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Offline wigglebiscuitTopic starter

grammar/sentence structure help
« on: December 04, 2012, 09:42:13 AM »
Hi all.

I'm trying to find the best place to seek help with a story I'm writing.
At the moment, I'm wrestling with a short, two sentence paragraph. Something about it just seems wrong to me, but what that is has eluded me so far. (I almost wrote 'alluded me' there...eep!)

I say the literary forum here on elliquiy, but it seems more for professional writers and stuff. I'm just an amateur.
I would have probably taken this little problem elsewhere, but the story is erotic and the only other forum I know of is literotica and that is just ew.

Offline Moraline

Re: grammar/sentence structure help
« Reply #1 on: December 04, 2012, 09:52:30 AM »
Best to post these questions here:  Literary Discussion (click me)

Note: The Literary Discussion is open for all. Only the Elliquiy Writer's Group is restricted for those seeking or currently published.

We get a lot of questions up there and you'll find all types of feedback. Also, online GrammarGirl (click me) is a very good reference.
« Last Edit: December 04, 2012, 09:54:51 AM by Moraline »

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Re: grammar/sentence structure help
« Reply #2 on: December 04, 2012, 09:55:10 AM »
And really, most of us here are amateurs.  The Literary Forum is for anyone who wants to share/improve their writing.  We do have a more 'intensive' area for the dedicated writer: the Elliquiy Writers Group, which is currently in the process of collecting an anthology for publication.  If that interests you, there's a thread in the Literary Forum to request access.

Offline wigglebiscuitTopic starter

Re: grammar/sentence structure help
« Reply #3 on: December 04, 2012, 10:05:29 AM »
Okay, thanks guys!
I just wanted to make sure before I posted something in there I shouldn't and looked like a heel.