(M 4 F) I need a brat! (Taken)

[Brokk]

Taken

I need a bratty character to torture mine throughout the centuries. Make him regret ever meeting her.

I enjoy dark themes, broken characters and tortured souls. I love to read and write rich and vivid detail. I like my smut the same way and I'm more than happy to build my OC to be compatible with many kinks as long as it fits within the story. All characters are 18+. I would prefer my writing partner to be 25+, but it's more about the writing than the age. I prefer posts to be in the range of 600-1000 words multiple times/week. I will sometimes write up to 1500 or go down to 400 as the scene needs it.

I crafted this writing sample over a year ago as a way of demonstrating that I could write something sensual and erotic, flirting at the edge of smut, without crossing the boundary. However, like many authors I found myself wondering about the rest of the story. What happened to them after that? I want to know.  I need to know. Will you help me to explore their story and where it takes them?

Writing Sample

The gentle scent of incense wafted through the air of the bedroom. Its fragrance always reminded him of his earliest lessons in spellcasting when he was just a child, 100 years ago. His passionate dark eyes and youthful face clashed with the experiences and memories of over a century of living. Looking downward his gaze fell to the creamy skin of the sole occupant of the bed before him. The sheets and blankets were scattered about in a haphazard display as if some frantic battle for dominance had taken place not long ago in this very spot. Her body lay across the bed as if it were a perfect porcelain statue, displayed in a sensual pose. One's eyes would be drawn to the hills and valleys, the curves of which were smooth and voluptuous and seemed to beg to be touched and caressed. Any thoughts that this perfect creature was in fact a statue would be shattered by the sight of her heaving bosom, practically panting from her recent exertions and the slick sheen of sweat which covered her naked body.

The man himself was in a similar state. The hair on his head was matted with his own sweat, sticking to his forehead and dripping slowly down his face. The rippling muscles of his chest were clearly visible as it rose and fell with his own ragged breathing brought on by his exertions that night. The two of them had been at it for several hours so far and both were clearly showing signs of exhaustion. He had finally given in to his body's need for a short break in order to recover before beginning again.

Stepping over to a nearby table he carefully lifted a cool metal pitcher that contained water and poured himself a generous glassful, which he drank from greedily, replacing precious liquids to his body to help it recover and prepare for another round with this this gorgeous example of perfection laying on the bed and awaiting more of his attention.

He stepped up, close to the bed, gathering his mental and physical energies, preparing once more to do what was needed in seeking his satisfaction. He carefully inspected the silver manacles with their runic inscriptions glowing softly.

The demoness finally turned to face him with a hiss, spitting out her words at him. “You bastard, you will regret this. Summoning me here and chaining me down was your worst mistake in your life. I will never agree to your terms. I would rather die than become your servant”

Warlock and Demoness (Shadow Hunters world, no CC)

In my writing sample, I had the battle of wills, the conclusion inevitable. It was a non-consensual binding of souls to make her his slave.

What I wanted was for her to work with him to complete jobs. Indentured servant, forced labor, however you wish to view it. It was all business to him. A way to thrive and grow by making his services stronger and more diverse. It wasn't done for sexual reasons. Purely business.

I want her to hate it.  Enslaved against her will, two immortals tied together. The binding prevents her from harming him or his business and she would need to protect him from any threat she was aware of. Otherwise she has free will in how she goes about things, but of course, he still has a leash, though his prefers not to use it. He treats her like a partner, unless she refuses or fights him too much, then he can use the leash to compel her cooperation.

She would be a constant presence in his life. Day to day, they would go on jobs, both magic users of similar strength, there is overlap in their skills, but his are purely arcane/spell craft. Hers are more innate. I pictured her more as a succubus. Flaunting her body and flirting with everyone. Teasing my character, tempting him, but it was all torture. She has power over arousal and seduction, she could force him into sex, or leave him cold and alone. Her skills are useful for getting people to cooperate, get information, mind control even at a certain level.

My character thought of her as a demon. A beast.  Something to be summoned and controlled. He never expected her. She is gorgeous, every man's dream and she hates him. From early on he begins to doubt what he has done. She is sentient, with feelings, vulnerabilities, a life and family he forced her to abandon. It causes him to feel like a monster sometimes. It is all this that make him reluctant to force her or use the leash. Hasn't he done enough already to her?

While all of that is my preference, I'm willing to make a number of changes to tame things down and hopefully make it more balanced depending on what my partner wants out of this.


For example:

A warlock summons a female demoness to serve him like an indentured servant. It would allow him to draw on her power, effectively doubling his own as well as having a second person with different skills, making him much more valuable to hire for jobs.

He summons her into a circle where she is trapped. He negotiates with her, but won't release her until she agrees, regardless how long the process takes.

The contract has her serving for 100 missions in return for her release. She is bound to immediately answer his summons and each time she will serve him until the mission is completed. If she fails the mission, then she is sent back and 5 additional missions are added to her contract. (providing impetus to succeed)

If she refuses to follow his orders, he can threaten to declare her mission a failure and send her back as punishment. He would be able to track her while she is on a mission. If she consents, he can tap into her power during a mission and vice versa.

This part is negotiable. I would love her to be adversarial in a way that is always pushing his boundaries. I want the experience to be unpleasant for him in such a way that he is reluctant to call upon her and he is left wondering what he got himself into and if it is really worth it.

Both characters are immortal and I expect them to grow and change through the centuries, establishing a close bond, although both deny it. It's a broken sort of relationship, that can still be as caring and tender as we want, or rough and abusive if that is preferred.  It's really very open.


Alternative option. He negotiates with her demon father and she is sent off with him for (whatever condition or time) without any choice in the matter, like an arranged marriage. This would still allow for that conflict/tension between them, but she would be a constant presence in his life rather than summoned when he has need. His "threat", to keep her in line would be her refusal to follow his directions would be viewed as breaking the contract and her father would be very upset with her (think eternal punishment).

I am open to playing either role as well as flipping genders around. To me it's about the conflict and push/pull of the characters with each other.


The missions would vary and give the characters adventures to go on and a chance to work together cooperatively. The amount and type of smut is completely open to discussion. This story can be dark, twisted and non-consensual, or more light-hearted, adventurous and fluffy. I expect the relationship between the characters to be complicated. Past partners have used a succubus character, but it's not required. I think it just adds a useful twist towards the smut angle.

Feel free to PM me if you are interested.  I can play this on forums or in discord. My O/O is in the footer of this message.