Searching for Forgiveness

[ShrowdedPoet]

Unforgiving sky
Voice ringing out clear and sharp
Pouring out a soul torn apart
Tears steaming like rivers
Pooling in the dirt
The stars laugh down at me
My cries falling unheard to the silence of night
Streams of emotion ebbing and flowing through the very essence of the air
Anger, fear, and pain solidifying only for a second
Before dissipating into eternity
The tranquility of the outside
Waging war with the turmoil inside
Until raw and sore from raging against myself
I am born again, free from my burden
To emerge into a new day



***Can't figure out how the punctuate this one.  Any ideas?

[ovrzlus]

I like it Shrowded.  Just the way it is.  There's a flow to it with no periods that I rather dig.  Just my two cents.