This is just a start I might have to fine tune it.PilotName:
Free Worlds LeagueDescription:Background:
Robert was the joy of his parents. His mother died when he was 2 and left his father to become the personal tactics trainer for the merc group he worked for. During sorties of the mercenaries, his father would take Robert for a underwater walk in his mech. Robert eventually grew up enough to learn how to pilot his dads mech. After he turned 20 his father bought Robert his crusader and got him into the mercenary group. A few more years went by Robert was on a mission when he heard the mercenary groups base was attacked by pirates and there was no survivors. Upon returning to Oceana, Robert took one last walk to the very spot where his father took him. After that he decided to leave Oceana and the mercenary group to find the pirates who killed his father and get revenge. It took him five years to find them, on the plus side he caught a job to kill the group. During the night, the pirates partied outside under the moonlit sky. When all of a sudden a booming voice was heard,"I can feel the cold hand of death, and the end drawing near.I've seen gods of the men, and I am what they fear." Then as it finished a streak of LRMs burst from the darkness flying straight towards their mechbay. With precision aim, the missiles slammed into the ammo crates which detonated with a thunderous explosion. As the mortal pirates looked on at their precious mechs burning in the blaze, one screamed out pointing to a large figure with one glowing blue eye. Before they could run the giant's machine guns opened up and ripped through the crowd. After killing all the pirates, Robert went on to accept any merc missions he could land. Several being protection detail, long range support, and some training on is off time. He specilizes in training militaries injumping out of dropsips into water and amphibious assaults.
He is known to be studious, intelligent, highly honourable and above all calm. His intellect is applied to rapid analysis and exploitation of conditions on the battlefield and on the decisive application of force to destroy the enemy.When angered, he undergos a transformation into an uncommonly aggressive force that will devour all who oppose him. It is hard to get back on his good side if you get him mad.Speciality Skills:
Among his time on the beautiful planet he has learned Poetry, Photography, and Scuba diving.\BattleMech CharacteristicsChassis:
Heavy 65 tonsCallsign:
His mech is painted with a very light blue and some dark blue. On the chest of the mech is a proud emblem of a wolf with flaming red fur.Loadout:
Double Heat SinksGeneral Armor Values:
Left/Center/Right Torso: 24/33/24
Rear Torso: 6/8/6
Left/Right Arm: 20/20
Left/Right Leg: 21/21
I know my grammar isn't that well and am looking for someone who can help me with it.