I am sorry Empyrean I thought I had commented on yours. It looks great to me!
As we are starting a bit more powerful I am allowing everyone to have one powerful item, whether that be an Artifact, Manse/Hearthstone, or even some super strong contact or series of contacts. Basically one high background.
If you want to take advantage of that PM me with what you choose, and the details on the thing. Obviously if you just want a strong weapon you just need to say that, but if you'd like the weapon to have same nifty special ability then let's discuss it.
Otherwise I'm going to give this another day or so before we start with just three. Do either of you object to that?