shouldn't be starting wars, or training their pre-teen children to become martial arts masters.

Offline Lightning

Alright thats fine. Thanks for the tips and everything. But I'll try to find something else. Thanks for your time though. :)

Offline Strifesblaze7

I might be interested if you're still open.

Offline NileGoddessTopic starter

Strife, if you are interested, then please submit a character profile.

Offline Strifesblaze7

I'll work on a sheet and throw a rough draft up in a bit.

Offline Strifesblaze7

Name: Ryu Maeda
Age: 17
Position: Student
Sexual Preferences: Dominant, Some BDSM, Pleasure torture, rough sex, hair pulling, biting, spanking, and fingering/masturbation
Appearance: He has chin length thick red hair and bright green eyes. He is a bit tall at 6 foot 1 and lean at 190 lbs. He is toned and tanned as well. If he isn't in his school uniform he prefers to be in a shirt and shorts or naked.
Personality: He is loud and brash at times and polite and aloof in others. He likes to meet new people and loves to flirt. He prefers to spend much of his free time alone or with another person, maybe two. He is very sexual and stubborn. He has a bit of a temper.
Purpose at Arcadia: He was moved to the school when his old school shut down from lack of funds, he was against it at first but submitted to the change as he saw some of the girls at the school. He was unaware of his family being blackmailed with some lewd photos that were taken at a party. The photos were of such graphic sexuality that they not only would have damaged his father but nearly destroyed his business as well, he was reluctant to send his son to the school but had no choice in the end, his career had to be saved from death. Ryu has never heard it all as the story but the photos were not of his father and his mother, they were of his father and another woman and his mother and another man, somehow the photos made it to the senior Morimoto's hands and he took an interest in the handsome young Ryu. The photos made their way to Morimoto by being taken at a party he threw for all local businessmen. He is a normal young man who had a good and easy life. He did well in school and played a few sports as well. He spent much of his free time with his best friend or alone in his room listening to music and playing video games.

« Last Edit: June 18, 2013, 03:41:29 PM by Strifesblaze7 »

Offline spooky

Well it's been wonderful but I think I'll follow Lightning out. 'Twas a pleasure.