I'm trying to find the best place to seek help with a story I'm writing.
At the moment, I'm wrestling with a short, two sentence paragraph. Something about it just seems wrong to me, but what that is has eluded me so far. (I almost wrote 'alluded me' there...eep!)
I say the literary forum here on elliquiy, but it seems more for professional writers and stuff. I'm just an amateur.
I would have probably taken this little problem elsewhere, but the story is erotic and the only other forum I know of is literotica and that is just ew.