Kaisude, your character looks great, but I'm getting some mixed messages. You said he was raised by Yakuza, yet he is the leader of the Order. There's not much in the way of how he acts or how he is as a person, or what his background is in being a hero. I'm being pretty lenient on characters, but I don't think your character suits the role of leader of an organized group of superheroes. You can still play him if you wish and join the game, but the position of leader just might not work out with that build.
Nom, your character also looks good. Something got a little mixed up with your coding though, and there's a bunch of /statements trailing some parts. I will look into that and forward you the fixes, but I'm willing to bet it's probably something simple. The League already has a cold based character, Milady de Winter. Her powers are slightly different in function though, so let me talk it over with the player and see what she thinks. Also, I noticed that you're fairly new to the site, and I'm looking for a pretty considerable effort for this game, not to mention a commitment.