Dawn of the universe - looking for creative people

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Koekje

Imagine emptiness. A universe that is not only void of life, but also of the very essence of matter itself. Empty space without anything to fill it up. No people, animals, water, planets, asteroids, ... Not even cosmic dust. Now put a being in there. It has a voice, a mind, a body when it wants to and, most of all, it is bored. You put yourself in an infinitely big room of nothing, with nobody else to talk to and see how bored you get.

To stave off the horrible and excruciating pain that is boredom, this being started doing things. First of all, it gave itself a name: Menopsis. Then, it thought about how much effort it would take to amuse itself. It already faced its first dilemma: to be bored and full of energy, or to be amused but having to make an effort. Menopsis quickly thought of a solution: he needed minions.

Menopsis managed an action that it would later call a summoning sneeze, convorting its body in such a manner that it recoiled before sprucing free and breaking off energy from itself. The energy quickly manifests itself into different clouds of an essence that resembles that of Menopsis, but of an inferior quality. The entity that is Menopsis then created a mouth for itself and spoke the first words ever spoken in the empty universe, to the first entities that have been born.

"I am not entertained! Change that."

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You all play one of the minions born from Menopsis' body, and have been gifted with a lesser form of the power to create and imagine things into being. The universe is empty and it is up to you to fill it up with the things you want to. Go nuts, the more amusing the better. You might be rewarded by Menopsis and increase your powers, becoming more and more capable at creating things more complex and complicated.
He who acts honestly, hardly ever meets with trouble,
he who speaks honestly, hardly ever escapes trouble.
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LordRod

This looks awesome, but curious why you arent doing it as a play by post here? And ...since not, what format are you doing it in?
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Because its There - Sir Edmund Hillary

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Koekje

First of all thank you very much for the compliment and the post!

Secondly, the opening post was basically a little in the way of setting the theme of the game. Basically it will start as free form since everyone is basically just the aftermath of a giant god sneeze.

The trick and idea behind the game is that the players whom all start as unknown figures start creating and giving shape to the universe and its contents. The interesting part is that, just because of your individual choices what to create, will ultimately create your godlike persona.

Let's say that, after creating sentient beings, you give them the gift of drinkable water. Suddenly you could achieve this personal of the God of water. Others could decide to create the desert, for example. It makes people think about what to create and what to gift upon the sentient brings to create their own legacy, kind of like how the Greek gods of old had a main character but they had different appearances and behaviors. For example, Athina is the goddess of wisdom and of battle. On the other hand, Pallas Athena is a specific form of the goddess as the protector God of the city of Athens itself.

So we'd start out free form and when menopsis looks at your creations and approves, you'll slowly build up your profile.

The number one rule will be simple :without authorisation of Menopsis, you can not directly impact someone else's creation in a negative way. Like my earlier example, one may create water and someone may create the concept of a waterfall, which is okay. But you can not create something that would destroy the water, unless Menopsis agrees that the water must be destroyed.

It's so promote synergy and teamwork, inspiring each other and building upon each other's work. Not to bully others by attacking their creations. We're PC divine beings here! :D
He who acts honestly, hardly ever meets with trouble,
he who speaks honestly, hardly ever escapes trouble.
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Lord Zanicus


Koekje

Well, we've already got two people interested. If you guys feel like , we could already start up and get some visibility of the game on the board. People can always jump in, I mean, Menopsis is going to sneeze more :D

You two'd start creating and Menopsis shall be judging and approving. If you please him, you shall grow stronger and he might bestow titles upon you ,even a form. If you displease or bore him, Other things might happen. Ready to get creating?
He who acts honestly, hardly ever meets with trouble,
he who speaks honestly, hardly ever escapes trouble.
O'O's

kongo

so, storytelling or something else? Entertainment sounds like storytelling, especially if a God is involved. Since the God sneezed and then there were godlings there appears to be causality, so now we have two things, a hierarchy, and linear time. And really, nonlinear temporal determinism isn't quite as entertaining if your definition includes being surprised anyway... ;-)

Every heart must play its part...

Dys Astyr

I'm very interested in this if there is still room for more sneeze-lings.  ;D
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kongo

I hadn't heard back either, but I would think we have enough to start if the OP and respondents are still interested...

Oh sneezer, oh sneezer, where fore arte thou?

;-)

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Dys Astyr

All hail the might Schnoz, most worthy and supreme. Sneezer of life, the universe, and everything. Hear our pleas and bestow upon us your wisdoms.  ;D
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kongo

That should do it, but maybe also a giant box of tissue, just in case...

;-)

Every heart must play its part...

LordRod

Glory is being Great and being Useful - Simon Bolivar

Because its There - Sir Edmund Hillary

"The Lord of the Mans of Rod" - Me, spelling everything write and still getting the sentence wrong.

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Dys Astyr

Wonders if this is some sort of test or if that's overthinking it much... XD

The things my brain comes up with when left to its own devices... ::)

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LordRod

Glory is being Great and being Useful - Simon Bolivar

Because its There - Sir Edmund Hillary

"The Lord of the Mans of Rod" - Me, spelling everything write and still getting the sentence wrong.

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Lord Zanicus


kongo

All was in readiness as the godlings awaited the call of their master. Not yet fully formed, they were concepts, abstractions, ideas. But above all, they were, they existed, they willed. And as they waited, creation began to form around them...
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Dys Astyr

Pokes at the forming creations, unintentionally dislodging a bit and watching it float aimlessly in the void.

Pokes the rouge bit of creation, sending it warbling back toward the amorphis gunk from whence it came.
Alive! Trying to catch up but there is a lot, please be patient! Thank you. <3

LordRod

Causes the number 42 to be highlit with a large number of sparrows, coconuts, twinkies and ninjas.
Glory is being Great and being Useful - Simon Bolivar

Because its There - Sir Edmund Hillary

"The Lord of the Mans of Rod" - Me, spelling everything write and still getting the sentence wrong.

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Dys Astyr

Makes tiny headwreaths of destruction for the sparrows and organizes them into a military force.
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kongo

I think we just skipped ahead about a billion years, but whenever...;-)

"Perhaps a nice place to play with our new toys", one of the beings blew into the primordial ooze and a large cookie sheet appeared next to a floating oven from which the interesting shaped creations were emerging from. There were shapes to make the sparrows, coconuts, twinkles and ninjas, along with their regalia. She motioned to the cookie sheet and the promodial ooze rollered itself on and flattened. Tiny sou-chef minions appeared and cut the dough into additional shapes that looked like rocks, trees and shrubberies. "This is going to take forever," she said, thinking on the new concept of waiting, "I don't like it." She shrugged and waved her hand (?) and the oven and the shapes and the chefs all went back into the goo. "Just a place then," she sighed and a world formed made of chocolate chip cookie dough, with a sign reading, "Available For Lease."

"So bored," she though as her long silver locks dipped in the goo, "Can we play now?"

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LordRod

"Apparently we must wait for the arrival of lemon soaked paper napkins."
Glory is being Great and being Useful - Simon Bolivar

Because its There - Sir Edmund Hillary

"The Lord of the Mans of Rod" - Me, spelling everything write and still getting the sentence wrong.

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Dys Astyr

If only the celestial lemons would align and make such a thing possible.

Creates a lemony altar and inexplicably leaves offerings of toast and bay leaves. Sits before the altar, chanting.

Lemoooooommmhhhhhhnnnnnnnnn
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kongo

"Yes, they are so very tastey," she said as she brought a basket of lemons and set them on the alter...

"Of course, these are only the scale models, bigger is always better, or so I've been told," she winked at the others and sat down on the alter steps, adjusting her skirts to cover her feet, "Propriety...should we keep that one?" She mused to herself.
Every heart must play its part...

Dys Astyr

Wails forlornly in the Void, the sound echoing and rippling in the emptiness before shattering into myriad pieces. Each piece, takes on life of its own, flickering across the formless depths. Mercurial things, bodies sharp and reflective like mirror shards, they dance across the Void reflecting the Fires of Creation searching for the Great Sneezer.
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kongo

"It seems," said the girl, obviously bored with the proceedings thus far, "that our benefactor has chosen to ignore us thus far." She moved over to the newly created table, loaded up with various pastries, donuts and tasty beverages, picking up a small raisin bran muffin. "I propose we begin and when they arrive we can catch them up," she winked at the others and took a bite.
"I am rather partial to time myself, so I think I will call myself 'Wink'," she said as some sand landed on her head from a slightly leaky hour glass that had appeared over her head, "Pleased to meet you all," she winked.
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Dys Astyr

I'm going to put on my serious hat for a moment. Would it be rude to message Koekje and see what's going on? I don't want to just steal his story idea, even if it is with the intention of still playing it with him. I still really love this (obviously), and want it to happen but I don't want to be the crazy person that won't stop harrassing the GM... XD
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kongo

I was thinking about that too. I was hoping the thread activity would stimulate a response, but perhaps it really is an orphan? Please message and let us know what you find out... :-)

Xoxoxo

K~

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Koekje

Covers his mouth from the activity and interest in the thread

Oh bless my lucky 8 pointed stars and thank the four gods of Chaos... I never imagined this turnout. At all. First of all, thank you so very much for being interested in this idea. I'm super flattered by the responses and the eagerness in wanting to try this out.

Secondly, allow me to apologize from the deepest of my being. I have had a terrible time at work and all my free time, energy and happiness have been sucked in there for the several past weeks and even month. Sorries!

I have, however, finished a couple of assignments that should give me more time to spare to squander on Elliquiy, so ...

I guess what I'm trying to say is ... please be my little sneezelings and snotlings and lets get this show on the road? :)
He who acts honestly, hardly ever meets with trouble,
he who speaks honestly, hardly ever escapes trouble.
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Dys Astyr

Dances excitedly with all the little mirror-beings at the return of the Great Sneezer.

Huzzah! It's time to boogie! Snickers at the bad pun

Alive! Trying to catch up but there is a lot, please be patient! Thank you. <3

kongo

Finally, the sound of a trumpet, or perhaps a kazoo, could be heard in the distance - announcing the return of the source of all stuff(iness). "Antihistamines all around!" Wink shouted, above the din. She shook some goo off her hat, thought better of it, and tossed it aside. Tucking a curl of blond hair behind her ear she turned to face the music, such that it was, and smiled a slightly crooked smile...
Every heart must play its part...

Koekje

So, before we kick off the IC game thread thingamajig where you get to do the creating, how about a role call? How many participating sneezes and snotlings do we have here? :D

It'll also help for posting orders and such!
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he who speaks honestly, hardly ever escapes trouble.
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Dys Astyr

Explodes into waffles and gooey strawberry topping.

I mean... Here. >_>
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kongo

Wynx rolls her eyes and does a hair flip, "Here m'lord..."
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Koekje

What would you say that we open up the universe with the current and present snotlings, so they can start creating and allow new sneezelings to join later on, even perhaps going as far as to split off from an existing and more defined character?

This way we can start filling up everything for our lord, God and mighty sneezer? :)
He who acts honestly, hardly ever meets with trouble,
he who speaks honestly, hardly ever escapes trouble.
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Dys Astyr

Alive! Trying to catch up but there is a lot, please be patient! Thank you. <3

kongo

Every heart must play its part...

Koekje

https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=268746.0 In character thread is up, so we can start creating! Woo!

There shall be no fixed posting rate, but give each other the time to do their own creating before making new things yourself. Menopsis shall judge and comment, but there's no need to wait until he responds.

If you worry about your creation being too big or too comprehensive, discuss it in this thread or message me and we can discuss things.

Now lets be good little sneezelings!
He who acts honestly, hardly ever meets with trouble,
he who speaks honestly, hardly ever escapes trouble.
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Lord Zanicus

I'm still interested in this! Can I still join the ride? Although my reply may be late a day or two...

kongo

I wouldn't think so friend, we've only just begun... ;-)

"Mighty Sneezer, another sneezling wishes to create," Winx announced with a rather impish grin and a large megaphone...

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Dys Astyr

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Koekje

He who acts honestly, hardly ever meets with trouble,
he who speaks honestly, hardly ever escapes trouble.
O'O's

Dys Astyr

Zanicus, if you want to post next don't worry about me. :D Things have left me in a dark humor and I don't want to drag down the wonderful tone we've got going.
Alive! Trying to catch up but there is a lot, please be patient! Thank you. <3

Lord Zanicus

Oh don't you worry about me! My week have been very demanding as well and I'm not being dragged down one bit! So take your time! *smiles*

kongo

And hopefully my posts aren't taking things too seriously, just me thinking through the cyclical nature of things and how it might evolve in such a universe. Our lord is certainly capable of squishing anything that gets too snotty... ;-)

Every heart must play its part...

Koekje

I have plenty of tissues in case a snotling needs repressing :p

Take your time, everyone. No need to push yourself, it's meant to be light and fun!
He who acts honestly, hardly ever meets with trouble,
he who speaks honestly, hardly ever escapes trouble.
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Dys Astyr

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kongo

Oooh, remember that green slime stuff from way back when? "Light and fun," as the kids dripped ooze all over everything...maybe rubber gloves and handcuffs for major cleanups? Whoops, wrong forum... ;-)

She snort-laughs and grabs one of the offered tissues, "Thanks, I guess they come in handy after all...
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Koekje

I remember those little plastic toy toilets with the green slimies in them to play with
He who acts honestly, hardly ever meets with trouble,
he who speaks honestly, hardly ever escapes trouble.
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kongo

I thought maybe they came out when Ghostbusters did, cause I saw them in little green trash cans... :-)

Winx grabs a green trash can from under a table, "A place for the tissues and the issues..."
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Desirable Outcome


kongo

Winx drys her eyes on a tissue and sniffs, her usually clear amethyst eyes now red-rimmed and swollen, "I'm so sorry Ms. Outcome, but our snotmaster hasn't seen your latest message," she sniffs again, "It's just not the same around here without all the snots, and waiting just isn't my strong suit."

Well, Winx thinks you should come on board in any case, so hopefully this post will bump up the thread. The IC thread is getting a bit dusty as well...SNOT MASTER, WHERE BE THOU?!?!?!



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RegularRaskolnikov

It seems pretty slow in here, but I would definitely be interested in hopping in. Space and time have barely been created! This seems like a lot of fun! I don't want to just jump in without asking anyone, though.
I simply did something that I was too stupid to realize I couldn't do.

https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=79577.0
((ons and offs because I cannot make hide nor hair of this internet sorcery))

Dys Astyr

I'm still alive. I've just been running around like a lunatic and haven't had much time to write. I'm cool with more people joining. ;D
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kongo

Every heart must play its part...

Wanderlost

This really is a fascinating role play. Mind if I join in?

Dys Astyr

I think we are all open to getting some fresh blood and energy in the mix Wanderlost. ;D
Alive! Trying to catch up but there is a lot, please be patient! Thank you. <3

Angi

I am very interested if there are still spots open?

kongo

"Oh yes, be that player!!!", she hoped happily as she thought of new things to make in the to-be universe...

Every heart must play its part...

kongo

"It's so quiet here," Winx looked around, hoping to find some more snots in the lobby, "I think I'll go cause some trouble in the story..." and she poofed off...
Every heart must play its part...

hexidecima

This sounds life fun. I would like to join in, if it is possible. Creation is a wonderful thing.

kongo

"Yes, Yes, Yes!" Winx shouts, "Please join our fun!"

Every heart must play its part...

Wanderlost

Mm. Yeah. Too much time between posts for me, and even so, I'm struggling to keep up with my writing with my current involvement, so I'll have to retract my interest.

Have fun though!

kongo

Winx makes a boo-boo face, then smiles. "No worries friend," she says, changing her outfit into a scintillating dress of green silk and emeralds, "I'm hoping more of the snots return to the roost..."

Every heart must play its part...