Interest Check for St. Arcadia Academy (Hentai, based on Discipline series)

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NileGoddess

Strife, I do apologize, but I forgot to review your character yesterday. I will do so later today when I am done working.

NileGoddess

Alright Strife, I've had a chance to look over your character.

I would prefer to make him a year younger. It's not that huge of an issue, it would just bring him in line with most of the other students, though we do have some older new students to the school. So I'll leave it up to you.

His personality is a little clashed, being that he is loud and brash, yet quiet and withdrawn at times. For the sake of the game, it would be much easier if you could play him as outgoing and wanting to meet and talk to people. Shy characters, with players who would prefer to put them somewhere and wait, have not done well in this game. Based on his sexual preferences, and his stubborness, he seems to be more outgoing anyway.

Could you also expand his blackmail plot a little more? Why are the nude photos such an issue for his family, and what would be the consequences if they were released to the public? It just needs a little more context, nothing fancy.

Haibane, that's what my thoughts are, what about you?

Strifesblaze7

His quiet and withdrawn times are more aloof than shy. Like sometimes he just wants to listen as the world goes by, he is a bit odd like that.

A year younger is no big deal. I'll go change it and add a bit on the blackmail.
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Strifesblaze7

Is there a point where nobody cares

Haibane

Strife, he's looking better, thank you for the changes. Could you please make the blackmail very specific to the Morimotos so it gives them a reason to be involved? Perhaps the photos were taken by colleagues of the father (who works at one of the Morimoto companies) and they show him with several female employees and visitors. Taken originally for fun at a party they came to the attention of his boss who passed them up the line. Morimoto senior himself saw them, checked the father out, found a useful son and so blackmailed him.

The father can't wriggle out of it since some of the women he is with are significant members of his community and in any case, as usual, it would mean the end of his career, family honour, etc.

I think I can see where you are coming from with the person who likes to socialise but also likes periods of being with close friends. As Nile has said though, periods of him keeping to himself have no value in this RP. While its okay for you to position the character alone somewhere, please just do that for the purpose of sketching a new side to his character - don't expect other characters to come and interact with him just because you place him somewhere; you will need to be proactive and bring him into scenes.

Fortunately there is a great deal of scene planning that goes on in the OOC so if a character is ever at a loose end, speak up in the OOC and we can usually find a scene for him to be involved in.

The last thing was the image you used which has obviously been compressed in its height axis. I did a bit of work on it and fixed it:



I also made an avatar which you'll need in your post headers:


Strifesblaze7

I did put his aloofness in for the case he was not involved, then I have a way to play him alone. But it won't be a big thing in the group. I know that.

And yeah, I can add that in really quick.
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Haibane

Nile's the final boss though... ha, that makes her sound like a Quake III monster... but yes, she will be the one to give the stamp of approval or not, I'm just her sexy assitant, leotard, high heels and all.

Strifesblaze7

Is there a point where nobody cares

NileGoddess

Alright Strife, I think he will do just fine for St. Arcardia. Here's what you'll need to do next:

First, post your character profile in the School Directory. All characters will be listed here for easy access and reference. This thread also contains some information, such as which dorm he lives in and who lives in his dorm suite. His homeroom assignment will also be added here.

Next, please introduce yourself in the OOC to the other players. We are currently working an in between scene before the next school event, so it would be a good time to talk with other players and see where you can insert your character. Please note that simply posting your character somewhere just waiting for someone to meet them is not acceptable.

Lastly, take a look at the Student Handbook. This contains some useful information about the school.

King Serperior

Name:  Hanako "Hana" Sakamoto
Age:  17
Position: Student
Sexual Preferences:  Submissive; primarily straight, but very bi-curious secretly;  Open to nearly anything (PM me as I do have a few things I won't do);  forced nudity is a major want
Appearance: Hana is about 5'3" and weighs about 120lbs.  Her bust is about a 33D (not very knowledable on Breast sizes, so I estimated from the picture).  She keeps her Blonde hair cut short because she's been rejected in the past for having long hair, despite the fact that she hates her natural hair color more than anything.  As a naturalist, she keeps her pupic hair unshaked, trimmed, but unshaved.  When in her dorm, she's usually completely nude, having dreamed of being a naturalist for a long time.   
Personality:  Hana used to be very shy in very public situations before enrolling in St. Arcadia.  With her newfound freedom, she has found that being looked at and being an exhibitionist is very arousing.  She's a very sweet and loving person and cares about others.  Her sweet and playful nature is an act to draw people to her, whether they be male or female.  Despite that, she's not very experienced in sexual situations, but is more than willing to learn. In short, she is a major closet pervert turned open exhibitionist who's only wish is to be made a plaything for those who are willing.  Besides that fun side, she does take her education quite seriously and will do almost anything to make sure she doesn't fail and lose all she has worked hard to achieve.
Purpose at Arcadia:  Hana became enrolled in St. Arcadia for her perfect scores in English and Biology, though her math skills were lacking.  She quickly hopped on the chance to have an free ride into her higher education.  However, unknown to her, the only reason she was sent an application was because her father had an affair with a high-ranking male colleague.  One night, unknown to him, he was caught on camera.  The Morimoto Family, who had their eye on his daughter, struck a deal with the paniced man: In return for permanently burying the affair and letting her father keep his job in the government of Japan, he gave his only daughter to the Morimotos.  For what, he didn't know.  The only thing that Hana knows is that her Father is happier and less stressed because she was chosen by a great school.  That, and Hana wants to use her newfound freedom to fully express herself.....
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NileGoddess

King, she looks pretty good. Just a couple of things I found mentioning.

Firstly, beware of how much emphasis you put in the focus on her non-school clothes. Aside from special classes, such as gym or swimming, the Arcadia uniform is likely what your character will be wearing at all times. Whatever they choose to wear in their dorms before and after school is fine, but just a warning that scenes of that nature may be few and far between.

Secondly, we've always been a little wary about these super shy types of students. It sounds like it's always and act, but we'd prefer if students would be a little outgoing. Otherwise, we've noticed the trend of students being so shy they never talk to anyone. Instead, why not make her more open to being looked at by people, ie, stripping for them or other lewd acts?

The picture is acceptable, but the mention of purple hair will have to be downplayed a bit. There are a few odd-colored hair students, but it's been specified that these are dyed and treated for color. We're just going for a slightly more common approach to character design in some aspects.

Lastly, just a minor tweak in your blackmail plot. Instead of having a high-ranking Morimoto (because it's just one family), why not have the affair with someone in his department, like a coworker or secretary that makes it more of a shame for him, and not both him and the Morimotos?

Haibane, those are my thoughts. Do you have any input?

King Serperior

King, she looks pretty good. Just a couple of things I found mentioning.

Firstly, beware of how much emphasis you put in the focus on her non-school clothes. Aside from special classes, such as gym or swimming, the Arcadia uniform is likely what your character will be wearing at all times. Whatever they choose to wear in their dorms before and after school is fine, but just a warning that scenes of that nature may be few and far between.


That's quite alright.  After watching a couple of episodes of the anime, I figured that would be the case.  I just added that extra bit about non-school chothes just in case an event occured of that nature.  If you want, I can remove that bit or downplay it some.

Secondly, we've always been a little wary about these super shy types of students. It sounds like it's always and act, but we'd prefer if students would be a little outgoing. Otherwise, we've noticed the trend of students being so shy they never talk to anyone. Instead, why not make her more open to being looked at by people, ie, stripping for them or other lewd acts?

I can do that.  That's an easy fix.  I'll just change it so that at her old school, she was shy and such, but the moment she entered Arcadia, the new freedom unlocked her inner self.  So the acts she used to do are now scaled up, like sometimes not wearing a bra underneath her uniform and such.  I can easily make her more outgoing. 

The picture is acceptable, but the mention of purple hair will have to be downplayed a bit. There are a few odd-colored hair students, but it's been specified that these are dyed and treated for color. We're just going for a slightly more common approach to character design in some aspects.

That's another easy fix.  I'll just say that she is naturally Blonde, but hates her blonde hair, thus requiring a dye.  That could even be some kind of punishment, removing her dyes and forcing her to be blonde for a while.

Lastly, just a minor tweak in your blackmail plot. Instead of having a high-ranking Morimoto (because it's just one family), why not have the affair with someone in his department, like a coworker or secretary that makes it more of a shame for him, and not both him and the Morimotos?

That'd be a simple fix as well.  Perhaps, to make it more scandalous for him, he had a homosexual affair and  it was caught on camera (the other person's and face were conciently hidden, so there's no ID on the other and no chance of him falling as well (espicially if the name is ever mentioned by the father that losing his job would be the least of his worries)

Haibane, those are my thoughts. Do you have any input?

EDIT:  I'll wait for Halibane's imput before fixing Hana up with these current changes.  That way, I can fix everything at once.
EDIT2:  On second thought, it's driving me nuts leaving this unfixed.  Gonna do so now.
EDIT3:  Okay, it's been fixed up.  Now, for the wait  ^_^

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PhoenixPhyre

My interest is noted :)

Here's a character sheet I drew up:

Name: Tetsu Moriyama
Age: 17
Position: Student
Sexual Preferences: Tetsu is still a virgin; however, from what he's seen on his various porn searches, he identifies more with the Submissive role. He is heterosexual, and has gotten turned on by watching various Femdom scenes, including such elements as bondage, hair pulling, CBT (cock&ball torture), face slapping, humiliation, spanking (open palm, paddling, caning, belting), and orgasm control/denial. Getting to try any of these things in real life would be a welcome experience.
Appearance: Tetsu has a head of dark, shaggy hair which falls into his face, and eyes that are aqua blue. He is an average height of 5' 9", with a thin, but well toned build.
Personality: Testu is a fun loving kind of guy, who will go out of his way to find humor in any situation. He has a great weakness for beautiful women, and often lets his lust get the better or him. He is great at making friends, and enjoys having many of them by his side.
Purpose at Arcadia: Tetsu was enrolled at Arcadia on short notice, his parents telling him that they decided he deserved "a better education" than the one he was getting in his local public school. He was a bit sad to leave his old friends behind, but excited and curious about going to a new private academy. As far as he knew, his parents were spending a lot of extra money to give him the best education, because they loved him that much. He had no clue that his father's long-time electronics business had recently gone bankrupt, a devastating blow to their family, who have been in the commercial trade business since before the Meiji era. In order to keep his business running and his family's honor intact, Tetsu's father has given him up as collateral for the massive business loan that Morimoto had offered him to keep them afloat. After all, there was no better place for Morimoto to buy his quality parts at such a fine bargain.

Haibane

King = like Nile said, Hana is really nice already and needs very few tweaks.

If the shyness issue can be played down and her outgoing personality played up I think you'll find that helpful as well as it helping everyone else. She can still be of the shy, sweet, cute, innocent type if the moe character appeals to you to RP but that need not make her quiet and introverted. She can be outgoing but still of that moe-like disposition. We have a couple of girls like that already in the game and they are both extremely popular characters, so I see no big deal with a third girl like that.

Hana can have her fetish as nudity, no problem, but as Nile said, there will be very little opportunity to exploit it in the normal school day. That being said there might be opportunity to do another gym or swim class and there's locker room nudity plus our last swim class was conducted fully nude for everyone ;)

We have a sports festival coming up on the following day; there might just be some opportunity for nudity there, not sure yet.

Hana as Nile and you both suggested, can enjoy her naturist tendencies around the dorms and outside classes away from the main campus buildings. I have a character called Momo who likes to sunbath nude and sometimes doesn't bother covering up around the dorm but I haven't actually had ANY opportunity to play that facet of her personality in the entire 2 years the game has been running so please be warned!

What we could do is play it so that the Social Club seniors find out about Hana's fetish and exploit it that way. Perhaps rather than have her lacking pubic hair to begin with, the SC can have her waxed. There's even a victim girl of the SC whose job it is to regularly shave the SC girls. That might be more fun for you and Hana? Likewise she can have naturally light hair but as part of her SC makeover she could have it changed to lilac. Its not dyed BTW but actually recoloured at the DNA level using drugs invented by Morimoto Pharmaceuticals Division, so no matter how long it grows and is cut, its always lilac. If she had pubes they would be lilac too so there's a possibility of a small cute patch of that colour being left high on her mound for fun but her lower area left smooth maybe.

Large breasts are a bonus. We have several characters who like them!

I agree with Nile that it works far better if the father alone was caught in some wrong-doing with a fellow (very senior?) employee and no Morimoto family member was directly involved. It helps make the blackmail more solid and less risky for the family.




Phoenix = I like everything about Tetsu, he seems almost perfect for the game. I'd be wary of just 2 issues. Firstly his sexuality seems extremely highly developed for a 17 year old with a long range of established kinks. Obviously these are your ons which is fine but maybe you can downplay them somewhat for Tetsu himself so that his school life becomes something of a journey of discovery for him as well. He could even be a virgin which could give us some amusing material to work into an early scene. If you clarify that he himself is just recognising a submissive side... maybe he's become aware that he likes looking at porn websites of a BDSM nature but it is only in the last year or so has he discovered that he identifies with the submissive roles depicted on his computer screen more than the dominant roles? Exploring the kinks he likes and drawing them out of him can be a part of his sexual training.

Please also be aware that with so many student characters, not all of them can be given opportunities for training scenes etc so he needs to be a character who can fit into general school activity scenes as well as the more overtly sexual ones.

The second part of the character sheet that concerns me is his fathers business. I see no reason why the powerful Morimoto Corp would give financial aid to a lowly grocer, especially considering that if the grocery business fails its no loss (or even interest) to the Morimotos. Now if the father owned a business which the Morimotos did rely on and it went under, then we have a good reason for them to step in with financial aid. If we change his family business to one that, say, supplies small electronics components and has done for many years (at a rate the Morimotos cannot easily get elsewhere), then when it goes down the tubes they step in, give the father a huge loan and take Tetsu as collateral. Lets also add the additional burden that the business is very old and has been run by the family for generations (prior to it focussing on electronics it dealt in other kinds of shipping and trading - it could even be a mercantile concern going back to the colonial days of the pre-Meiji era) so that should it fail, Tetsu's father would lose all honour as being the Moriyama whose inept business skills was the weak link in a long chain of otherwise proud and capable Moriyama's. That should place enough of a burden on the poor man that he agrees to the deal, gives up his son and keeps his mouth shut so his wider family is none the wiser.

Other than that Tetsu sounds quite a good fit for the game. If he is switchy he can be let loose on the girls in a dominant role from time to time but as a more submissive boy the Social Club could identify him as a possible candidate to be turned into a male whore who would be given to the family's female (domme) clients to work him over for their entertainment. His training would therefore focus on instilling in him obedience and enjoyment of various abuses, bondage, CBT, etc. If his kinks don't specifically mention these at the outset but he grows to love them I think that works better.

Your thoughts on those suggestions?

Also have you any other pictures of the character - the same goes for you King - we can use additional images in the post header avatars and Tetsu's face in that pic is a little obscured. A clearer one would be very useful.

King Serperior

Quote from: Haibane on June 24, 2013, 06:09:32 AM
King = like Nile said, Hana is really nice already and needs very few tweaks.

If the shyness issue can be played down and her outgoing personality played up I think you'll find that helpful as well as it helping everyone else. She can still be of the shy, sweet, cute, innocent type if the moe character appeals to you to RP but that need not make her quiet and introverted. She can be outgoing but still of that moe-like disposition. We have a couple of girls like that already in the game and they are both extremely popular characters, so I see no big deal with a third girl like that.

Hana can have her fetish as nudity, no problem, but as Nile said, there will be very little opportunity to exploit it in the normal school day. That being said there might be opportunity to do another gym or swim class and there's locker room nudity plus our last swim class was conducted fully nude for everyone ;)

We have a sports festival coming up on the following day; there might just be some opportunity for nudity there, not sure yet.

Hana as Nile and you both suggested, can enjoy her naturist tendencies around the dorms and outside classes away from the main campus buildings. I have a character called Momo who likes to sunbath nude and sometimes doesn't bother covering up around the dorm but I haven't actually had ANY opportunity to play that facet of her personality in the entire 2 years the game has been running so please be warned!

What we could do is play it so that the Social Club seniors find out about Hana's fetish and exploit it that way. Perhaps rather than have her lacking pubic hair to begin with, the SC can have her waxed. There's even a victim girl of the SC whose job it is to regularly shave the SC girls. That might be more fun for you and Hana? Likewise she can have naturally light hair but as part of her SC makeover she could have it changed to lilac. Its not dyed BTW but actually recoloured at the DNA level using drugs invented by Morimoto Pharmaceuticals Division, so no matter how long it grows and is cut, its always lilac. If she had pubes they would be lilac too so there's a possibility of a small cute patch of that colour being left high on her mound for fun but her lower area left smooth maybe.

Large breasts are a bonus. We have several characters who like them!

I agree with Nile that it works far better if the father alone was caught in some wrong-doing with a fellow (very senior?) employee and no Morimoto family member was directly involved. It helps make the blackmail more solid and less risky for the family.




Also have you any other pictures of the character - the same goes for you King - we can use additional images in the post header avatars and Tetsu's face in that pic is a little obscured. A clearer one would be very useful.
Hana isn't an introvert by any means.  She does have a quiet disposition, but she has her secret wild side as well. 

That's quite alright if there are little opportunities for Hana's nudity fetish.  I just wanted to make sure that she has one that is very hightly exploitable, espicially in this Roleplay.  If the opportunity does come around, I'll savor it  :)

Waxing....I've never thought of that, but it sounds quite fun.  I'll make the change then.  As for the forced hair color.....I actualy love that idea as well  ^_^  I'll make the changes soon.

Also, I agree that larger breasts are a good bonus  ;)

I don't know about any other pictures, but I'll look.  I think its just the one....

EDIT:  Okay, added that she only trims her pupic region rather than shaved it all off aswell as having a naturally blonde hair that she hates, but keeps short.  Thanks for the idea, Halibane!  The waxing and forced hair color change will be quite interesting  ^_^
EDIT2:  Added some images.  Not the best, but they were as close as I could get.

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Haibane

Where did you find the original image? I might be able to track down more that are similar.

King Serperior

Quote from: Haibane on June 24, 2013, 08:31:16 AM
Where did you find the original image? I might be able to track down more that are similar.
I actually just Google Searched "hot anime girls" and that was the image that best fit.

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PhoenixPhyre

Quote from: Haibane on June 24, 2013, 06:09:32 AM
I like everything about Tetsu, he seems almost perfect for the game. I'd be wary of just 2 issues. Firstly his sexuality seems extremely highly developed for a 17 year old with a long range of established kinks. Obviously these are your ons which is fine but maybe you can downplay them somewhat for Tetsu himself so that his school life becomes something of a journey of discovery for him as well. He could even be a virgin which could give us some amusing material to work into an early scene. If you clarify that he himself is just recognising a submissive side... maybe he's become aware that he likes looking at porn websites of a BDSM nature but it is only in the last year or so has he discovered that he identifies with the submissive roles depicted on his computer screen more than the dominant roles? Exploring the kinks he likes and drawing them out of him can be a part of his sexual training.

Please also be aware that with so many student characters, not all of them can be given opportunities for training scenes etc so he needs to be a character who can fit into general school activity scenes as well as the more overtly sexual ones.

The second part of the character sheet that concerns me is his fathers business. I see no reason why the powerful Morimoto Corp would give financial aid to a lowly grocer, especially considering that if the grocery business fails its no loss (or even interest) to the Morimotos. Now if the father owned a business which the Morimotos did rely on and it went under, then we have a good reason for them to step in with financial aid. If we change his family business to one that, say, supplies small electronics components and has done for many years (at a rate the Morimotos cannot easily get elsewhere), then when it goes down the tubes they step in, give the father a huge loan and take Tetsu as collateral. Lets also add the additional burden that the business is very old and has been run by the family for generations (prior to it focussing on electronics it dealt in other kinds of shipping and trading - it could even be a mercantile concern going back to the colonial days of the pre-Meiji era) so that should it fail, Tetsu's father would lose all honour as being the Moriyama whose inept business skills was the weak link in a long chain of otherwise proud and capable Moriyama's. That should place enough of a burden on the poor man that he agrees to the deal, gives up his son and keeps his mouth shut so his wider family is none the wiser.

Other than that Tetsu sounds quite a good fit for the game. If he is switchy he can be let loose on the girls in a dominant role from time to time but as a more submissive boy the Social Club could identify him as a possible candidate to be turned into a male whore who would be given to the family's female (domme) clients to work him over for their entertainment. His training would therefore focus on instilling in him obedience and enjoyment of various abuses, bondage, CBT, etc. If his kinks don't specifically mention these at the outset but he grows to love them I think that works better.

Your thoughts on those suggestions?

Also have you any other pictures of the character - the same goes for you King - we can use additional images in the post header avatars and Tetsu's face in that pic is a little obscured. A clearer one would be very useful.
I think your suggestions actually make a lot of sense, haha. I'll edit his sexual preferences to reflect a willingness to try some things that he's seen, and take you up on the advice to make his family's business more... influential.

And, how is this for a head shot I can use?


EDIT: Changes made to original char sheet; sexuality and family business details.

Haibane

Quote from: King Serperior on June 24, 2013, 07:29:29 AM
EDIT2:  Added some images.  Not the best, but they were as close as I could get.
Its always best to spend time finding the image of a character whose name you can find out then finding more images of her. I've just spent a while looking arond and finally stumbled across the series Hatsukoi Limited which I had never heard of. A girl in that. Meguru Watase has the right length hair and phenomenally huge boobs. She wears glasses but if you don't mind that, she seems perfect.

http://konachan.com/jpeg/116a0641fd64f04cc5573cfe637ebf41/Konachan.com%20-%2062901%20enomoto_kei%20hatsukoi_limited%20watase_meguru%20yamamoto_misaki.jpg

http://userserve-ak.last.fm/serve/_/82259435.jpg

http://www.ost-center.fr/contenu/jaquettes/anime/6007-01.jpg

http://www.ecchilicious.com/wp-content/gallery/meguru-watase/meguru_watase_12.jpg

Nice thing about her is there's loads of pics out there. I think Nile with her photoshop skills could even colour her hair lilac when the change is needed?

On a side note Hatsukoi Limited seems to have some very cute girls in it. I must find a copy to download ;)

King Serperior

Quote from: Haibane on June 24, 2013, 10:16:11 AM
Its always best to spend time finding the image of a character whose name you can find out then finding more images of her. I've just spent a while looking arond and finally stumbled across the series Hatsukoi Limited which I had never heard of. A girl in that. Meguru Watase has the right length hair and phenomenally huge boobs. She wears glasses but if you don't mind that, she seems perfect.

http://konachan.com/jpeg/116a0641fd64f04cc5573cfe637ebf41/Konachan.com%20-%2062901%20enomoto_kei%20hatsukoi_limited%20watase_meguru%20yamamoto_misaki.jpg

http://userserve-ak.last.fm/serve/_/82259435.jpg

http://www.ost-center.fr/contenu/jaquettes/anime/6007-01.jpg

http://www.ecchilicious.com/wp-content/gallery/meguru-watase/meguru_watase_12.jpg

Nice thing about her is there's loads of pics out there. I think Nile with her photoshop skills could even colour her hair lilac when the change is needed?

On a side note Hatsukoi Limited seems to have some very cute girls in it. I must find a copy to download ;)
I understand completely.  Just an error on my part
As a guy who wears glasses himself, I find glasses to be extremely sexy   ::)

I love her and will swap over to her picture.  She does seem really perfect  <3  Thanks, Haibane!

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NileGoddess

In response to the above discussion I'm fine and agree with Haibane's critique of your character Phoenix. My only complaint is the main character image. You have supplied a potential avatar pic, but would it be possible to find a picture for the profile that isn't quite so...busy?

Quote from: Haibane on June 24, 2013, 10:16:11 AM
Nice thing about her is there's loads of pics out there. I think Nile with her photoshop skills could even colour her hair lilac when the change is needed?

I might be able, and if by skill you mean playing around with preloaded stuff and filters. I'll see if I have time tonight.


PhoenixPhyre


Haibane

He's great! I think I may have bumped into him while I was looking at others. Thanks... now I still have 2 images sets as backup ;)

PhoenixPhyre

Quote from: Haibane on June 25, 2013, 01:37:58 AM
He's great! I think I may have bumped into him while I was looking at others. Thanks... now I still have 2 images sets as backup ;)
The only problem is, I'm not sure how to convert the web address into a visible image :-\ Also, which of the two Profile Pic options would you recommend?