A Worldbuilder's Resume (5 Awesome 200 Post Threads) M for F

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Modern Fairy Tale

“Now I am become Modern Fairy Tale, the Builder of Worlds.”

I would really love to spin a world together with you.  Every story should have a theme, a motif, a style, a set piece, etc.  I believe that balance is the key to long term success of anything.  In my stories here there is a ratio I like to think of as the fuel/oxygen ratio.  A good engine needs so much oxygen and fuel at a certain mix or else everything bogs down.  Too much sex... who cares who's fucking.  Too much story... the adrenaline flow starts to dip as does the creative energy.  A right mix of why and who and things flow so much better. 

I have a long history here, and this can be to your advantage.  I feel like if you could read my best threads... the ones that lasted... you could really see what I can do.  I like to start my stories with something fun in play.  This starts the ball with the initial energy either with a splash of sex or violence or maybe some of both.  Everything is always with taste and communication and respect.  Then the use of trope, setting, characters.  That's just standards, right?  I like to have someplace in mind for a story to go to.  If you like an interesting genre or story idea, if I get to play with it in my head and give it a fun original seeming spin, I would probably love to give it a try.  I am always coming up with new and more evolved ideas.  I am very approachable and love to collaborate or if you wish, sometimes a writer just wants to react and let you throw it how you will.  Its fun either way.

As promised what follows are my five longest running threads.  Thats almost half of all my posts on Elliquiy.  I give a genre stamp, a couple of paragraphs behind each and the crowning moments of bad ass I still to this day like to read back on.  They show you what I can do before and strive to build on this and become an even better writer and creator.  I love my stories.  I feel close to them, like my Athena, split from my head and now prancing about without me.  I feel like most of what I write is very creative and original and evocative if perhaps primitive and moralistic.  I always have room to grow obviously.

Precious Alicorn        
High Fantasy Sexually Charged Fairy Tale
    Topics Threatened Incest, Intelligent Bestiality, Brief Sprite Flirting

This is my crowning jewel.  My only completed story, so I will always place this on top of my hall of fame.  It is about a beautiful princess of a kingdom to be unwittingly used as bait to trap a cosmic migratory spirit of pure good intent... a unicorn.  My partner was awesome and she put a lot of thought and background in her story.  This always frees up some of the energy to pour into other more fun stuff.  Like magic and fairies and shit.

Now I had planned out a rough outline.  We knew she had to be a virgin, but I liked the idea of little sexual scenes, some consensual, some forced, would keep a steady, building rhythm until an awesome scene at the end where she gives him her virginity attempting to free him from the warded prison.  I think we did a good job on a lets face it difficult subject.  I love to explore extremes as well as these kind of challenges.

Bad Ass Moments:  A powerful pure totemic being of male majestic power is pretty awesome to fuck around with.  There is a manticore cameo.  Later I introduce a fun sprite to help get the two of them together as dark fae forces align against the princess and her unicorn.  Awesome boss battle at the end.

For those interested Id love to do a modern remake.  Imagine a young woman with a medical hallucinations but really she has the Sight.  Ive wanted to cross Medieval tropes with Southern Gothic ones... I think they would line up like a combination lock.  Anyway a Urban Fantasy version with a modern setting but the more magical scenes would seem to her like vivid visions.  We would have to tweak a few things, of course.
https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=30561.0

Threes Are Wyld        
Southern Fried Bronze Age Graphic Novel
    Topics Bestial Sex, Three Way, Being Questioned Topless by a Gang of Werewolves

I have always thought werewolves are intense and sexy.  That primal force driving them on can be awesome.  That and trying to experiment with the Twilight twist... a main woman and two males each very different from each other.  Brothers who could respect each other... one a college student and the other a combat vet.  I played the werewolves a bit over the top, kind of like Marvel's 'Werewolf By Night'.  But werewolves came from somewhere else, and in coming here lured another spiritual monster here as well.  So lots of monster fights... yeah.

I wanted to explore a new mythology.  Not one revolving around disease, either.  I want werewolves to step into the role of sexy antiheroes that somehow vampires have made their own.  I want noble savages on steroids who can rip car doors off and jump directly onto the roofs of small buildings.  I also wanted to check out their political and social structure as well as hinting at the spiritual role that these vanishing tulpa of the wilderness plays.  Yeah, and that well plunges pretty deep pretty quick.

Bad Ass Moments: Ill tell you a secret to show how awesome all of it is.  The Hydra, the creatures fighting werewolves all the time it seems, are just a curious observer in the spiritual void to which the fey ancestors of werewolves were exiled.  They took on aspects of werewolves to try and reach out to them, but being aliens, they don't understand anything.  They are morphic and blur at least two weird forms as werewolves do.  They are physically powerful, just like them.  They are violent, just as any werewolf can be.  They reach out trying to understand them in their own 'language'.  Some of the werewolves have noticed that if approached with peace in ones heart, they are not violet at all.  Regretfully I hadn't had time in the narrative to get to that faction.  Then all the attacks and such start to make sense.

There is so much about these werewolves still left to explore.  If someone was interested, I would love to tour more of these fascinating, passionate and powerful creatures.  I had a cool surprise about Anna that never came up.
https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=164130.0;all

My Immortal 
Modern Bigger Than Life Greek Gods
    Topics Powerful Obsessions, Immortal Rough Sex, Incest, Three Way, Tentacles (One Scene), A Honest to Gosh Sexual Healing Scene

I really like to kick back and just let lose the power.  I mean why play fragile pathetic humans all the time after seeing what werewolves can do.  Why not try some of Threes Are Wyld tropes but with ultra powerful tragic superhero like elemental immortals who become more... emotionally volatile and disconnected over the eons.  Come on, immortality can get boring so I had to throw something in there.  Oh, and titanspawn and cultists are out there trying to let their mamas and dads remake everything again in the perfection of absolute chaos.

I kept seeing gods and goddesses in request lists.  It made me think... whats an adult, edgy, almost Old World of Darkness spin one could do on traditional Greek gods and Titans and monsters of the week.  Something that if its fun for me, maybe a woman or two will think its interesting and play it out with me.  My partner was awesome and we balanced out an awesome dynamic with her between two powerful yet polar opposite immortal brothers right from classic mythology.  We played out the sexy daddy role as well, always creepy for me to touch on but under the sway of such timeless legends, it didn't seem so unnatural.  Check it out.

Bad Ass Moments: Jeez, so many.  Again I am throwing around powerful forces like a kid in a world sized sandbox.  First magic, then primal fury, now elemental power houses with capabilities in line with any other comic book rendition of pagan gods and goddesses.  Every moment I got to play either Aries or Hephaestus were just crowning moments of roleplaying for me.  They are pure ideas... their mind and emotions bend around whatever their focus is.  I found that very interesting.  And I had a secret trader right in the middle of things I never got to reveal.

If there was any interest in resetting this with a different cast of Immortals or a different daughter in a similar situation, I would be all in.  These are elemental Krypton-like beings who dont think or feel like we do.  Yet they are all that keeps us from being just eaten up by gigantic inhuman even more powerful versions of themselves... the Titans.
https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=198939.0;all

Anything to Survive
Apocalyptic California Desert Grind House
    Topics Sexual Bargain, Water Sports, Age Play, Pregnancy had been planned

Oh, wow.  This one.  I can explain.  A writer reached out looking for a sex for survival in a worse than Mad Max world and she had a thing for watersports.  Id never thought of such so had to think about it.  Okay, that's a pretty cool transfer of power.  Very intense.  Also I could understand the enviromental extremes kind of curving the story into social extremes of sorts, that's when I countered.  What if you were treated this way before but I rescued you, but ultimately wanted to die because I lost my wife and son, and you have to kind of convince me to take you for granted long enough to get you to the colonies or something.  Also, lots of mutant and raider infested deserts to cross so conserving water would be a thing.

This was kind of an over the top violence and sex on the cheap scratchy drive in movie reel.  You know what I'm talking about.  We only had zombies so far, but planned for mutated animals as well.  My character was based on the Punisher.  Just... pure bad ass fun.  He was Marine base trainer who specialized in close combat.  Oh, killing zombies and asshole gangers to save perhaps the last girl is just a joy to play out... so cathartic.  Everyone should try it.

Bad Ass Moments: I really liked playing out my characters PTSD.  It was fun because the other writer knew exactly how to toss the ball back and forth with me.  It was awesome.  She understood the whole reluctance she had to seduce/RP through, which worked out well and was going to continue to develop over time until he found a reason to live with her rather then dying to avenge memories.  Also the first action scene where he goes against a whole squad of 'cancer zombies' straight out of I Am Legend and having to use everything he had... rifle, pistol, even pulled a knife on the last couple even though they are much stronger than he can ever be before bugging out with her unconscious body and covering their tracks with a claymore.  The scenes afterwards when he bathes her unconscious naked body after not seeing a woman for literally years... impactful.  I love emotional stories they add so much depth.

I really enjoy this formula.  I would love to recreate it in any variation with anyone who might be interested.  The desperation and the extremes of such a irradiated Mad Max edged story is just an interesting journey I never got to complete.
https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=69236.0;all

Here There Be Dragons
Raunchy Le Blue Girl Meets Tomb Raider
    Topics Inhuman Sex, Tentacles, Reanimated Bodies/Broken Pelvis (One Scene), A Possible Will They/Won't They Dragonslayer Romance

Oh yeah.  This one is another one.  The idea of it started back at the same time as the unicorn idea.  I wanted a companion piece to it both being about sexual encounters with mystical inhuman beings, I thought these ideas were sexy and unique.  The unicorn one was about romance and rescuing the loved one, this was the opposite.  An inhuman force with no pitty or love that just wanted to fuck someone out of existence Aliens style.  Oh and its dragons... degenerated, modern dragons with their breath weapon taken from them and used against them.  They were more like monstrous gargoyle like vampires needing the wombs of those who cursed their breed to create a next generation of horrors.  Kind of a race of sexually deviant Lovecroftian nightmares of differing sizes and forms.

My partner loved the idea but unlike anyone I played with before she just slurped it up.  She played so tough and we made sure to introduce elements of Tome Raider in her character.  There was, of course, a cult which worshiped and tried to restore the dragons by kidnapping and offering her to them.  Oh, and Dragonslayers, a paramilitary group led by clergy who see into the future by licking frogs.  They rescue and recruit her, but during the initial ritual, she was enchanted to be sexually attractive to every Wyrm or wyrmkin around her.  So copious amounts of inhuman fighting, being overrun, stripped, sex, rescued, healed, revenge, you get the idea.

Bad Ass Moments: I liked the first scene.  Seeing her being stripped and striped and offered to this awaiting dinosaur sized being is just primal especially with her tough talking the entire way even with fatigue setting in from what is being done to her.  I had to let her get revenge because she was just so cool about it all.  After that a bit on her training and a first mission with a Carrion Crawler.  A dwarfed wyvern with vestigial wings which lived under an ancient graveyard and had a hive minded ghoul swarm protecting it.  How do you follow up that first awesome sex scene, well, it has lots of mass stripping and blood sipping and bone breaking.  Kind of kept climbing up the extremeties since the Dragonslayers had a way to heal her up pretty well, but really I think I could have dialed it down quite a bit.  I had another storyline idea I wanted to explore with someone betraying her in the organization but it was getting even crazier by then so... not my best work.  Had to learn more about pacing.

I consider this one an example of my rawness and willingness to explore extremes.  I like to test myself and its an example of my growth.  I couldnt continue this story.  Its just... too much.  Its unsustainable as written without some kind of break.  I am, though, proud of the lore and world building this story contains.  Thats why its included here.
https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=37245.0;all

“The proper function of man is to live, not to exist. I shall not waste my days in trying to prolong them. I shall use my time.” ― Jack London
She again rubbed a match on the wall, and the light shone round her; in the brightness stood her old grandmother, clear and shining, yet mild and loving in her appearance. "Grandmother," cried the little one, "O take me with you; I know you will go away when the match burns out; you will vanish like the warm stove, the roast goose, and the large, glorious Christmas-tree." And she made haste to light the whole bundle of matches, for she wished to keep her grandmother there. And the matches glowed with a light that was brighter than the noon-day, and her grandmother had never appeared so large or so beautiful. She took the little girl in her arms, and they both flew upwards in brightness and joy far above the earth, where there was neither cold nor hunger nor pain, for they were with God. 
Hans Christian Anderson in The Little Match Girl

Modern Fairy Tale

#1
New Addition (Only 80 Posts with Multiple Partners)
The Havens Internship for Young Women (Could Be Extreme If Desired)

    Imagine being a beautiful, though sheltered young woman trying to make her way in the world.  With the recession going on and the climbing prices of colledge education, it can be tough out there.  Imagine being such a young woman on the cusp of all of this.  Your tuition is due and rent is hard to come by and your job is downsizing and you've gotten your pink slip.  Things can seem so difficult in moments like these.  It is then that you receive your watermarked invitation into an internship which will open all the doors you need opening.  The right kind of people who can get you where you need to go are a part of this internship, plus there is a scaled stripend which can give you everything you need... paying off student loans, getting you back on track with your higher learning, helping you pay back child support perhaps, making it so you don't have to wait tables for forty hours a week just to get by and can focus on your studies.  This is the selective Havens Internship for Young Women.

    At first it can all be so overwhelming.  You are invited to a country club where you are fed and have gone through a series of applications, signing legal discretionary affidavits, even have a kind older woman to help take your hand and guide you through the process.  Then as you are about to be given the possible acceptance of this group,  you are introduced to your Sponsor.  It is then that the truth is reveled to you.  You will be expected to attend functions nude and small favors are to be called on for your support within this organization.  This is when the older woman tells you she will help you undress before your Sponsor, one of a group of highly elite movers and shakers, politicians and millionaires, who keep this Internship in place.  The hostess tells you that she was like you before standing just as you are now and disrobed before her own Sponsor.  Sponsorship is fluid, so if the interests or presence of the Sponsor is not harmonious with the Intern, than another can take his place until a perfect match is made.  The hostess confesses to you that she met her husband through this very internship and they have been happily married for twenty years.  What would you do?

    If you have ever watched the movies 'Wild Orchids' or 'Eyes Wide Open' you will have seen elements of this storyline in action.  In 'Wild Orchids' a voyeuristic millionare begins to focus his laser like attention on a female lawyer who longs to discover her own sensuality.  In 'Eyes Wide Open' there are millionare clubs filled with beautiful nude prostitutes who give them whatever they want.  Now widen the scope of 'Wild Orchids' and remove the pseudo-satanic rituals and dealings with prostitutes in 'Eyes Wide Open' and replace with young, ripe, needy coeds from some of the countries finest schools and you will have some understanding of the storyline I am trying to work toward.  Most of the men are selective and cultured in their tastes with perhaps a few social flaws which has brought them to the Internship to fullfill their needs.  (Maybe they were raised in military schools or have a distrust of women outside of the Internship.)

    This storyline is meant to be a lighter toned, though still very sexual, answer to the 'I catch you and rape you' stories which I'm sure many of you have been involved in.  Such stories tend to depress me as I would like the woman, truly the beating heart of any sensual tale, to experience more than just terror, pain, and humiliation.  There are formal dances and exclusive parties where about thirty or so percent of the people there are naked female coeds, being naked means you are part of the internship.  I suspect the Sponsor will want some effection from their Interns, some kisses and hugs, holding her arm as the menfolk gather and talk about business or politics, also the very important Kiss... which is their euphemism for oral sex, which is expected at the beginning and/or ending of each naked encounter- though such is performed discreetly on special reclining reclining couches set up along the peripheries or in quiet balconies outside of the party.  (Full sex can only be given with complete permission of the Intern and usually only after they decide to bring it to the next level.  Unless you want that to be more of a requirement.)  There are hostesses in place to provide support and protection for the young women, making sure they feel comfortable and everything is at ease.  For the most part the Sponsors are older men with voyeuristic or controlling inclinations who don't want to go and find prostitutes in the world but would rather grow a relationship with a beautiful and intelligent woman the way some would culture a rare orchid in their private garden.

    Now this story doesn't have to be completely vanilla.  I picture there are inner circles into which the young woman can be initiated.  If she finds a permanent Sponsor, she may have his crest or seal tattooed in brilliant blue ink or even branded.  I picture more advanced circles have higher expectations, should your tastes flow that way.  Each encounter is layered and only includes Sponsors with tastes matching whatever shade of darkness you might want to explore.  Throughout all of this, though, it should be felt that there is a level of intimacy, trust, and comfort which must be reached with both the Sponsor and the Intern.  Nothing is forced, though growth over time is encouraged.  After a length of time (perhaps 5 years to a decade) it is understood that each Intern will be given a settlement from which she can support herself for the rest of her life, though many (perhaps a third) ending up as long time friends, business partners, or spouses of their respective Sponsors.  Finally, just to prove the point with the exception, we could have one Sponsor's guest gets a little coked up and rapes or almost does so to your character or a friend of the character.  Then security comes into full force and the support which cares for and comforts the Interns can be demonstrated as we watch this tawdry situation unfold, if this is interesting to you.  It could be hinted in story, if desired, that the Havens Internship is more manipulative in its inner workings by actually altering young women's lives to bring them in the door.

    The important things to understand that I want from this is a rich, sensual story with a narrative in motion.  I cant stand stories about some girl rotting in some cellar being raped whenever.  I want our girl to be pampered and refined and educated.  I want someone who can keep the story in motion.  Stories that stall for days or weeks can be frustrating and I find this idea very fascinating.  I also want a writing partner with an eye for the female form, someone who can describe her body in detail and its reaction from time to time (not just once in the first paragraph and then its like shes not even there from then on) and doesn't shy away from descriptions of how sour piss really tastes or how a Sponsor smells like cigar smoke, but over time she gets to like the mingling scents of her own sex and the stogies.  The female body and mind are beautiful and so I want to experience every nervous quiver of a lip or thigh and every bounce of her breasts with each nervous breath and even how she looks at her Sponsor as she surrenders to him in perfect trust.  I think this storyline could be fun and sensual and scalable.  Could all of this interest you?  I hope you are suitably impressed with my presentation and feel this could be a fun part of your Elliquiy experience.  Thanks in advance for your interest in reading such a formidable entry on this thread.  I welcome PM reactions or perhaps the opening of negotiations into what we could expect of each other and if such a writing partnership would serve both of our interests.


Still interested in fulling roles within the Havens Internship for Young Women.  Here are some example so far.  Each interesting and very specific and special.  Not unlike snow flakes.

https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=112478.0
https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=115020.0
https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=168362.0
https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=168515.0;all

Please let me know if you are interested.  Thanks.  Peace.
She again rubbed a match on the wall, and the light shone round her; in the brightness stood her old grandmother, clear and shining, yet mild and loving in her appearance. "Grandmother," cried the little one, "O take me with you; I know you will go away when the match burns out; you will vanish like the warm stove, the roast goose, and the large, glorious Christmas-tree." And she made haste to light the whole bundle of matches, for she wished to keep her grandmother there. And the matches glowed with a light that was brighter than the noon-day, and her grandmother had never appeared so large or so beautiful. She took the little girl in her arms, and they both flew upwards in brightness and joy far above the earth, where there was neither cold nor hunger nor pain, for they were with God. 
Hans Christian Anderson in The Little Match Girl

Modern Fairy Tale

#2
UPDATE
I have been in a creative hibernation for a bit.  I woke up hangry like a grumpy bear on Easter. I have been reaching out to contacts and checking out the ads.  I still need more creative flow, but I thought I would share what I have going so far.  Maybe some of these ideas will spark something in my potential partner’s imagination.  Plus more examples of the types of stories I like to participate in.

Perversions of the Dark Zodiac (Modern/Supernatural)
https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=316340.0;all#bot
This is my longest running current story.  It has a darkly magical premise wrapped unseen within our world.  It has been going for awhile and is at about 50 posts right now, but I could easily see it becoming another 200+ classic of mine.

This is my Internship idea but turned up to 11+ with very adult hidden yet warring magic societies based on power source alignments and planar coincidences.  Lots of action and dark mystery and sexually based magic.  Yet I wanted to keep it oddly charming with the couple specifically being the lens of the story.

The Heart of the Pack (Modern/Supernatural)
https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=362696.msg16876069#msg16876069
I was so creatively parched I asked my most faithful and constant role playing partner at the time to double dip with me.  She consented, so I had to tempt fate.  I asked if she would be interested in my personal Urban Fantasy setting that’s been thumping around in my head called New Sweden and maybe werewolves or something.  I am so psyched to see where this takes us.

Imagine Constantine and Sin City, but set in a small town.  Based on a real life town, New Sweden, Maine, several families from Europe were settled there bringing a strong dying piece of their culture, especially their magical ways.  So instead of demons and angels think runes, dwarves and mede out in Stephen King country and these are not your dad’s werewolves.

I Kiss Bad Boys (Modern/Crime)
https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=362989.msg16905931#msg16905931
I have a pretty long history with this writing partner.  I was asking if she wanted to play something and she referred me to a list of unfulfilled requests of hers.  I picked the most appealing and we ran with it.  She is my most eager poster.  Always within a day or two we are moving again.

There was a King Arthur movie with Kiera Knightly as Guinevere.  In it the bad guys were a rampaging Saxon conqueror advancing as Rome defenses folded and his wayward son trying to prove himself as his right hand man.  Well, I just took the conqueror and transported him over to a ‘Mongol-like’ outlaw biker gang. Like a Time Lord or something, I even brought over his son.

The Queen’s New Mount (Low Fantasy)
https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=363177.msg16893194#msg16893194
This was a personal project of mine, a mirror piece for my unicorn story.  This wring partner mentioned centaurs in her ad.  I was going to work with her story but pitched my Amazon vs. Centaur caged romantic epic as background or something for parts since I gave up playing it out, so complex.  She liked it so it’s starting great.

There is a prophecy, isn’t there always. It’s about the true Amazon queen will ride the back of a beautiful centaur in battle against the true enemy of the Amazons.  In this world centaurs are bestial and often times violet drunkards, and rapists.  Some are born kind of like an albino, called a Chiron, who is smart and beautiful as any Greek hero.  An evil Amazon queen wants to unite the last of her tribes using this prophecy welding the abusive tools of god kings before her.  I’m dying to see this play out.


Perhaps any one of these potential stories sparks something within you.  Let me know about it.  Maybe we can talk about it.  I can do other genre work like Apocalyptic or Science Fiction.
She again rubbed a match on the wall, and the light shone round her; in the brightness stood her old grandmother, clear and shining, yet mild and loving in her appearance. "Grandmother," cried the little one, "O take me with you; I know you will go away when the match burns out; you will vanish like the warm stove, the roast goose, and the large, glorious Christmas-tree." And she made haste to light the whole bundle of matches, for she wished to keep her grandmother there. And the matches glowed with a light that was brighter than the noon-day, and her grandmother had never appeared so large or so beautiful. She took the little girl in her arms, and they both flew upwards in brightness and joy far above the earth, where there was neither cold nor hunger nor pain, for they were with God. 
Hans Christian Anderson in The Little Match Girl