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Started by ShrowdedPoet, April 26, 2011, 02:06:38 PM

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ShrowdedPoet

I’m swimming through the cold ocean of space,
Rainbow coloured stars racing past, bubbling up to the surface.
Searching for the first star on the right.
Oops, ran out of pixie dust, and now I’m falling.
Down, down, down, back to the Earth, back to the ground.

There I am young again, 13, lying on my back in the grass,
My parent’s yard, the perfect place to see the stars.
Clear, cold night air wrapping around me.
My heart’s filled with wonder, faith, trust,
The world hasn’t stolen these from me yet.
It’s so beautiful out here and I know that everything will always be ok.

The darkness fades and I’m walking through a forest.
Sunlight is filtering down through the trees, lighting my path.
The cool crisp air fills my lungs with moist forest smells.
A gentle breeze sweeps through the trees, leaves rustling.
The world is at peace.

My eyes are closed.
I hear the gentle patter of rain on my window.
The computer birds twitter and tweet away.
I can smell him, sweet heavy aroma of smoke and sweat.
His hands brush the hair from my face and I open my eyes.
A smile is spread across his face, lighting the dark.
My heart swells with love and joy.
Stars shine in his eyes and I know there will never be another.
Soft lips press gently to mine,
And everything is perfect.


Kiss the hand that beats you.
Sexuality isn't a curse, it's a gift to embrace and explore!
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SweetJane

I was lost in the lovely imagery, and then got hung up on "computer birds"???? What are "computer birds"??? so I sort of derailed my whole nice ride, there.
The eternal themes of love, yearning, alienation, connection...solace for the soul.
"Anyone who's ever played a part wouldn't turn around and hate it...Sweet Jane...ahh, sweet sweet Jane".

ShrowdedPoet

Sorry, this was written about a "trip" and part of that was the birds tweeting outside my window as the sun was coming up and me trying to figure out why they sounded so familiar and finally settling on the thought that they must be computer birds.
Kiss the hand that beats you.
Sexuality isn't a curse, it's a gift to embrace and explore!
Ons and Offs


SweetJane

Ah, well, that explains it!   ;)
"Anyone who's ever played a part wouldn't turn around and hate it...Sweet Jane...ahh, sweet sweet Jane".

Jated

I am amazingly impressed with your ability to draw me in, and completely experience this with you.  Absolutely amazing.


ShrowdedPoet

I'm glad.  That's what I was aiming for!  Thank you so much!!
Kiss the hand that beats you.
Sexuality isn't a curse, it's a gift to embrace and explore!
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