The Gentle Man

Started by Jagaan, November 09, 2010, 10:31:32 PM

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Jagaan

Gotten through all the real life problems , and now back on this site.

I started this RP , with someone else , however they could not continue it. I will post the first chapter here , and if interested please pm/reply.   

Its set in Old England , though we could change that to pretty much anything. ( Any country , something fantasy etc)

Also the girl does have to be innocent and all that. That's just the first impression. She could be anything you want.

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She was stunning. Absolutely stunning. What's worse ...she did not even realize it ! Jack wouldn't assume to know the girl ... but she seemed the extraordinarily shy , innocent type.

Jack Tlfager ..or Lord Jack ... if you wanted all that formality. He had been home for about five months ...bored. He , and  Charles had spent three years fighting in the Crimean War , against Russia. They both separated ways when they reached England. Charles going to the country , where his family estate was and Jack going to London , where his family had many manors and estates.

Charles family had the "old money" , and were full of culture and tradition. His families were many time more well off though he in particular did not care much for that stuff.

He had come to Charles manor , for some sort of ball , he forgot the occasion. He didn't exactly socialize like he should ... that made some people sour! He had planned to leave right away ... but that's when he laid his eyes on the beautiful girl. The ball was over now , the servants cleaning and Charles saying his goodbyes. Light green eyes alert , he was hopeful that he could catch a glimpse of her again.