I'm new to Elliquiy (I will look for some help with finding my way around) but an experienced writer in other places. I have an idea for a character. Tell me what you think.
He's Alonso Guttierez, though he's been living round here for some years as Al Geithner, a small-scale market gardener.
In his native Colombia he was a cocaine-smuggler and -user, notorious for his cruelty to hostages and traitors, especially women. A well-educated man, good at accents and manipulating money, his opinion of himself is not low.
In the United States illegally, and with plenty of money stashed in the bank, on the run from his homeland since things turned too legal for him, he's been keeping a low profile. He took a local wife and had a child. He told himself his crazy cruel days were over, were just coke-fuelled madness.
Then, bored and restless, he began to feel the urge for the pleasures of sadism again. He bought some coke and tortured his wife one long, marvellous night. The next morning she and the child disappeared. Since then he's gone downhill, but, as he sees it, in a controlled way. Drinking and snorting.
He tried to get the pleasure from beating a whore but it wasn't the same. And who else might he fixate on in this little town? That shy cunt at the bank and her man-hating boss. He's often been in there, he shifts a little money around for old friends.
He's fallen in with Aaron and Dwayne not for the money, but just for this: the third of their robberies. He wants to watch Sally scream, beg, suffer. And the other cunt.
The sheriff is out of town at a conference, and Al has fixed for his deputy to be entertained by two prostitutes all night. The three men will have till morning with Sally and the other cunt. It might be the pleasure of a lifetime.
Let me know what you think :)