Your character looks good enough, although your pistols specialty actually provides a +2 bonus when using a pistol. (although it does not stack with your firearms specialty.)
As a bloodline member you're supposed to have a blood potency of 2. (This costs 3 merit dots) You can submit your character as is, but before you buy anything else with experience points you'll have to buy blood potency 2. (it costs 16 xp. You can get 5 or 10 xp by dropping your humanity if you like.)
Since your character does not have any resources, I'll say that you start with 2 stolen 9mm pistols (a Glock 17 [17 shot pistol, damage 2L] and a Berretta Model 92 [15 shot pistol, damage 2L]) A hand me down motor scooter (in black), A heavy leather trenchcoat (armor 1, 0 against firearms), 40 odd bullets, and a pair of sunglasses.
Your character most likely relies on public restrooms, dumpsters (in remote locations on days other than garbage day), and sewers to stay safe from the sun during the day, due to her lack of a permanent haven or any money.