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Offline AthosTopic starter

A Fool's Hope
« on: August 22, 2012, 10:19:21 AM »
I am stuck, frozen,
On the cusp of something great.
Sometimes When I close my eyes,

I can almost see her.

She has no name,
No face or voice that I can perceive.
Just long flowing locks of golden hair.

Other times, in that place between
Wakefulness and slumber,
I reach out.

I can almost touch her.
I long to touch her.
But always, she is just out of grasp.
The gap between us grows,
A chasm in my soul without end.

Alone I wait,
Daring to hope a fool’s hope.
Knowing all the while,
What I desire will not be.

Offline PrettyxPoisonxApple

Re: A Fool's Hope
« Reply #1 on: August 24, 2012, 11:42:17 PM »
Hey Athos, I read a few of your blogs. So beautiful! Feel like i really get to know a little bit of you in them. And i can really understand where you are coming from. Thank you for putting them up :)

Offline masterchef666

Re: A Fool's Hope
« Reply #2 on: August 26, 2012, 01:58:59 AM »
So full of hope, so like my own soul...I feel you, and I hope for your pain to subside...

Offline AthosTopic starter

Re: A Fool's Hope
« Reply #3 on: August 28, 2012, 02:57:04 PM »
Hey Athos, I read a few of your blogs. So beautiful! Feel like i really get to know a little bit of you in them. And i can really understand where you are coming from. Thank you for putting them up :)

So full of hope, so like my own soul...I feel you, and I hope for your pain to subside...


Thank you guys so much for your kind words. I really do try to write from the heart and it's really gratifying to hear that someone else can relate. It's always a great feeling to know that I'm not alone in feeling the things I feel and believing the things I believe.


Offline Kiss

Re: A Fool's Hope
« Reply #4 on: December 08, 2012, 01:36:42 PM »
I feel like you pulled this out of my heart and put it into words. Thanks for the beautiful post.

Offline AthosTopic starter

Re: A Fool's Hope
« Reply #5 on: December 09, 2012, 12:13:59 AM »
Thank you so much. I'm glad you got something out of it. :)