Author Topic: Private Investigator for Hire (M searching for M & F Characters)/Interest Check (Read 5141 times)

s6xs6x · « **on:** March 15, 2011, 12:50:28 PM »

(UPDATED 3-24-11)

I came up with the story over the course of the last month or so, and it is somewhat based on a true story.
(MODERN TIMES)
Basically the fiance of a guy leaves him suddenly, perhaps of some fault of the man. She takes her stuff, moves out, changes her number and basically cuts all ties with him and his family. After a few months, the Guy cant help but wonder what his ex Fiance is up to. All of his emails have been ignored. Instead of stalking her, he decides to hire a Private Investigator to tail her and gather information about her. Maybe she's involved with someone else already, or perhaps the P.I. is able to wiggle his way into her life and become romantically involved. The man who hired the the P.I., decides he must know it all, every detail and asks for pictures. He's a successful business man and is willing to pay a good amount of Money for pictures, recorded conversations, etc. etc. The juicer the info, the more he pays.

This is just the basic story outline, I would love for whoever plays the P.I. and the Ex-Fiance to suggest or add some depth to the story, if they see it going in a particular direction.

s6xs6x · « **Reply #1 on:** March 24, 2011, 11:48:41 AM »

Updated.....

s6xs6x · « **Reply #2 on:** August 24, 2011, 03:32:37 PM »

Modified a bit....

lovelygirl · « **Reply #3 on:** September 15, 2011, 03:41:21 PM »

Hi sweetie, this could be interesting, if you'll have me

whtbitch4u2own · « **Reply #4 on:** September 15, 2011, 04:27:36 PM »

I'd be interested in plalying Ex finace if not yet taken"?

s6xs6x · « **Reply #5 on:** September 16, 2011, 11:41:23 AM »

I would love to be able to incorporate you both, if one of you can come up with an additonal character that would be fun to add to the story. Only problem is I havent found anyone showing interest in playing the Male character of the Private Investigator.....Either one of you have anyone in mind that might like to participate?

lovelygirl · « **Reply #6 on:** September 16, 2011, 01:36:28 PM »

Might have a PI in mind... working on him now

whtbitch4u2own · « **Reply #7 on:** September 16, 2011, 02:28:01 PM »

Great going lovely! Let's hope you get him.

For our play, If you are thinking two girls, I might have a suggestion.

The ex-fiance's friend (a girl) saw doubts on her face about her marriage. She was her good friend. Ex realizes she don't want to get married to him as she wondered how she will break the new to him. Her friend was moving due to her job and asked her if she would like to tag along without telling her bf anything as to why does not want to marry him and where she was going.

The two girls started to live together and maybe you guys can think of further story for us. This is just a suggestion, the story not necessarily should turn out this way if you don't want it to.

Also if you want to go with just one girl, I don't mind. You can take the part LOVELY.

OTHER IDEA: an extra girl can be PI's or the BF's new girlfriend. Just a thought.

s6xs6x · « **Reply #8 on:** September 17, 2011, 12:31:04 PM »

we'll brain storm and figure out a good plot to include the second girl. Lets see if we can get the PI character first.

lovelygirl · « **Reply #9 on:** September 22, 2011, 04:04:13 PM »

I got your PI

Kirinis · « **Reply #10 on:** September 22, 2011, 04:14:53 PM »

*Tips hat* Hello, s6xs6x. I'll like to toss my hat for the PI role.

s6xs6x · « **Reply #11 on:** September 23, 2011, 07:54:22 PM »

Excellent, so we meet again, Lovelygirl and Kirnis :) Been a while.....Do either of you have any questions or ideas for the storyline?

lovelygirl · « **Reply #12 on:** October 05, 2011, 11:08:17 AM »

So I ran the idea of having two of us be PI partners investigating the disappearance. The story would proceed where the female PI of the duo would start to get closer and most likely fall for her client. This can cause all types of drama between the parties.

The sexual tension between the PI/ client. Jealousy of the Male PI partner, then the ex being sought out and the confilt the client would feel if he really wanted her back.

whtbitch4u2own · « **Reply #13 on:** October 05, 2011, 11:36:40 AM »

That is also a good alternative!!! Two PIs.

So that means I will be playing the Ex-fiance...Just to be on the same page.

lovelygirl · « **Reply #14 on:** October 05, 2011, 12:16:19 PM »

Yes if you want it - I bow to you.

whtbitch4u2own · « **Reply #15 on:** October 05, 2011, 12:59:33 PM »

Hi lovely,

I just wanted to make sure because you expressed your interest before me. And now you are saying you can be another PI helping your Male PI. So I suppose we didn't have Ex-fiance character yet, therefore I asked. You can play either role and I will be glad to take which ever you don't want to heheh. Your preference first.

Let me know. and Also if it's ok with everyone as well.

lovelygirl · « **Reply #16 on:** October 05, 2011, 02:04:37 PM »

Yes I would rather be the female PI at this point. It should be quite fun

Kirinis · « **Reply #17 on:** October 05, 2011, 03:38:17 PM »

This looks like it's shaping up well, I have no complaints of having a partner helping me out with the client.

s6xs6x · « **Reply #18 on:** October 07, 2011, 09:47:17 AM »

Sounds good so far. My character's background history is one of a heartbroken guy who wasn't the best boyfriend, or fiance to his girl, but for the most part he was loving, caring and even propsed to her. The engagement lasted about a year before they got into an argument and apparently it was the straw that broke the camel's back. The girl packs up and leaves and at first, my character doesn't go chasing her. Giving her time to cool off but after a month, I try and reach out to her, her number has changed and she doesnt return any emails. Instead of stalking her, I hire a PI to investigate. Afraid of what he might discover, has she moved on? is she dating? sleeping with anyone or multiple partners? Or is she heartbroken and shattered still, just as I am 6 months later??

whtbitch4u2own · « **Reply #19 on:** October 07, 2011, 10:43:21 AM »

I like the idea so far. Just going to throw this idea of mine explaining as to why she left.

1. Fight was about him uttering few words about her marrying him for his money. Which wasn't true and it hurt her so she left. She moved in with a friend of hers who worked at a gentlemen club. She looked for some work but unable to find anything she takes her friends suggestion to work part time as a dancer or bartender.

2. After leaving him she goes to explore her interests in modeling. She was approached by an agency and she took up on the job offer.

so far these two came to my mind. I will post as I have more ideas. But let me know of these ideas are good or not.

lovelygirl · « **Reply #20 on:** October 07, 2011, 11:32:46 AM »

I like both ideas, The gentlemen's club might add a bit more drama between the lovers.

s6xs6x · « **Reply #21 on:** October 07, 2011, 01:44:01 PM »

I def like that idea....or perhaps even work as an escort service. I guess my character wants to be shocked, how his loving wife could stoop to such a level and do such dirty things....was she always like this and he hadn't known or was this something she is doing to support her self or just a phase she is going through? This is where he pushes the PI to dig deeper and get closer to his ex to find out more...

lovelygirl · « **Reply #22 on:** October 07, 2011, 02:07:23 PM »

Oh god this could go so many ways and get REALLY interesting

whtbitch4u2own · « **Reply #23 on:** October 07, 2011, 04:13:01 PM »

Speaking of which I got an idea. Its her part time job working at the strip club. She recently got another part time job at some firm. So at day she works at the firm and some nights when she is off, she works at re club as she likes working there now. Overtime, when she really needed money she came across these wicked customers who paid her good amount of money for tiny little favors (handjob, blowjobs). But now she is into big fishes, rich man who actually pay highly for her services and it grew onto her now. So its a slow change in her lifestyle.

For another twist, she had done an escort thing only few times but now she don't do that much. And it is the PI who actually convinces her again to do it as he pose as a client and get close to her asking for her services. It is him who makes her realize she actually loves doing this.

Just a thought...

s6xs6x · « **Reply #24 on:** October 09, 2011, 09:48:56 PM »

Sounds hot wht. The PI could have her play into any fetishes he has all while gathering the visual evidence to provide to his client