The Story of O (interest Check)

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Secretwriter

Male, Trainer: 1
Female, Trainer: 0
either gender, Trainer: 0
male, submissive: 0
female, submissive: 2
either gender, submissive: 0
Male, either role: 0
Female, either role: 0
any: 0

I'll post a character later, I'm still on the fence on whether I want to play in this game. I'm kind of lurking more than I'm piping up.

Secret's Bio | Tanja's Bio


I see hell in your eyes. Taken in by surprise. And touching you makes me feel alive.

♦ Kitty's Brain ♥ Pockets's Lucky Charm ♥ Doom Cookie Monster ♥ Shade's Spanking Machine ♥ Najdan's Sinful Little Devil ♦

Missy

#76
So here's the latest update.

I'm working on providing descriptions for each of the areas represented by the threads we will have and the number of threads we might be using for general areas seems to be multiplying. So far it looks like this:

Manor (General) -- this will allow us to create new rooms in the communal areas on the fly if we find an idea for a room we hadn't made up before, if it becomes popular we can create a new thread for that room
Library (Communal Floors)
Entry Hall (Communal Floors)
Gymn and Fitness Center (Communal Floors)
Dining Room and Kitchen (Communal Floors)
Cell Blocks (Lower Floor) -- prison style accommodations for slaves
Slave's Quarters (Lower Floor) -- barracks style accommodations for slaves
Dungeon (Lower Floor)
Suites x# of trainers (Upper Floors)
Grounds (General)
The Cottage (Grounds) -- I had a random idea for a cottage on a far side of the manor grounds. It could be interesting since it would allow for a pair to set up a private scene in an alternate setting.

At this point I have a lot of ideas I just have to get them all down in text (it's on the machine, not paper!)

Here's what I've worked out so far, soon I'll have a description fro each locale and I'll be able to go ahead and edit these to make them look pretty.

Quote from: Manor (General)The Manor (General)
In a seccluded part of the countryside lies the Manor. Home to the "Made for the Mansion" program, which offers an authentic slave experience to consenting individuals. The Manor itself is quite spacious and sits on even more expansive grounds. The Manor can be divided into three general areas.

The first and second floors are primarily communal areas with a number of rooms which can be used for a variety of purposes. Particularly notable rooms in this area include: the Main Entry Hall in the front of the house, the Library with it's extensive collection of books both BDSM and otherwise and the Gym and Fitness Center with it's variety of exercise equipment, tennis courts and olympic full size pool. Other rooms in the communal areas include the game room with it's pool, foozeball and pong tables, and the Kitchen and Dining Room. These, however, are just a few of the rooms available in the Manors communal area.

The upper floors include the trainers suites, each trainer has his or her own private suite which he or she may decorate however he or she likes, in general each suite is made up of four adjacent rooms with each of the rooms having a door to two of the other four rooms of the suite. One of the four rooms in each suite is a bathroom and windows line the walls of the rooms adjacent to the outer wall, while one of the rooms adjacent to the suite hallways has a hall door. The slaves are not permitted to enter the upper floors without permission or without being instructed to by their trainer those who do so are subject to discipline by their trainer. This is not to say slaves do not often visit the upper floors however, either with their trainers or on instructions to proceed upstairs a time decided upon by his or her trainer.

The lower floor is made up of the slave's quarters and cell blocks, and the dungeon. Unlike the upper floors any privacy offered on the lower floor is an illusion, whether in the prison-style cell blocks or the barracks style slave quarters though all neccessary amenities are provided those which are not communal are not hidden from the view of others either. Additionally most amenities can be restricted by the trainers at any time, hot shower water must be turned on and showers can be deactivated, toilets can be locked and all switches can only be altered using a key which only the trainers hold. All amenities in the lower floor are strictly under the control of the trainers, the slaves can no more turn the lights on or off than they can walk through the bars at the cell and barracks doors. Irregardless of the strictly controlled spartanistic conditions of the lower floor the entire floors temperature is strictly controlled to be comfortable on bare skin and red panic buttons are placed at strategic points throughout the lower floor should any of the submissives find themselves in an emergency situation. The final feature of the lower floor is the large dungeon, equipped with an extensive collection of bondage and restraining devices as well as an assortment of whips and floggers and the like. In the dungeon, even the most experienced fetishist is likely to come across something he or she has not heard of before.

Quote from: Gym and Fitness Center (Communal Floors) -- to be rewritten
Gym and Fitness Center (Main Floors)
In addition to the many other amenities the manor offers is the two story gym and fitness center attached to the mansion. It's upper floor is directly adjacent to the trainers suits and its ground floor has a stone stairway leading down to the opposite end of the slave quarters from the the kitchen stairway. The gym offers a variety of fitness equipment for a variety of workout types from strength to cardio and general fitness. Additionally the fitness center offers a running track a full size basketball court and an olympic sized pool. Outside, directly adjacent to the fitness center, are two full sized tenis courts. The fitness center is available for the trainers to use 24/7 or available to put any of the slaves on an exercise program.

I plan on rewriting the Gym and Fitness center with much greater detail, but aside from some editing the General manor description should be fine I think.

Please post any constructive critique on this and please post any suggestions for rooms to be added to the communal areas (or anywhere else), I've never been inside a mansion so I can't imagine what they must do with all of those rooms, haha!

One more thing I thought we might make it an option to place your submissive character in either barracks style accommodations, the Slave's Quarters, or in prison style accommodations, the Cell Blocks. Sound good to you folks?

If you have any further suggestions, remember: there are no bad ideas.

Montagne

Also, are people looking for this to go in the Ex category, Rather than the Bondage category?

I think it would be a good idea as this just allows for all eventualities. As it may get quite extreme depending on personal preferences of the players involved, and if one group wants to step out of the realm of normal lighter bondage then we don't need to split their section to a different board without the other players.

Missy

I didn't really want to get too extreme to be honest. I mean I don't mind light to moderate S/M, but too heavy is not my thing. It's up to the group really.

Secretwriter

I think that it should stay in Bondage. Honestly when it comes to group games like this and what the deeper kinks can be - if you want bestiality or severe blood/knife play then the people should make a 1x1 game.  I don't mean that to sound bitchy, but not everyone has the same tastes. They shouldn't be forced on others and things get read accidentally.

And... as I write that... I'm pulling out again. I just have the unsettling feeling that I'm not going to be happy in this setting as a group game, especially one with this much interest and so many different opinions.  I'm very set in my opinions and what I know about BDSM, the rules involved, and the like.  See you all around, maybe do a game with one or two of you sometime.  I just don't want to end up with yet another messed up character because I'm looking for caring D/s where limits are pushed and not 'whips and chains, you're a slut!!! WHORE! Scum on the bottom of my shoe!!!' style BDSM.  What the short clips of most of the Kink.com videos don't show is the end result where the submissives are sitting there with the Dominants, talking about the experience. Even in hard core BDSM porn the girls still get asked if they're okay and sometimes depending on the porn if they want to keep going. 

Maybe I'm just paranoid but I don't know anyone in this group enough to extend that leap of faith and I hope that I've not offended anyone. That isn't and never was my goal.  I hope the game goes well for you all. :-)


Secret's Bio | Tanja's Bio


I see hell in your eyes. Taken in by surprise. And touching you makes me feel alive.

♦ Kitty's Brain ♥ Pockets's Lucky Charm ♥ Doom Cookie Monster ♥ Shade's Spanking Machine ♥ Najdan's Sinful Little Devil ♦

Montagne

 ;D Fair enough SecretWriter.

I think if we are going to go for a style of setting, as we are playing with people willingly coming to the manor, rather than people being forced to stay there. SecretWriter describes quite well the sort of BDSM "style" we should be trying to achieve. Although what people want in there scenes is basically up to them, and those who want to play rough and those who want to play nice should say and be paired up accordingly. Possible something else to be put into the character sheet MCsc? What experience the slave came for and what experience the master specializes in, then people can choose appropriately their partners. The Ex idea was just to allow for covering more bases, but I see your points.

Okay, so keeping it Bondage as is then.

Kyra Q

I think it would be best to keep it in Bondage as well.  On a personal level I don't mind NC, but as the original post was about a number of individuals paying to be trained as submissives, everything being done to them should be consensual.  Personally i would say unless the character (through the player) had requested something very intense, it should remain pretty firmly in the safe sane and consensual areas of play.


by the way:
Male, Trainer: 1
Female, Trainer: 0
either gender, Trainer: 0
male, submissive: 0
female, submissive: 3
either gender, submissive: 0
Male, either role: 0
Female, either role: 0
any: 0

I didn't subtract secretwriter.  Also, I'll post a character when other people start doing so, or when an ooc thread is started...?

subjuanita

I would think since this would be primarily a collection of 1 on 1 role plays, with occasional group plays that it be made EX. That way those who want to play EX in 1 on 1 can, and those who don't would not. It just keeps the option open for those that do. For the group play, I think we should keep it in BON so as to not offend anyone.

I added myself to the list..

Male, Trainer: 1
Female, Trainer: 0
either gender, Trainer: 0
male, submissive: 0
female, submissive: 4
either gender, submissive: 0
Male, either role: 0
Female, either role: 0
any: 0

Montagne

https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=116294.0

The place to vote on the name of the game, and also post your characters. We can use this place as a sorta OOC chat for ideas whilst we get the players together.

Missy

Quote from: Red Doctor on August 12, 2011, 05:11:22 AM
Possible something else to be put into the character sheet MCsc? What experience the slave came for and what experience the master specializes in

Already done:

QuotePlayer:
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Ethnicity/Nationality:
Appearance:
Personality:
Fetish Experience: characters experience in fetish
Role: Trainer or slave
Sexual Orientation: gay, straight or bi
Interests:
Limitations:
Other:
Player Notes:

Montagne

#85
Oh right, by that I thought you were referring to how much BDSM the character has done, so like new to it or 5 years experience. That makes more sense now.

I'm going to stick my character up tonight Hopefully.

Missy

Quote from: Red Doctor on August 13, 2011, 02:54:39 PM
Oh right, by that I thought you were referring to how much BDSM the character has done, so like new to it or 5 years experience. That makes more sense now.

I'm going to stick my character up tonight Hopefully.

Well yes, but when you combine that with Interests and Limitations you get a better idea of how the characters fit together.

I should probably write up a character to show everyone how that was supposed to be designed. Then everyoen might be able to understand it a little better and offer some critique perhaps.

Interested

Player: Interested
Name: James Canner
Age: 18 years old
Gender: Male
Ethnicity/Nationality: Caucasian, American
Appearance: brown hair, green eyes, slim, suave looking
Personality: James is interested in experiencing his sexuality through exploration. The reason why he came to O is to find a way to deal with a tremendous amount of stress in his life. He likes to have fun and just relax.
Fetish Experience: ballbusting, and face sitting with women, giving fellatio with men, Jake wants his trainers to instruct him on how to relieve stress through giving sexual gratification. On the light side of the experience, Jake wants to experience the relief of giving pleasure for his own fun, but Jake also wants to experience very heavy BDSM related experiences with women for purposes of being disciplined and developing a high pain threshold. Being humiliated turns him on.
Role: Slave
Sexual Orientation: Bisexual
Interests: Very heavily into Art and music and deep thinking.
Limitations: Jake hates pegging although he'll allow a guy to give him soft anal sex.
Other:
Player Notes: