Thank you, Ebpohmr! I don't think you suck at conversation. I find conversation between two characters, especially those I don't have a feel for yet, quite challenging. And I know that writing realistic conversations between two characters, even when I know them well, is sometimes difficult without a lot of supporting text. So, what could be more challenging than a cold conversation, where the words only get to tell the story?
I quite liked your characterization of AJ, it is somewhat along the lines of what I had in mind for her, so awesome! I found Jackson Davies to be rather entertaining as well. I really liked how I got a good impression of the characters through the dialog, and could imagine their facial expressions and movements and a good setting for them as well, without any of it explicitly stated.
I might be posting my prompt for Wednesday on Thursday this week. Tons of work stuff to do due to valentines day, I'm having a lot of late nights.
I do think I might be doing a third part to this prompt-series...