Angel with no wings

Started by Chevalier des Poissons, April 29, 2010, 07:39:45 PM

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Chevalier des Poissons

Can I call you angel
Even if you don't have wings?
You are the one who gives me such feelings
Shinning like a jewel

Can I call you princess
Even if you don't have a crown?
You turned my world upside down
You eyes are my weakness

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The day is gone
I wonder if you still are my one
If the moon looks down she will see
My angel and me

The night is done
I know I will never be alone
And as the sun in the sky
We will get up and fly

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Would you be my flower?
Would you be with me forever?
And when we reach for the moon
Our love will finally go on

And then again
Our time is just about to begin
With the blessing of the sun and the sea
You will be forever with me

As you go away
I know there is always another day
With the blessing of the moon and the land
I will still be on your mind



April 29th, 2010
Original concept by me
-I have Maro's heart, and I promise to take good care of it-

A & A

Fairehawke

You continually impress me. If only I could meet someone near me who writes like you.

Edhel Tari

This is quite beautiful.  The softness of its flow and the vulnerable essence it portrays are words that would melt the heart of anyone who has experienced this type of love.  I agree with Fairehawke, very impressed.
"For thy sweet love remembered such wealth brings, That then I scorn to change my state with kings"
(Shakespeare)

Chevalier des Poissons

Quote from: Edhel Tari on June 25, 2010, 12:26:57 AM
This is quite beautiful.  The softness of its flow and the vulnerable essence it portrays are words that would melt the heart of anyone who has experienced this type of love.  I agree with Fairehawke, very impressed.

Thank you very much for the opinion. I am very glad you enjoyed it ^^
-I have Maro's heart, and I promise to take good care of it-

A & A