INTEREST CHECK: Older Naruto Roleplay (CLOSED)

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Annie

#100
Yeah, I know that Krayz. It's just I think that doesn't fit very well when I imagine Naruto's family. But, of course, a good plot could take out that impression from me. XD

In the end, I'll stick in the way of the great Light. ;P

EDIT: Added the Yuurei Rasengan to Nana's jutsu list. Again, if someone can confirm that name is right, just let me know. ;P

“Fairy Tales are more than true; not because they tell us that dragons exist, but because they tell us that dragons can be beaten.” - G. K. Chesterton

Krayz

More than anything, Annie, I'm wondering how the technique makes sense. Is there actually an invisible Rasengan, or is it simply the maneuver?

Annie

It's just the maneuver, Krayz. A blow with the palm of her hand. There's nothing of the rasengan on it besides the name. As I said, a just-for-fun tech. ;P

“Fairy Tales are more than true; not because they tell us that dragons exist, but because they tell us that dragons can be beaten.” - G. K. Chesterton

Krayz

Okey dokey then. That would be acceptable.

Zaer Darkwail

Name: Dain Tombaki
Age: 29
Gender: Male
Village: Iwagakure
Rank: Genin
Titles: None, if not count 'number one zero talent class shinobi' as his own villagers call him.

Personality:
Dain is carefree fellow who does not take situations seriously and he often slacks and lazies off. He has no sense of confidence for self but he does respect others and recognizes talents far more keenly than anyone else in others but does not see none in himself. Some would call this modesty but he is more personally depressed for his life as shinobi and has least amount of interest on his own progress in said world. Fame, yen, power or recognition; he desires none. He only desires live long enough he can retire and stop his active shinobi career and he can do what he wants the most.....but no idea what he plans to do once given said freedom. He cares less village politics and war situations as he does not see enemies in hostile manner, he has no bloodlust and he rarely angers. Because of his lack of ambition and for playing too fair he never developed friends inside his village and because of his village's underhanded ruthless nature he has no friends outside the village. But still he has not gone rogue though. As he holds semblance of loyalty to his village even if village dislikes him.

Biography:
Dain Tombaki nearly failed the shinobi exam in academy fourth time which was meant as final time when he can try. He passed with bottom scores in his class and was put to team with two elite minded shinobi. All with grand dreams to becoming jounin and gain recognition while he himself had none. In missions he dragged team always down but he never got drive to improve himself to match his two elite team members and it frustrated no end his team mates. Even their jounin mentor was disappointed in his lack of skill or more lack of interest to be shinobi. Only reason why he was not dismissed was because of orders of Tsuchikage keep him around until he either improves or dies. Thankfully he always had luck in his side to survive even serious situation, even extend some of them being embarrassing and becoming years some delicious jokes around the village. However it dragged down team's reliability and reputation and in end his two team members betrayed him; by tying him up on wooden pole in village center and beat him up with bamboo sticks while their jounin mentor watched and made sure none interfere. Then they left him hang on the pole beaten for whole day until he dragged himself out from it while starving and thirsty. As none villagers paid symphaty for him.

He did not hate his teammates nor the village, as he knew for the fact he was natural loser. When his teammates tried succeed in Chuunin Exam, they failed everytime and most often because of him. Soon the teammates disbanded from team altogether and each one joined on team which lacked members and then entered chuunin exams and succeed and became chuunin. Eventually jounin. Then seeing the team disbanded jounin was left with single genin which led jounin grow more than disappointed; she grew despise him and feel unending spite towards him as because of him she cannot join some missions as non-genin leading jounin could and she lacked any inspiration to teach or lead Dain because he was useless and after all years he had not improved at all in his shinobi skills which were barely average.

Then she had enough of him and then she accepted A class mission after thoroughly lying about Dain's so called 'hidden talent' which emerged after elitists left. They went to hunt a missing nin from village of Sand. Considering they were not friendliest of terms in Sand and the target is actually protected by Sand (he was defecting to Sand). She tracked up to the target while Dain followed and when she took first night shift....she then simply left Dain on the cave where they had camped. In high dangerous zone deep in Sand and she also purposefully left hints on the cave to show whereabouts of Dain so he surely gets captured and it leads to situation where no one will buy Dain and she is hand washed from his case if get minor disservice rank but it is worth in her opinion in all her spite. Days, weeks, months and a whole year passes without word about Dain and most assume he got killed than instead going rogue. Then he suddenly returns?! With the head of the missing nin in his bag and bringing it to mission office! He refused tell details of his mission to anyone but he went briefing with Tsuchikage alone (as his jounin mentor was on mission and unable to attend).

After that Dain remains still as genin but he solo operates. As Tsuchikage noticed during teams he is loser, but during Solo missions his skills match equal to A ranked jounin. He may lack ambition or desire improve himself; but he gets damn creative and surge of focus when his own life is in line. A coward who barely survives missions is what Dain is exactly and manages pull off the jobs alone where teams are needed. He dislikes fight dirty but he is left to little to no choice than adapt the style of figthing what Hidden Stone Village is known for and have become damn good at it. Not fight fair at all only as form of self-defense but otherwise he would try fight fairly when he is in team even if it hinders him. Tsuchikage puts more and more pressure on Dain each time and each time Dain narrowly succeeds because he has no high ranked jutsus like most jounin have learned or studied and he works only with the few which he had learned as genin and by observing his two elite team members years but which he never tried to mimic until his life is in line. So for now expectionally he is lend for shinobi team which hunts a S class criminal and his allies. He may be not much use for rest of the team most of the time but if he gets cornered and his own life is in risk......then he acts beyond anyone's expectations. Also if he would start to care for others lives.....then his talent would expand and he could then finally be chuunin material instead being zero talented shinobi in the village.

Abilities:

Taijutsu/Kenjutsu
Dain has practiced both unarmed figthing and also kenjutsu arts. But he knows none of actual chakra channeling techniques in taijutsu but he often combines basic simple taijutsu attacks with other jutsu to support them. He favors single quick slashes over multiple slashing attacks with his ninjato. Aiming to locations were veins rest in to cause bleeding which slowly tires enemy or strike weak spots. Over the years his eye for weakness in techniques and armor has improved but it's not perfect.

Ninjutsu
Dain knows clone, replacement and disguise jutsus like everyone in academy graduates do. He is lazy often do them halfheartedly but when his life is in line he can perform very good disguise jutsu; able transform into kunai's or even personal belongins which he can duplicate and confuse enemy with clone who sleight of hands him to enemy's pocket. He can keep the shape very long time and he can disguise his chakra presence to near zero.

Besides this he has a very rare elemental affinity combination; earth like most people his village do but his elemental type changed also to wind somepoint. It's something which he does not go advertise about and he knows some quite decent wind techniques like slicing wind blade which he combines with his kenjutsu to perform long range slashing attacks to throw off enemy's guard off with feigned swing which should not reach them. Another one which is kind his sensor ability is able to 'feel the air' around him. He can sense any motion in air around him around when he concentrates on air around him and he can sense so attacks which would be otherwise unable to detect but his reaction time still may not be enough block it even if he senses it.

His earth techniques are simple but sturdy products and he can make clones from raw earth, mud or clay even when he is not serious. But if he is serious he often slips explosive tags inside his clones which then explode and cause fragment damage as he stuffs also kunai's and steel balls inside the clones. Make simple bombs from them. Overall he knows all basic earth techniques including able form one layer of earth to block one serious attack in the day and even then it's not perfect against all attacks.

Genjutsu
Dain knows only genjutsu enough disguise his presence when he is a item. Make people fooled he has no chakra when he mimics a item. When serious he can pull off genjutsu which gives illusion he moves faster than foe's eyes can follow and he can perform 'thousand dazzling blade assault' where using bright light source he reflects rapidly on his shiny blade's surface to blind enemies from the dazzling display and then perform attacks on them while blinded.

Chakra Control
He can walk on walls and run across water. These both took years to master well enough he can fight on either condition. But when in serious life threatening situation he can dispel genjutsu techniques with shockingly display. As he can very easily shut down his chakra and turn it on....not just one sequence but five times in row and even genkei kenkai styled doujutsu has hard time to nail him with genjutsu no more than brief moment. He is very hard to controlled by genjutsu as result as he is very highly paranoid when alone. Fear based genjutsu works double times better than intended on him when he is alone or in group. As he is indeed a natural coward.

Other Abilities
Besides his shinobi talents which are not much he is kind of genius when it comes lazing off. He may not take things seriously but if given some work he tries find excuse to avoid it, slack off or solve the task then most least amount of energy involved. Some tasks what he did while he had team showed surprising ingenuity in his part. Also he knows very well general lay out of each village's top shinobi (he has studied the bingo book to memory). Just to know what kind of people he can trick, fight or just plain run if facing them in during mission in hostile setup.

Besides this he has somesort natural knack for gambling. His odd luck which helped him survive in younger days carries on dices and cards and other games where he plays against other people than machines. His only weakness is that he looses against women in gambling, as he calls it 'my luck runs foul against women because my luck thinks to play nice towards ladies to charm them to me'. This course never resulted in date but rather opposite effect. None the less he had sometimes doubled or tripled his cash in brief time he spends in gambling and runs out with his wins when he is in high roll.

Etcetera: Dain Tomblaki is heterosexual male with some minor fetishes regarding outfits women wear like; pretty underwear, bunny girls (one reason he goes to casino) and corsets. Otherwise he has not any specific beauty ideals or specifics but he would be attracted more to personality than raw beauty. Also appreciates women with sense of humor and who can do decent sarcasm towards him which he can laugh to himself then.

Vaulera

So can I get the thumbs up to change my character to a dastardly villain?

Krayz

You can indeed, Vaulera, though unless we hear from Rachel Ongaku soon that will leave just you and I as the villains of this game.

An apology to everyone for not hearing back from me for some time. I had a busy week pass by, helping family and starting a new semester of university. I haven't lost interest in this game, and still intend to see it done. Once Vaulera's character is ready, we'll start this game.


Annie

Quote from: Krayz on May 13, 2012, 12:33:32 PM
You can indeed, Vaulera, though unless we hear from Rachel Ongaku soon that will leave just you and I as the villains of this game.

An apology to everyone for not hearing back from me for some time. I had a busy week pass by, helping family and starting a new semester of university. I haven't lost interest in this game, and still intend to see it done. Once Vaulera's character is ready, we'll start this game.

Glad to hear that!! ^^

“Fairy Tales are more than true; not because they tell us that dragons exist, but because they tell us that dragons can be beaten.” - G. K. Chesterton

Elias

Quote from: Krayz on May 13, 2012, 12:33:32 PM
You can indeed, Vaulera, though unless we hear from Rachel Ongaku soon that will leave just you and I as the villains of this game.

An apology to everyone for not hearing back from me for some time. I had a busy week pass by, helping family and starting a new semester of university. I haven't lost interest in this game, and still intend to see it done. Once Vaulera's character is ready, we'll start this game.

If you're really needing villains I am willing to do it.

Krayz

We don't really need villains. It's basically a balancing act of quality and quantity; more heroes means stronger villains, and vice versa.

Of course, one idea that could be considered is playing something like Akatsuki; an organization of missing-nin working towards a common goal (perhaps less world-dominationy).

I think I'm gonna post a poll on that.

Vaulera

I was wondering how the villain scenario would work, since there are only the two of us (that I know of or have seen anyway), would it just be a powerful duo, working together for whatever malicious plot you can cook up?

Krayz

#112
Indeed, Vaulera, that would be the way of it.

Likely they would have met by coincidence, defecting at around the same time and crossing one another's path.

EDIT: Also, we're looking for at least one more female player, open to up to three more players as long as one is female. Not hearing responses from a couple of our players, and it would be nice to have balanced teams.

Zaer Darkwail

Aye, gender balanced teams would be nice. Anyways Krayz I ask again (kinda); Is my char okay in ability/skill/background wise or do I need elaborate something further or tone it down?

Xain903

Well if you guys are still looking for players I would be fine joining, I could try to play a girl but I wouldn't likely do an amazing job since I don't have a hell of a lot of experience playing a girl in a more....perverse context. But anyway what I posted to ask was mostly if you were open to new characters still.

Krayz

I'm sorry, Xain, but we're not looking for any male characters until we get at least one more female. However, it is worth mentioning that this game is meant to be less focused on sex and more on plot, so if you're open to playing a female, you're more than welcome.

Xain903

Name: Tsubaki Tosen

Age: 20

Gender: Female

Village: Kumogakure

Rank: Chuunin

Titles: The Succubus

Description: http://media.photobucket.com/image/ninja%20girls/MewmewRikku/Anime%20Girls/20de181442b5030057973e9bc36db6a8.jpg?o=85 (yes I know the irony that I chose an image with a leaf headband, just try to ignore it since the rest is perfect XD)

Personality: In her personal life Tsubaki is always the sarcastic type, she isn't the kind who takes well to stupid chivalrous fools pretending she needs protecting. In fact she isn't even the type to associate most men on a first meeting with anything more than them wanting a piece of her. Tsubaki knows she isn't unattractive and she uses the attention she gets from some people to her advantage, though anyone who can see through her tricks instantly gains her respect. The one thing she can't stand however is someone belittling her skills simply because one of her preferred methods to kill is the easiest one she has, just because she uses her body as a lure for men and women alike doesn't mean she has no morals and she'll punch anyone in the mouth who says different.

Biography: Tsubaki was born mixed blood, her father being a fugitive from another village altogether, though he had settled down in the hidden cloud village by the time she could remember. The only real thing she remembered from being a girl was that she was always a little different. She didn't have the chakra supply of a normal student, because of that she was somewhat mocked by the other students and even taken advantage of once or twice by bullies. However in one of these incidents the bully dropped dead and she felt stronger for it...something had happened and it wasn't explained until much later that this was when her true life began.

Tsubaki was born with a talent, she had natural aptitude toward a particular style of ninjutsu, the kind that drained chakra out of living beings and added to her own supply. Apparently her father had also been well known for this particular technique so it was no surprise she was born somewhat talented in its use. Thanks to her natural affinity for absorbing other peoples chakra she was given the nickname 'succubus' thanks to her penchant for using her looks and intellect to fool other students into giving her doses of their own chakra to use in battle. This method also gave her reason to become one of the more dangerous ninja in her class, her ability was more than enough to incapacitate a student level ninja easily so soon enough she became a bit of a pariah, though it didn't matter as much to her since it just meant tsubaki wouldn't have to deal with too much unwanted attention.

The chuunin exam wasn't too hard since she wasn't the worst cheater, however when it came to the actual combat portion tsubaki was finally able to shine, showing off techniques her father had taught her she breezed through the first couple of contestants and in fact made it to the final. Sadly she was unable to beat the final student who she faced, losing purely because she hadn't anticipated that she would become so full of chakra from the other students she wouldn't be able to drain any more. Luckily though the judges seemed impressed by his taijutsu skills aswell as her use of her 'assets' as a diversion during the first couple of rounds. This led to her being made a chuunin without too much trouble.

Now however was when things got complicated. A minor asset she got from being so good at her particular skill set was that she was capable of discerning chakra easily, so much so that just being around someone she was able to sense their particular chakra pretty easily. This meant that she was more than a bit of an advantage when chasing missing nin, especially dangerous ones, thus as her first truly high profile assignment she would be send to assist a group of other village ninja in capturing a pair of fugitives who were trying to cause trouble, Tsubaki just hoped that if she did her best she would be able to make her father proud and maybe even make jounin sometime so as to gain the respect she rightfully deserved as a warrior, not just as a pretty face with a few tricks.

Abilities:

Taijutsu - While most would assume that Ninjutsu or Genjutsu would be her greatest skill Tsubaki uses mostly Taijutsu in combat. Thanks to her near pitiful normal chakra supply she was never able to perform normal jutsu as easily as other students, this initially led her to worrying she was incompetent, however after learning of her strengths she realized how useful she could be in close combat. Thanks to training from her father aswell as training on her own she has learned how to best use her abilities in close combat, using a lot of grapples/throws aswell as high speed footwork in order to maintain contact with her opponent for as long as possible to let her abilities work their magic. She even learned how to use higher level physical enhancement techniques to vent the chakra she absorbs so as not to overload (leading to the amusing image of a young girl basically hugging her opponent all fight before punching him out with one almighty blow).

Genjutsu - While not nearly as amazing as her Taijutsu skills Tsubaki is well versed in simple disguise illusions aswell as illusions used to alter the perception of her target. She can't make complex powerful mind bending illusions but she can use illusions to help make a target more comfortable and compliant while she uses him for information or chakra. This also means however that she needs to have already drained a little bit in order to maintain illusions strong enough to keep her enemy distracted so she normally only pulls these out when she's already in a grappling situation of some kind.

Ninjutsu - When it comes to Ninjutsu the only advantage Tsubaki has is her talent with draining the chakra of her targets aswell as her mastery of chakra control so as to use as little of her own energy as possible in a fight. She can use basic level ninja techniques but anything higher than genin level requires her to have already drained quite a bit from her opponent to use the techniques. This means that she basically forgoes ninjutsu in favor of standard Taijutsu or Genjutsu as they are a lot less wasteful of the energy she worked hard to obtain.

Other - Her elemental affinity is lightning as one would expect which she likes to combine with her grapples, making for a dangerous fight when she has a grip of her enemy. Along with physical contact she can also drain chakra from a distance using her own bodily fluids as a medium using a technique called the 'hidden leech technique' though if an opponent either removes the fluid from their body or interrupts her channeling of the chakra they are safe. When absorbing chakra she can't take in too much or she might overload herself and pass out,thus she chooses to use upgraded physical skills or illusions to release some pent up energy. Also since I didn't know where to put it she can also drain chakra from one source and put it into another, allowing her to supply her allies in combat with chakra from her own supply if they are running low.

Etcetera: While she considers herself bi Tsubaki has only felt actual romantic feelings to women. She normally carries around a set of kunai on chains that she uses to help grapple her opponents (they are designed to help her drain chakra). Along with all that she also has a huge capacity for chakra, while she can't produce a lot on her own she is more than capable of absorbing and holding onto multiple ninja worth of chakra without overloading, showing she has the potential to be quite dangerous if she ever does learn other methods to get chakra.

((alright finally done, how does it look everybody?))


rachelongaku

Yay! Uh, so what exactly is going on right now? When are we starting?
Haven't been here in years but I'm in need of a good distraction!

Xain903

Indeed, I don't like having comfort zones since I pride myself in being able to play lots of different characters, so I decided I would get experience playing a flirty female character under fire, I think I'll do a good job though even if I've never played a character like her before.

Krayz

It looks good, Xain; we're getting ready to start with it :)

And Zaer, I'm sorry it has taken me so long to say it, but Dain is just fine.


Annie

Hmm, Krayz? Are we waiting for someone to post?

“Fairy Tales are more than true; not because they tell us that dragons exist, but because they tell us that dragons can be beaten.” - G. K. Chesterton

Elias